Swasan FF : Zephyr vs Tempest ( Chapter 30; P-71) - Page 17

Originally posted by: kriti_sologar

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<font color="#0000ff" size="2">wow I cant believe I am d first to comment...well what a fab update...they were really escaping but RagLak as always had to be a hindrance in their way...woohooo some action time...SSR is awsuum...I loved their light banter in the tent...Swara is shy to see a shirtless Sanskaar...hae main toh dekhne ke liye tarsi jaa rahi hoon...and Sanskaar us such a flirt...ohhh Laksh is really very obsessed with Swara and does he really think he will be able to take Sanskaar's place in Swara's life after killing him even if Sanskaar was only a fake fiance...ohhh Ragini is going to push Swara towards d waterfall...nooo...hope Sanskar is able to save her and they r successful in escaping but loved this part hun and can't wait to read more...</font>

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<font color="#0000ff" size="2">Kriti</font>

SSR is way more Awesome that Dr Oberoi... I intend to make him so... Shirtless Sanskar! 😳 Don't we all we wish to see? Our gutter minds! You know how we will react if we ever get chance... Phir Swara bechari kya karenge? Woh to Sach me apna hubby man lenge! 😳 😃

Originally posted by: kojagorimalik

Woah dyuti do what an escape...i loved it...and this was truly worth mahaupdate...did swara fall into water????? Oh my god plz save her fast with the help of our hero...after all u r the writer... 😉

Mou dear, pray that I can update the next chappie quicker.. last one took too much time... reading a lot of boring articles now a days for the sake of this FF... keep eyes for the next chapter... You'll get a lovely surprise! 😊

Your Dyuti di

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">A great way to wake up on a Sunday morning- a nice update of Zephyr Vs Tempest - this episode was quite windy (bad pun, right) from the light hearted bantering between Sankaar and Swara to the nail biting cliff hanger finish in the end.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Anyway, it was truly a mega update, the pre escape jitters, nicely dealt with subtle humour - especially Swara refusing to look at Sanskaar while he changed (Damn - this woman does not know how to take a chance when she gets one - or wait, maybe she was not sure of what exactly she would do if she really saw his six pack😆😉)</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">The escape plan was quite simple and effective but life rarely is, and their plan, literally ran into road block.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">The fight scene - very well described and quite realistic but the ending had my heart in my mouth - Laksh beaten by Sanskaar and still weak, I presume from those dog bites and knocked, Ragini with a bullet injury and a scalpel wound, Sanskaar and Swara - you did not mention their injuries - but at least Sanskaar would have some bruises, and from the corner of his eye sees Swara being pushed into the water.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">He does save her, but then it must jeopardise their entire escape plan - or maybe won't - for as per you notes, the chemical would keep the humans knocked out for quite some time, Laksh is out of action and Ragini quite disabled, so it might not be so difficult.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">I am going crazy imagining - what next? Do update quickly.</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Nyna</font>

Nynu dearest,

The pun was actually good you know?😆 I can safely guess, the transition was quite smooth? Next chaper will start from where it had ended, so you expect to get some of the doubts clear.. Raglak are meant to be tough cookies as they are Ace members of Black wolves with a name. Laksh has 10-12 years experience, expected to follow his dad someday, so he will give a tough fight whatever bad condition he's in... About Swasan all I can tell, you're in for a small surprise!

I'm admiring our Shru,Viji, Nimmi, Nita,Lucky,Saku, you and many others more after writing this chappie... You people give us back to back action packed updates... I already feel drained after posting this one .

Your review made my day. ⭐️

Hugs,
Dyuti

Amazing !! Beautifully written 👏

Hello dyuti. Well first time commenting on ur ff But I must say u r an incredible writer. Just have few more chapters to finish. Will be back quickly with my reply. plz bear me for the little delay.

Originally posted by: Nivijo

Hello dyuti. Well first time commenting on ur ff But I must say u r an incredible writer. Just have few more chapters to finish. Will be back quickly with my reply. plz bear me for the little delay.

Love

Nivi

Hi Nivi, Welcome dear! 😊

I noticed you in Swasan AT. Thanks for your compliment 😳 . Finish the rest chappies and let me know how you think abt it...

Love,
Dyuti

Originally posted by: sandhiya_1195

Amazing !! Beautifully written👏

Hi Sandy! 😃 first comment! Yay! 😊

Originally posted by: iamreader

Hi Nivi, Welcome dear! 😊

I noticed you in Swasan AT. Thanks for your compliment 😳 . Finish the rest chappies and let me know how you think abt it...

Love,
Dyuti

Guess I got little late with my reply. Sorry for that. U know personal commitments and all. But now I'm free.

Well planned by swasan to escape..but raglak caught them..
Oh god hope swara is safe..

Thanks

Originally posted by: Nivijo

Guess I got little late with my reply. Sorry for that. U know personal commitments and all. But now I'm free.

Chapter 1-

I was quite impressed as well as surprised to see that swara here is a trainee in order to become a doctor. Coz no in many stories which I have read I have seen swara as a doctor. So yeah that was a new thing for me. And swara and dr Mathur have a deep bond. And then the first meet of swasan was really professional. And someone is lurking behind swara and abhi mathur.

Chapter 2-

Swara, after all, is a beauty with brains. And it is a matter of fact that none can resist her.

And swasan's second meet, ahh. It was awesome. Sanskar's comment was too sarcastic.

And the conversation between the black wolves somewhat cracked me up especially the comment they made they r tough nut to crack. It cracked me up a bit, u know. Who is AK. The one who was on call was sanskar. But who was the other one on call.

Chapter 3-

The tempest were all set to kidnap swara and dr Mathur. That was really cruel technique opted by them. Hijacking the plane and torturing the other people just to get themselves what they want is just really heartless. And abhinash is dead. The only father figure in swara's life. Glad to see sanskar supporting swara. And his pretense of being her fiance was so true that it fooled the black wolves. Good to see the slow paced bonding of swasan.

Chapter 4-

Finally swasan were dragged to this hell of the black wolves. Swasan unintentional hug during the journey where swara was cocooned in sanskar's embrace was too good.

So swasan are in a tent together. Sanskar's voice was too commanding enough to scare out those people. Their confrontation was marvelous. Sanskar is not an oberoi and a doctor too.

Chapter 5-

Sanskar is an officer of the ATU. My goodness. And now the zephyr joined their hands to defeat the tempest. Sanskar, bit by bit, is loosing himself when he is around swara. Getting attracted towards her. This attraction is soon going to turn in to love. But I'm sure there r going to be a lot of hurdles before they get back to each other. I so hate this laksh. What the hell is his problem, I don't understand. He strangled the one and only person who can save his father.

I'm almost done with the 6th chapter. Will give my reply later. Hope u forgive me for that.

Love

Nivi

Dear Nivi,

Feeling nice to see this chapter to chapter analysis. I usually don't read previous chapters unless any confusion arises... to avoid bloopers you know? So it's kind of reading the summary through your eyes

Oh Swara is a doctor... In medical profession, after passing MBBS(graduation ) one is called doc. Then the basic internship.so you can treat outpatient and refer to specialist. Swara is resident trainee which is advanced type. After completing it you can be termed as specialist. The training duration varies in diferent countries. I'm actually not sure abt India.so took some creative liberty.

Hope that clears.

Love,
Dyuti