Swasan FF : Zephyr vs Tempest ( Chapter 30; P-71)

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Hi I'm Dyuti and this is my first writing in IF. I'm a silent reader, an avid Swasan Fan. I don't know how many will read it. As I have few buddies here. We have some amazing writers. My English writing is not poetic type.
Also the updates will be slow. I'll try to update as much as I can.

if anyone read it pls comment. Write anything.I'm open to criticism n discussion. I'm be double happy if u send me a buddy request too.

Prologue: page 1

Chapter 1: page 1

Chapter 2: Page 2

Chapter 3-Page 3

Chapter 4- Page 5

Chapter 5 - Page 7

Chapter 6 - page 8

Chapter 7- Page 10

Chapter 8 - Page 11

Chapter 9 - Page 13

Chapter 10 - Page 14

Chapter 11- Page 17

Chapter 12 - Page 19

Chapter 13 - Page 21

Chapter 14 - Page 24

Chapter 15 - Page 26

Chapter 16 - Page 30

Chapter 17 - Page 35

Chapter 18- Page 40

Chapter 19- Page 44

Chapter 20 - Page 47

Chapter 21- Page 53

Chapter 22- Page 56

Chapter 23- Page 60

Chapter 24- Page 63

Chapter 25- Page 64

Chapter26- Page 66


CHAPTER 27- Page 67

Chapter 28- Page 68

Chapter 29- Page 70

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Posted: 8 years ago
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PROLOGUE


Two strangers...
May be partially wrong statement if you say that. One knows every tiny details of other one's life. Not a stalker though..

Another one never knew former's existence until that very black date...

One hurts... another heals...

They met and a battle started... a battle for survival... a battle for greater good ... a battle full of blood bath.. A battle of mind games...

They joined hands to against a darker force. To emerge as victorious they'll have to lend helping hands to that very opponent.

It's a story of two strangers who found their solace in each other amongst chaos and turmoil...


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Chapter 1



Sanjeevni Operative hospital and research institute, Delhi.
10.00 a.m.

Dr Avinash Mathur left a sigh. He has a hectic lineup of surgeries today. Damn these outstation workshops! The trips, all day long seminars, teaching procedures to overzealous youngsters. Last but not the least, overload of cases before and afterwards due to absence in hospital. After all he is a legend in his own field! Traumatic surgery is his speciality. Gunshot, splinter wounds, bad falls, or getting crushed under heavy buildings.. You name and he has the best success rates.

He was taking a short rest in between two surgeries. Meanwhile his best disciple and his right hand in OT during last few years entered after attending a phone call. He asked,'Swara, did you tell Mr Roy that, a second surgery would be required for his son after a month?'

Swara replied, " Yes, but he didn't seem very happy, when he heard about it at first. But when I told the wounds will look less ugly, he was convinced."

Avinash nodded, "And what was that phone call about?"

Swara apologetically replied," Sorry sir, I took a small appointment without asking you. Some Mr Oberoi called for talking about his relative. I told we're caught up and have to leave for Budapest tonight. But he wanted only 10 minutes and requested so much, that I couldn't refuse. Sir, if it's not okay with you, I'll cancel it right now."

Avinash frowned, "You shouldn't repeat something like this in future. Not on my behalf, not for yourself too. Too much load decreases the quality of work. I'm afraid I can't meet him today. You meet him instead and brief me afterwards."

Swara nodded. Dr Mathur relies on her a lot. He believes she is the best resident he had ever got to train.Only 25 years old, 3 years training, 1 year more.. But everyone say she has learnt almost everything. All she needs is exposure and experience.

At lunch break she was in her room.she was tired and closed her eyes. A knock brought her back in full alertness.

'Come in.' she said.

'Receptionist asked me to meet you. Where's Dr Mathur?'

'Well, Sir asked me to meet you as he's busy. I'm Dr Swara Bose. His first hand , resident surgeon. I'll let him know about the case later. I'll be joining the workshop with him in Hungary too.So if it's needed we can arrange a video conference later. I hope you don't have problem with it?'

' Not at all, Dr Bose.' A young man in his late twenties beamed,' Hi, I'm Mr Oberoi, Mr Sanskar Oberoi.'

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After a few hours, someone was standing outside the hospital. He made a call.

' Targets have just come out. We're going to split.'

'Good. Keep them under watch. Don't let them suspect anything.'

'HOW MANY TIMES WILL U SAY IT??? I KNOW MY WORK WELL!!!'

'Hey! Stop you fireworks here! Targets must board the flight at any cost. And..'

'And then the flight will take off, but will never reach Budapest! ' he completed in a sinister voice.

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Edited by iamreader - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi dear.. Im loving this plot and the prologue and part one.. little bit thrilling... Is Sanskaar is an assassin... He is here to kill Swara or doc Avinash.
By the way I'm Kam... May i know your name..

With love...

Kam...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting😳 do pm me

Myself...tani😆
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Awesome some thing is really fishy ...sanskar oberoi...what a relief I was actually wanting to hear the name sanskar wid others surnames and really gives a feel of oberoi...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It really interesting concept dear.. The prologue made me all sort of curious. . I loved the setting you established in Chapter one a brief peak into the Characters... I really want to know more about them
.. I understand the timing constraint which goes into updates , So dont worry about it ..Take your time and update it .. Thanks for the PM dear..

Love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's really very unique concept...
Loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I'm so happy with your response
Hi kamila,
My name's Dyuti. The concept was bugging me for months.at first I wanted to give a backdrop.but later decided to keep it under wraps for a while. And there'll be more when curtains r raised.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Kojagori,
Thanks a lot. About Oberoi surname, I was so disheartened . After posting I noticed someone posted a new FF with the same surname.

And Tani , will PM.

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