Swasan FF : Zephyr vs Tempest ( Chapter 30; P-71) - Page 15

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Dear Dyuti,</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">A nice update - and do not worry about time gaps, it happens. And I hope your hand is better now, please take care.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">I liked the "emotional" orchestra that you played - Sanskaar admitting to himself that Swara is very important and also aware of Laksh desires, Swara as usual quite oblivious to Laksh and to a lesser extent, Sanskaar (poor guy, he almost collapsed seeing her in the stream / pools)</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">And somehow, I have quite a bit of sympathy for Ragini - she loves Laksh who is oblivious to her. And her internal conflict as to how even a blind man craves for the sun and how a moth flies towards the flame, hence even a creature of darkness like Laksh cannot help be drawn towards the personification of light, namely Swara - very well done👏👏</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Love,</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Nyna</font>

Originally posted by: kojagorimalik

This chappy really has its own charms I just loved it

Originally posted by: kriti_sologar

i just read d entire thing in one go...will come back later fr detailed comments...

pm me for further updates!!

thnx!!

Originally posted by: iamreader

Dear Moumita,
It was not that happening chappy just a reflection on their emotions... gear up! for the next one is gonna be long..

😊
Love,
Dyuti

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Dyuti...

OMG ..this was soo interesting update..marvellous...swasan are so comfortable witheach other...lucky he is scaring me..he is getting possesive of swara...climax part was nicely etched..sanky acknowledge lakshya growing feeling...sswara seems clueless...now excited for next...

Talia