Swasan FF : Zephyr vs Tempest ( Chapter 30; P-71)

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#141

Dear Dyuti,

A nice update - and do not worry about time gaps, it happens. And I hope your hand is better now, please take care.

I liked the "emotional" orchestra that you played - Sanskaar admitting to himself that Swara is very important and also aware of Laksh desires, Swara as usual quite oblivious to Laksh and to a lesser extent, Sanskaar (poor guy, he almost collapsed seeing her in the stream / pools)

And somehow, I have quite a bit of sympathy for Ragini - she loves Laksh who is oblivious to her. And her internal conflict as to how even a blind man craves for the sun and how a moth flies towards the flame, hence even a creature of darkness like Laksh cannot help be drawn towards the personification of light, namely Swara - very well done👏👏

Love,

Nyna

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Anahita_Leve

@Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Dear Dyuti,
A nice update - and do not worry about time gaps, it happens. And I hope your hand is better now, please take care.

I liked the "emotional" orchestra that you played - Sanskaar admitting to himself that Swara is very important and also aware of Laksh desires, Swara as usual quite oblivious to Laksh and to a lesser extent, Sanskaar (poor guy, he almost collapsed seeing her in the stream / pools)

And somehow, I have quite a bit of sympathy for Ragini - she loves Laksh who is oblivious to her. And her internal conflict as to how even a blind man craves for the sun and how a moth flies towards the flame, hence even a creature of darkness like Laksh cannot help be drawn towards the personification of light, namely Swara - very well done👏👏

Love,
Nyna

Nyna dear,

The chapter was challenging for me, as it was an emotional one. An in personal life I'm not the romantic kind... very much practical. The premise is going to change soon, I'm a bit concerned. Would the transition turn out smooth?

I myself felt so sad for Ragini... In real world too, Raginis stay in background. .. But Laksh can turn hero sometimes...

Another analysis well done!

👏

Dyuti

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kojagorimalik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#143

This chappy really has its own charms I just loved it

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kriti_atharv

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Posted: 8 years ago

#144

i just read d entire thing in one go...will come back later fr detailed comments...

pm me for further updates!!

thnx!!

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: kojagorimalik
This chappy really has its own charms I just loved it

Dear Moumita,
It was not that happening chappy just a reflection on their emotions... gear up! for the next one is gonna be long..

😊
Love,
Dyuti

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: kriti_sologar
i just read d entire thing in one go...will come back later fr detailed comments...
pm me for further updates!!
thnx!!

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Welcome Kriti! ❤️

Glad that you noticed my FF, take ur time to read and comment.. A simple one means a lot to me!

Eagerly waiting for your detailed review.
⭐️

Love,
Dyuti

Edited by iamreader - 8 years ago

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kojagorimalik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: iamreader

Dear Moumita,
It was not that happening chappy just a reflection on their emotions... gear up! for the next one is gonna be long..

😊
Love,
Dyuti

Yet I found the chappy beautiful...everyone emotions is exppained in detail and beautifully

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#148

Dyuti...

OMG ..this was soo interesting update..marvellous...swasan are so comfortable witheach other...lucky he is scaring me..he is getting possesive of swara...climax part was nicely etched..sanky acknowledge lakshya growing feeling...sswara seems clueless...now excited for next...

Talia

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Dyuti...
OMG ..this was soo interesting update..marvellous...swasan are so comfortable witheach other...lucky he is scaring me..he is getting possesive of swara...climax part was nicely etched..sanky acknowledge lakshya growing feeling...sswara seems clueless...now excited for next...

Talia

Hi Talia dear, 😊

Well men can understand men's psychology well... Lucky is brutal in nature, so his romantic notion will be dangerous too... Here he knows Sanskar is an established barrier on his way... For Swara, she thinks Lucky is dangerous,but it's difficult to guess the danger is actually his interest for her... Let's see what happens next..

Love,
Dyuti