Swasan FF : Zephyr vs Tempest ( Chapter 30; P-71)

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elsanna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#431

At last got time to read awesome updates😆

Read chapter 20...

So these guys are planning for bomb blasts😲 woh bhi in 13 countries...

Nymph bose... Sanskaar choice as always best😎...loved swasan flirting...

Tani

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elsanna

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Chapter 21...

Hahahahaha..bechari swara jalan ki khushboo yahan tak aa rahi hai...🤣

So their plan for India failed... all thanks to swasan and u😛

It's getting more interesting update by update😉

Tani

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elsanna

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Chapter 22...

Totally loved it...but I didn't understand why did swara went to central premises😕

But I know he will surely save her...

Tani

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: elsanna
Chapter 22...
Totally loved it...but I didn't understand why did swara went to central premises😕

But I know he will surely save her...

Tani

Dear Tani,
At last your exams are over! I hope you did well. And thanks to my work load and two updates, you could catch up easily! Next chapter will be a bit tricky for me.There's a huge risk the mission's end may look illogical. I hope you're liking Swara's various shades... blushing Swara... Flirty Swara... Tensed Swara... Jealous Swara... Dumbo but Bold Swara... Poor Sanskar must need a very strong heart to love her!

Love,
Dyuti

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Res for 22

Finally unres (huffing and puffing). I think we are slowly gearing up for the final showdown.
The Black wolves have been quite badly beaten, physicallyand ego wise, and are not exactly capable of very rational thought or planning (but this could mean that they are desperate, and that is never good news).


Pandora - as guessed, she is part of the black wolves, is she dead or simply wounded and ready to strike back, deadlier than before.




On the other hand, we have exactly what I was afraid of - brave foolish Swara (as a writer, it is very understandable, though the reader in me is absolutely livid - how can she confuse foolhardinesswith bravery😡😡😡, at times sitting on the sidelines requires far greater courage than jumping into the thick of things, especially when one has is not adequately equipped.



And yet, would this confrontation between Swara and Sanskaar lead to the much awaited confession?


I am guessing the next chapter will have lots of fireworks - all kinds of them.


love,
Nyna

Dear Nyna,
Huffing and puffing! Exactly my state! I have a series of updates to unres that includes yours too! I guess after typING those mega updates and other life responsibilities we had to push them back on the priority list.

About your predictions I would like to say... some of them are going to be wrong... one thing I can reveal, the final showdown isn't happening any soon... Even if I'd love to lighten my load and spare you guys... but really don't want to rush and ruin the ending. Fireworks and confessions... Let's wait and see...

Love,
Dyuti

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Sharon

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Chapter 5 ZvT

Hi Dyuti,

A logical process given that Sanskaar is an undercover agent and Swara a practicing doctor.

As a man on mission, Sanskaar has everything planned out. Swara must be terrified to know that her uncle and she were a muse between the good and evil.

Ragini and Laksh segment was nice. Ragini is jealous of Swara for the attention she captured.

The ending takes the cake once again. The chief is sinking into the coma, or is it part if Sanskaar's plan?

Moving on to next chapter.

Cheers

Sharon

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Chapter 5 ZvT

Hi Dyuti,

A logical process given that Sanskaar is an undercover agent and Swara a practicing doctor.

As a man on mission, Sanskaar has everything planned out. Swara must be terrified to know that her uncle and she were a muse between the good and evil.

Ragini and Laksh segment was nice. Ragini is jealous of Swara for the attention she captured.

The ending takes the cake once again. The chief is sinking into the coma, or is it part if Sanskaar's plan?

Moving on to next chapter.

Cheers
Sharon

Dear Sharon,
Whenever you guys do the reviews of old chapters, I feel a bit nostalgic of the initial shaky days of me as a writer. 😊 Both endearing and embarrassing situation for me. 😳
For Swara it was terrifying. The play will get more convoluted with surrounding situation and changing equations of between the good and the evil. And after few parts, the length of each chapter will increase too It's an Swasan FF so they'll have their own story...

You've chapters waiting for you... I think I don't need to reveal anything.
Loads of love,
Dyuti

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: RAONE8
Awesome update!!!

Continue sooon

Thanks for your lovely response! 😊 BTW what's your name?

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Dear girls, this time posting the story was emotional for me as the situation in my own city was not good. Though it has cooled down... Still we are shocked and saddened by the death and casualties... And tribute to our Police force and Army who lay their lives for the safety of common citizens... Only for them right now we're having peaceful sleep. So here's my chapter 23

CHAPTER 23

25th December, 8.40 p.m.

About several metres afar from the outer circumference of the C shaped concrete structure,the central premise of Water Welkins was situated, whereas a huge round artificial fountain was adding grace to the architectural vigor of the whole complex. Surrounding the entire stepped boundary there was stream of bright sodium lights and in the middle there was a beautiful, illuminated mermaid statue, made of marble. Unlike any other day, tonight the road near it had turned into a mini parking lot. Around 20 cars were parked so closely that someone could walk or run over them.

The guests from the hotel were coming out, buzzing with curiosity. As soon as they reached almost near the cars a cheery yet deep male voice resonated loudly around the atmosphere. While seeking the source of the voice the gathering noticed a standing silhouette inside a blue Lamborghini Huracan with its sunroof panel folded inside,parked on the front most row. The guy had a microphone in his hand, leaning against the windshield casually, his other hand was placed inside his pocket.
"Ladies and gentlemen. It's almost time to call it a night. But before that please enjoy the last performance of Christmas...PLEASE WELCOME THE BIRDS OF PREY!"

After his announcement the presenter guy stepped aside and hopped down from the car , making his way for a petite figure,who sat on the bonnet of another car, a crimson Chevrolet corvette. On the lap of the person was placed a Gibson SG 60s tribute, a 2.9 kg cherry red electric guitar, one of the lightest babies in the Gibson family. The guitarist caressed its raunchy vintage gloss' nitrocellulose finish and strung the jack across the chords using fingers of the right hand... a maddeningly fast, sensuous acoustic music played... spraying the intoxication of music among the crowd who were already more or less under the effect of alcohol...In the meantime few more musicians joined, some with their guitars, few guys were seen to fix a portable mini drum kit with a generator and the outdoor speakers, then finally stepped back only to leave the drummer on the spot...

Kiara and the other agents surfed through the crowd to watch out for any other remaining possible threats... She could see whole area was surrounded by the agents and police in the getup of civilians. She made her way to the front... As soon as other guitarists started to join the acoustic chorus, the lead guitarist put down the Gibson...carried by two young man in black to the front row... the petite figure in black faux leather biker jacket, red crop top and slate ripped jeans turned in slow motion to face the audience ...

Her spellbinding, sultry, hazel eyes seemed more intense by smudged black kohl eyeliner, giving effect of smokey eye makeup over the eyelids. Her lips had ruby red lipstick applied on them, her waist length brunette locks were tied up in a high up slick ponytail. She held the hand mike with her hands and sang the lyrics making the crowd to cheer for her further... The man behind the drum too joined in this crazy fest of open air music..

Come on, come on, turn the radio on
It's Friday night and I won't be long
Gotta do my hair, I put my make up on
It's Friday night and I won't be long...

"SWARA! What the hell she is doing here?" Kiara noticed the surrounding, "And MD, RS ( Ryan Sowden)... Jesus! " She made the phone call to her husband at once, fretting over this foolishly brave girl's safety and at the same time Sanskar's probable reaction...

Til I hit the dance floor
Hit the dance floor
I got all I need
No I ain't got cash
No I ain't got cash
But I got you baby

"Damn it!" Someone inside the crowd hit his fist on his other hand in frustration. This sudden programme announcement has destroyed the chance of massive number of people to die inside the hotel as they have intended to. He looked back only to notice the hotel which had all of its lights out. He turned back at the musicians on the stage, his grey irises flickered in the sodium light. The lead singer was tapping her feet, gyrating her upper part and hips in matching the beats... His trained criminal mind suggested these musicians were nothing but a barrier for the Black wolves on behalf of their opposing side .

Baby I don't need dollar bills to have fun tonight
(I love cheap thrills!)
Baby I don't need dollar bills to have fun tonight
(I love cheap thrills!)
I don't need no money
As long as I can feel the beat
I don't need no money
As long as I keep dancing

Sanskar came out of the hotel like a madman... his eyes frantically searched for a beloved familiar face, instead he could hear that enticing familiar voice singing a peppy dance number... He looked forward and his eyes widened in surprise...

Come on, come on, turn the radio on
It's Saturday and I won't be long
Gotta paint my nails, put my high heels on
It's Saturday and I won't be long

Sanskar's Nymph, Dr Swara Bose was looking like a seductive pop diva in a biker jacket, effortlessly moving over the cars and her usual fluidly voice had an added rough edge this night... She rhythmically moved backwards, gestured as if she were luring Mike . But she dodged him at the end moment, winking him when he was almost near her and held Ryan shoulder instead who had stepped in front of her from the back...

Till I hit the dancefloor
Hit the dancefloor
I got all I need
No I ain't got cash
I ain't got cash
But I got you baby

She moved her feet in sync with Ryan back and forth in quick Salsa steps,swaying her hips in between occasionally... Surely it was a payback time with interest for Sanskar ... To see his Swara being lifted by Ryan... matching steps with him ... flirting... and then to see that annoying Mike to take the turn...

Those two idiots were supposed to protect her, where Swara was acting as the distraction... What the hell! Here the guys were having the time of their life, that too with his Nymph! Burning in the flame of green envy, Sanskar advanced towards the car stage, keeping his panther like senses intact towards the surrounding...

Baby I don't need dollar bills to have fun tonight
(I love cheap thrills)
Baby I don't need dollar bills to have fun tonight
(I love cheap thrills)
But I don't need no money
As long as I can feel the beat
I don't need no money
As long as I keep dancing...

He, the evil wolf darted his eyes all over the crowd. And felt ecstatic to acknowledge few of wolves still remaining who contacted him with sign language . So what the original plan didn't work! They could at least frustrate their opponents by spreading splatters of blood and panic among the masses. So let it be a shootout under the open sky. The Beretta M9A3 concealed inside his blazer crept out, followed by the suppressor to be attached . His lips crooked in a sardonic smile as his eyes had found his perfect target... Other wolves also drew their weapons and took their stands in different spots...

(I love cheap thrills!)
(I love cheap thrills!)
I don't need no money
As long as I can feel the beat
I don't need no money
As long as I keep dancing
Oh, oh...

Both sides, slayers and saviours had started their moves against one another, being imperturbable of snatching the rug under the feet of their respective foes. The slayer's hand sneaked out of the crowd... His M9A3 fired and the hand crept back and concealed inside the crowd at a lightning speed... The silencer aided the otherwise blaring noise of firearm, only to be engulfed by music and cheers... The bullet released from 919mm Parabellum cartridge and travelled in a flat trajectory at its usual superfast pace towards the target about 35 metres away from the barrel, where the gorgeous lead singer on the stage was shouting out the lyrics of the chorus portion, bending her head backwards, facing towards the sky...eyes closed... Not being able to notice the danger that was coming on her way...

Baby I don't need dollar bills to have fun tonight
(I love cheap thrills!)
Baby I don't need dollar bills to have fun tonight
(I love cheap thrills!)
I don't need no money
As long as I can feel the beat
I don't need no money
As long as I keep dancing

The sodium road lamp just behind Swara broke into pieces... To her surprise Mike had pushed her, to move her out of the lethal trajectory the brass bullet was moving at a jet speed just a fraction of a second before... Ryan spread his hand to grab her but missed ... Swara lost her balance and fell off the car stage facing her back... to land on a strong pair of arms... She closed her eyes in fear for a brief moment... They opened to meet the hardened gaze of the deep molten caramel eyes... Whereas her hands fastened the grip on his shirt instinctively ... Sanskar teared his gaze from the scared angel against his heart's will ... Being afraid he may lose his anger seeing her innocent ,fluttering eyelashes he faced towards the crowd, who hooted and roared... assuming this scenario as a concluding part of the performance... Femme fatale had fallen for the valiant knight and vice versa...

I don't need no money
U worth more dan diamond, more dan gold
As long as I can feel the beat
Mek di beat jus tek control...

The guitarists on the stage rapped the final parts in jest and ended the full on entertaining number... The audience were still in oblivion... Whereas the agents came out of their hiding... They charged the remaining wolves who were about to press the triggers of their respective arms... Soon the situation was under their control... The saviours succeeded in making them falter, then grabbed them in their unconscious state under dose of deep sedatives... It appeared they were taking the passed out guests out of the crowd and noise...
The host accompanied by Mr Hernandez thanked all, requested them to stay and cooperate for the last security check as a standard protocol.

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"Sanskar, please put me down! You know I'm alright!" Swara requested for the umpteenth time. She dreaded to face his wrath and scolding but couldn't stand this distant and stubborn Sanskar! On the other hand, Sanskar turned a deaf ear to her and addressed Ayaz, "AK, we're going home. Please complete the formalities on behalf of me too. We'll report on the early morning..."He stopped a bit to watch Swara from the corner of his eyes, "I think we've had enough action for tonight." Hearing him Swara flinched, sensing the cold roughness in his voice.

AK nodded in agreement, "Yeah Sunny... You both deserve some rest... Don't worry. We'll handle everything here." Shrugging her shoulders Kiara made face looking at Swara as if she wanted to say, "Girl, you're finished! No one can save you today!" Sanskar bended a bit and opened the side door of a black Audi Q3, a luxurious mini SUV that was Sooraj Walia alias Sanskar's ride for the night. He placed her on the front passenger seat, got himself on the driver's seat then helped her with the seat belt. His every bit of self control tried to betray him when their fronts brushed against each other's in the process and the lover in him ached to engulf her in a bone crushing hug out of relief and desperation... But today Sanskar in him was hurt and more furious than SSR ever could be... He maintained his stoneface and started the car.

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Swara was on the verge of crying. Since the beginning of their ride, he hadn't pronounced a single word except ordering their dinner over the cellphone for home delivery, even if she literally begged for his attention, apologised profusely... Her voice was cracked still he was behaving as if he couldn't hear anything.

"Sanskar please..." She whispered, "Please don't do this to me... Believe me I only wanted to help... I... I can bear if you scold me, show your anger on me... "
Screech! The car stopped with a sudden halt... Sanskar opened the door and seat belt for Swara just like before... She noticed they were inside the parking lot of their apartment . Sanskar began to walk fast as soon as he locked the car. Swara ran as fast as she could to block his way, spreading her arms in front him... Sanskar moved past her and in the process his chest brushed her arm... Her eyes widened in shock,when she felt some stickiness there and found stains of blood on her hands...

"Sanskar!Khoon! Yeh chot kaise laga? How couldn't you inform me or anyone else?Aur toh aur, iss halat mein tum mujhe uthaya, gaadi chalaya!" She was getting hysterical, her tears knew no bounds... Her hands frantically searched all over his body for the source of the blood... She shouted shaking his arms, " Have you become mad? Aise kaise kar sakte ho tum haan? No Swara... You must be calm...Sanskar needs an ambulance now... Ayaz bhai! Yes I need to call him! " She hastily fished her pocket for the cellphone..

"Oh stop it Nymph! Ye mere khoon nehi, koi aur ki... shayad black wolves ki hoga!" Sanskar couldn't torment her anymore, about his well being at least... Hearing this Swara threw her arms around him in a tight embrace and hid her face against his chest, wetting his shirt...Sanskar held her chin upwards, probing into her pool of tears by his intense gaze, his voice reflected his hidden pain,fear, frustration, anger,complaints." Look at the irony, Nymph! You were almost losing your sanity by mere misassumption of me getting hurt... You were getting mad by touching other's blood on my clothes !Just think about my state... When you in your wounded state, left for the most dangerous area without any formal training to protect yourself, what was I going through? Did you think about me for once? Tum... mere liye fikr jaroor karti ho... Par tum mujhe ek dost kya... insaan bhi nehi sochti ho... Agar karti... toh mere feelings ki thoda sa kadar karti... Ek hi baat kaha tha...woh baat maanti..." Swara shook her head and tried to deny as he hurled the blames towards her, but he raised his hand,"Did you do any of them? Then why should I care about your feelings? Kyun sunoon mein tumhari baatein?"

"It's not like that..Sanskar.Please aisa maat kaho... You can't imagine how important you are for me!" Swara tried to convince... She touched his face while his eyes were averted from her, " You know situation was like that, they needed to evacuate the hotel without creating panic or suspicion...I didn't want to hurt you... I only offered myself as a distraction...to help the guys... "

He brushed off her hand immediately,"Oh really? Distraction? You made yourself a bait Swara!You lured them to aim their arms at you!How dare you haan?How could you endanger your life on the name of a mission?" His eyes were blood red in fury,"You were not supposed to do that, damn it!"

"Pehle bhi mein tumhara madat kiya, Mr Sanskar Singh Rathore!"Swara suddenly got agitated," Even then I was not supposed to do that... How do you expect me not to help when I can do something? What's the difference between now and then? Tab tum toh mujhe nehi roka, balki inspire kiya tha! TELL ME SANSKAR! !"

That's it...Sanskar couldn't control himself anymore.. pinned her against the pillar.. He moved his gaze all over her face, "Toh tum nehi janti aab kya farak hai? So you want to know why I can't stand the possibility of you getting hurt... Dimaag to jyada hai nehi tumhari pass... par...Are you that stupid Nymph?" He was standing dangerously close to her, his breath fanned her face,his nostrils deeply inhaled the fragrance of her jasmine scented perfume... His lips whispered near her quivering, slightly parted lips," then you were stranger for me... But everything have changed... Mein tumse ..."

All on a sudden Sanskar's phone ringed awkwardly, ripping the romantic ambience in the air... Sanskar got his senses back... He left her and groaned, whereas her face fell... He was this close to confess his love for her!...He picked up phone and she frowned as the call proceeded ...

"Yes? What? Swara's guest?Did they tell their name? Okay we're coming..." Sanskar cut the call and told in a serious tone, " Swara I don't know who can come here... But I'm coming with you..."

Swara was not afraid or anxious for themselves as these apartments of Interpol Safe house were secured enough... Moreover she trusted her guardian angel... But Sanskar being Sanskar, entered the guest room with covering her petite frame with his strong muscular frame...

A man and a lady was waiting inside the room. As soon as they noticed Swara they got up from the sofa. They were prancing towards her shooting furious glares...

"Mr Sanskar Singh Rathore, just move! You can't stand in our way this time!" The man pushed Sanskar aside who had been shielding Swara from the furious duo. The lady too followed the man. He held Swara by her arms making her wince, making Sanskar flinch in the process, and taunted, "What did you think Miss Swara Bose? You'll hide yourself here and we will never ever find you?"

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****Footnote:
The song: Cheap Thrills by Sia. The last four lines of the lyrics I used here were rapped by Sean Paul in a remix version in "Patois"(pronounced Pa-twah), a dialect of English spoken in Caribbean.

Edited by iamreader - 8 years ago

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

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RES

Part unres - I am first - I think the duo in the end - her brother and mother😊

Finally unres - I really should be ashamed rather being proud that I am now unreserving.

Okay so I was right about the ending but that was a nice touch. And the dance was indeed a dance with the wolves with a green eyed panther for good measure. I agree with Kaira, though I support Sanskaar - Swara seems to be blurring the line between bravery and foolhardiness, though for her credit, few of know the difference.

Sanskaar reaction and Swara's hurt - it is true is it not, silence is like ignoring someone and it hurts more than angry words. Finally the confrontation got some truths through, though he could not confess his love for her.

Now off to read the next part.

love,

Nyna

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