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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Sharon dear...
Awesome start dear...preface and chapter 1 were amazing...something out of the box..i m feeling unique n different take of story ..which is fresh...

You decided singapore as main city...nice

Oky im little confused...how can anyone say fairy girl was ragini?? I think im dumb..i could not get it..or everyone is assuming .???.mr handome is sanky for sure ..n other may be lakshya...till now it was all about swara n her life...her irritating boss...which was nicely penned.she should leave that place asap now...looking forward for swara in MSI..inc.. first encounter..with all..curious

N sharon plzzz never say something went wrong with perilious persuit n pedantic pardon...both were fab..something outclass .different flavour n climax ...i loved both...new n fresh..

Now update this soon too..excited...

Love
Talia

Hi Talia,

Preface.. Yeah that's the word.. Thank you dear!

Yup this is more of fantasy fiction and is bit different from most of the works around here.

Talia, you are right. That fairy is not Ragini. I too don't know how others reached that conclusion. I intact went back and reread the chapter a couple of times but there are no such hints that she would be Ragini.

Thank you very much for all your encouraging words. I know we tend to show the feelings of the show on the writings here and I guess that has been just a very bad timing to post such extreme cases.. Anyway this is different and hope I can complete this before the show goes off air.

Cheers

Sharon

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: kritz4ever
Lovely start

Thank you dear😊

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
interesting.

Thank you dear 😊

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Aheli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Hi Aheli

Thank you dear!

Yes its different but not too different. It's modern 21st century but with something special.. You got two correct. The fairy is not Ragini. They know each other but how, you gotta wait for it.

MSI is a company trying to hire Swara. What exactly is it.. You need to wait for it too..

Karen is partially inspired from a real time person however I exaggerated to make her bad.. Swara just has to get out of there first.

Hope you will enjoy rest of the chapters as well.

Cheers
Sharon

@Bold They know each other... Who?? The trio right?? But what! Ragini is not 'Miss Fairy'?? Then who's she?? 😲 Okk then will wait for the revelation of 'Miss Fairy.' 😆 😉

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

@Bold They know each other... Who?? The trio right?? But what! Ragini is not 'Miss Fairy'?? Then who's she?? 😲 Okk then will wait for the revelation of 'Miss Fairy.' 😆 😉

The next chapter will answer your question about Ragini.. as for the trio you need to wait for 2 more chapters.😊

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Sharon

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

me first?

Yes - I am first.

Dear Sharon,'

I do not care that there is a "no sorry no thank you" rule between pals. I will break it, with impunity.

Thank you, girl for updating today I had a severe case of Monday blues, and was almost on the verge of sobbing on my way home - since I walk home from office - it was not feasible. And hoping to improve my mood, I freshen up and step into IF - lo behold - an update - Truly magical, spell binding.

So finally we meet Ragini and Uttara, Swara's roommates . I loved the detailed background (BTW, would Deeksha have an role to play in future?) - On a side note, why do we girls have a trio of friends - Swara, Ragini and Uttara here, Swara, Nisha and Kajal in Lucky's Fanaa. I just wanted to know if you are also one of a trio - I am and we have known each other each the age of five - and even today, despite distance and oceans separating us, we can reach out to each other, any time of the day or night.

Anyway, sorry for digressing (well if I break the rule, might as well do it fully😆). I got the impression that Ragini is also impervious, but then even she is under Laksh's spell??😆😆.

Guess, Sanskaar will have to enter to convince Swara?

Do update soon.

Best,

Nyna

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Sharon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
me first?
Yes - I am first.
Of course dear🤗

Dear Sharon,'
Dear Nyna

I do not care that there is a "no sorry no thank you" rule between pals. I will break it, with impunity.
I am totally fine with it. (😉Because nothing conveys the feeling of apology and gratitude better than them.

Thank you, girl for updating today I had a severe case of Monday blues, and was almost on the verge of sobbing on my way home - since I walk home from office - it was not feasible. And hoping to improve my mood, I freshen up and step into IF - lo behold - an update - Truly magical, spell binding.
I can understand that.. The weekend was good but taxing and on contrary, my Monday was too uneventful. So I typed this out to cheer myself up and endure the 10 hours.😆 I am glad that I could help make your day end better.

So finally we meet Ragini and Uttara, Swara's roommates . I loved the detailed background (BTW, would Deeksha have an role to play in future? Nope.. I don't plan to.. ) - On a side note, why do we girls have a trio of friends - Swara, Ragini and Uttara here, Swara, Nisha and Kajal in Lucky's Fanaa. I just wanted to know if you are also one of a trio I am.. wherever I go, I am part of a trio.. in fact my weekend too was great because our trio reunion😳- I am and we have known each other each the age of five - and even today, despite distance and oceans separating us, we can reach out to each other, any time of the day or night.
That's awesome👏

Anyway, sorry for digressing (well if I break the rule, might as well do it fully😆 Lol.. no probs). I got the impression that Ragini is also impervious, but then even she is under Laksh's spell??😆😆.
Ragini is a mystery I would be unravelling at later stage.. Not much of a mystery but she will be part of climax. Now how she joins this bunch, will be a mystery for you to worry later. I have more characters coming up.. Normally my stories don't have villains and the situation plays villain of the story. However, here I am going to break that rule of mine. You will have a villain but you will meet the guy only in climax.

Guess, Sanskaar will have to enter to convince Swara?
Sanskaar has a bigger role to play.. but he will be part of the convincing process..

Do update soon.

Best,
Nyna

Hi dear, replied above for your comments..

Talking about Deeksha, I was just trying to weave a credible story for bringing in Ragini, whom Swara trusts but doesn't know 'everything' about. As I write, I might bring Deeksha back (That's why I kept her in the same city) however at what juncture, and within the 20 chapter target, will I have space for her interaction, I am not so clear. It might or might not happen

This still is preliminary regular routine. By Chapter 4, the roller coaster will be switched on. You would truly be bewitched by this world, or at least I hope I do enough justice in writing that you do get bewitched.

I was planning to post it over weekend but I haven't been keeping well and the last week I spent writing the climax. So I am kind of writing backwards but once I am done, I should be ready with daily updates.

Have some rest and clear your mind.. for more stories to concoct😉

Cheers

Sharon

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Hi dear, replied above for your comments..

Talking about Deeksha, I was just trying to weave a credible story for bringing in Ragini, whom Swara trusts but doesn't know 'everything' about. As I write, I might bring Deeksha back (That's why I kept her in the same city) however at what juncture, and within the 20 chapter target, will I have space for her interaction, I am not so clear. It might or might not happen

This still is preliminary regular routine. By Chapter 4, the roller coaster will be switched on. You would truly be bewitched by this world, or at least I hope I do enough justice in writing that you do get bewitched.

I was planning to post it over weekend but I haven't been keeping well and the last week I spent writing the climax. So I am kind of writing backwards but once I am done, I should be ready with daily updates.

Have some rest and clear your mind.. for more stories to concoct😉

Cheers
Sharon

First do take care, hope is it nothing serious. And second, you also write the climax/ ending first? I thought I was the only eccentric person who did (I wrote a longer detailed about this eccentricity for my reply to your comment on my OS - Auruos Lubency.😆 Daily updates - you rock.

Best,

Nyna

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

First do take care, hope is it nothing serious. And second, you also write the climax/ ending first? I thought I was the only eccentric person who did (I wrote a longer detailed about this eccentricity for my reply to your comment on my OS - Auruos Lubency.😆 Daily updates - you rock.

Best,
Nyna

Hi Nyna,

Nothing new actually. When I write, I write one tale at a time and I can't just stop writing once I am in the flow. You should be able to relate to that feeling.😊 That messes up my sleep timings and anything less than 7 hours of sleep leaves me with splitting headache. I do that for three consecutive days and I am down with fever. On Friday, I called in sick because of that but still completed the climax for the pleasure of it.

I normally don't pen down my climax, but I know what will happen and I how it's going to end. It's not too difficult for me to write epilogue, because once I am done with the FF, I still live with those characters. I can see them literally pacing in my room telling me their stories.

I saw your reply on my comment, BTW left the proper comment about your OS.

My mom has that habit of flipping to the end and if that appeals, she would read the book. I on the scale, prefer to complete in single sitting. And like you said, probably that brushed off my writing as well, that I aim to write the whole plot in one sitting, but that doesn't happen. However one chapter in single sitting is possible and that's what I have been doing all along.

I have done daily updates for my 50-part long FFs and they kept me on the ball, leading to successful completion of the stories. So I am aiming to do that here if my health permits. Also I hear this news about the show going off air. I would like to finish this by then. So fingers crossed.

Cheers

Sharon

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