Swasan FF : Zephyr vs Tempest ( Chapter 30; P-71)

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Shikha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#391

Thnks for the pm dyuti and concept is very nice
I told u before also ur v good writer
Sanskaar part were good and leena and jealouse omg 👍🏼

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#392

Originally posted by: kriti_atharv
awww jealous Swara is very cute...hahahhaah her reactions during d dance was hilarious...hahahahha...it was fun and awesome update dear...i loved d twilight reference...thnx dr d pm hun!!

Dear Kriti,
Poor Swara! What could she do? Double dose in one day! I personally think that imprinting concept goes well with our Swasan... Thanks for your lovely comment.

Love,
Dyuti

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#393

Originally posted by: kojagorimalik
It was beautiful loved it dyuti diii aww sanskar is so dapper and swara "jalkukdi" bichari...
Overall awesome

Aww I love you too, baccha! Poor Swara is like-

Jiya jale jaan jale
Nainon tale dhuaan chale dhuaan chale
Raat bhar dhuaan chale

Hai na?

Love,
Dyuti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#394

Originally posted by: kritz4ever
Lovely update

Thanks for your compliments dear!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#395

Originally posted by: ShikhaAgrawal
Thnks for the pm dyuti and concept is very nice
I told u before also ur v good writer
Sanskaar part were good and leena and jealouse omg 👍🏼

Dearest Shikha,
Happy that you loved the Sanskar part. That part took me almost 4-5 days. Problems of not being so strong in a language and still daring to write a thriller of less touched concept. I hope I can handle the next chapters well and get a really good concept for your RL OS within this month.

Thanks for being with me.
Love,
Dyuti