FF: Whimsical Corporation [Completed] {New cover by Nyna}

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elsanna

@elsanna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Hi swthrt🤗
Wow! You are fast.. I have just updated the note and about to send pm😊

Well yaa... I am😉 will unres it soon😕

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: lucky.m

A very intriguing start sharon⭐️..looking forward for other chapters.

Lucky

Thank you Lucky 😊

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: sneharay
Nice update.. 👍🏼

Thank you dear 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Hey Sharon 🤗

I really liked Chapter 1---and was having a whale of a time, reading your descriptions of Ragini, Sanskaar and Lakshya. 😆 😆 Swara's impressions of all 3 of them were priceless---and especially her reactions to Sunny and Lucky. 😉 🤣 Very truly said my dear...very aptly described. 😆 🤣

Apart from the SwaRagini Lead 4...I really liked your description of Karen. Boss from Hell she is, no? 😆 Reminded me of my boss in the 2nd organization I worked in. Not a pleasant memory. 😉

And I just loved the fact that you set your fic in Singapore. One of my most favorite cities. I have been there several times; on holiday as well as work, and each time, I find myself falling more and more in love with the city. Some places are like that no? Something about them appeals to you, makes you feel comfortable. Almost like a home away from home. I am very eager to read more about the Whimsical Corporation set in this lovely city, with the characters I like so much (or like to dislike 😉).

Love,

----Viji

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Will read and get back😊

Dear Sharon,

In the backdrop of our PM exchanges, the story is a little clearer- especially the difference in the reactions of all the ladies and the fairy to Laksh and Swara's categorisation of him as Mr. Slick (she is being kind)😉. Is that attitude of hers that hints at her (in)ability?

I like, Swara here - a no-nonsense girl with a nice sense of humour. And Karen, yes there are those butt kissing, sucking up to bosses kind of people, who make life a living hell for you😡😡

Sanskaar - Mr Handsome who exhausts your vocabulary - the description is so true. So is MSI - Magic, Spells and Incantation Inc. - by any chance?

I am hooked to this tale.😊

Regarding your note, as a writer you are free to explore all extremes, and though I agree that one should keep reader likes in mind, it must not be at the cost of sacrificing either the plot or stifling your creativity. For a SwaSan / RagLak fan some characterisations / plot lines might not go down well with the fans but as an objective reader, they are appreciable. It is a tough balance, but I am sure you would be able to strike the right balance.

Looking forward to your updates (weekly once during the weekends is fine, typing on the phone is a torture)

Best,

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 8 years ago

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum
Hey Sharon 🤗

I really liked Chapter 1---and was having a whale of a time, reading your descriptions of Ragini, Sanskaar and Lakshya. 😆 😆 Swara's impressions of all 3 of them were priceless---and especially her reactions to Sunny and Lucky. 😉 🤣 Very truly said my dear...very aptly described. 😆 🤣

Apart from the SwaRagini Lead 4...I really liked your description of Karen. Boss from Hell she is, no? 😆 Reminded me of my boss in the 2nd organization I worked in. Not a pleasant memory. 😉

And I just loved the fact that you set your fic in Singapore. One of my most favorite cities. I have been there several times; on holiday as well as work, and each time, I find myself falling more and more in love with the city. Some places are like that no? Something about them appeals to you, makes you feel comfortable. Almost like a home away from home. I am very eager to read more about the Whimsical Corporation set in this lovely city, with the characters I like so much (or like to dislike 😉).

Love,

----Viji

Hi Viji

This is going to be a surprise for then. The fairy is not Ragini😊 but your guess of Sanskaar was an easy one probably, kind of hinted in the note.

Karen is inspired from a boss I had of the same name. However she wasn't so bad to me. In fact my boss was only 10% when compared to this boss from hell😆

Singapore is a city I call home. I really feel the time move too fast here. I wanted to set it in London or Mumbai, but since I have never been there, I tried researching yet I wasn't comfortable using them as my backdrop.

Glad that you have enjoyed reading this. You are surely in for a ride with this one. 😉

Cheers

Sharon

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Sharon,

In the backdrop of our PM exchanges, the story is a little clearer- especially the difference in the reactions of all the ladies and the fairy to Laksh and Swara's categorisation of him as Mr. Slick (she is being kind)😉. Is that attitude of hers that hints at her (in)ability?

I like, Swara here - a no-nonsense girl with a nice sense of humour. And Karen, yes there are those butt kissing, sucking up to bosses kind of people, who make life a living hell for you😡😡

Sanskaar - Mr Handsome who exhausts your vocabulary - the description is so true. So is MSI - Magic, Spells and Incantation Inc. - by any chance?

I am hooked to this tale.😊

Regarding your note, as a writer you are free to explore all extremes, and though I agree that one should keep reader likes in mind, it must not be at the cost of sacrificing either the plot or stifling your creativity. For a SwaSan / RagLak fan some characterisations / plot lines might not go down well with the fans but as an objective reader, they are appreciable. It is a tough balance, but I am sure you would be able to strike the right balance.

Looking forward to your updates (weekly once during the weekends is fine, typing on the phone is a torture)

Best,
Nyna

Hi Nyna

You made my day!! 🤗

Yes the first chapter does not actually introduce you the characters, only gives a glimpse of them. However you are aware of the plot so becomes not so mysterious for you.

Now I would be tempted to answer all your questions but that would kill the fun of reading the story.

Whether it's her ability or inability, you gotta wait and watch. 😊

I liked the bubbly Swara we used to see in the initial episodes. So my references are all from there. Also this is all from her perspective, I didn't want to be bored to write. As I told you before, writing something deep is really exhaustive for me. I need to have a lot of pent-up craziness to write like that.

MSI actually stands for Magic, Spells & Illusions. You will have very elaborate introduction to the company itself. Probably one chapter on Swara's experience with MSI. The first sights and impressions.

Thank you so much dear for all your appreciation and camaraderie 😃

Well, all my fictions are typed on phone. I get time for this only when I am traveling, and most of the time I am standing in the train typing one handed. So excuse my typos if you see any. 😆

Cheers

Sharon

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Res Sharon. 😳
Unresed. 😃
Nice prologue. 😊
Chapter 1 was awesome! 👏 The title of the FF "Whimsical Corporation" is amazing. 😃 This story is really set in different universe, mostly the corporate universe, right? 😉 And yes, yes, yes, I knew it that the subway trio were Sanskar (Mr. Handsome), Laksh (Mr. Slick) and Ragini (Miss Fairy)!!! 😉 😛 So do the trio know each other and why and what's their plan for hiring Swara for MSI Inc.?? By the way, what's MSI Inc.? 😳 Swara's impression about the tri was superb! 😉 And Karen! Oh god! The typical corporate boss! 😆 Eagerly waiting for the next part. 😳 Update soon. 😃 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Sharon dear...

Awesome start dear...preface and chapter 1 were amazing...something out of the box..i m feeling unique n different take of story ..which is fresh...

You decided singapore as main city...nice

Oky im little confused...how can anyone say fairy girl was ragini?? I think im dumb..i could not get it..or everyone is assuming .???.mr handome is sanky for sure ..n other may be lakshya...till now it was all about swara n her life...her irritating boss...which was nicely penned.she should leave that place asap now...looking forward for swara in MSI..inc.. first encounter..with all..curious

N sharon plzzz never say something went wrong with perilious persuit n pedantic pardon...both were fab..something outclass .different flavour n climax ...i loved both...new n fresh..

Now update this soon too..excited...

Love

Talia

Edited by krishuuuuuuuuuu - 8 years ago

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Res Sharon. 😳
Unresed. 😃
Nice prologue. 😊
Chapter 1 was awesome! 👏 The title of the FF "Whimsical Corporation" is amazing. 😃 This story is really set in different universe, mostly the corporate universe, right? 😉 And yes, yes, yes, I knew it that the subway trio were Sanskar (Mr. Handsome), Laksh (Mr. Slick) and Ragini (Miss Fairy)!!! 😉 😛 So do the trio know each other and why and what's their plan for hiring Swara for MSI Inc.?? By the way, what's MSI Inc.? 😳 Swara's impression about the tri was superb! 😉 And Karen! Oh god! The typical corporate boss! 😆 Eagerly waiting for the next part. 😳 Update soon. 😃 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

Hi Aheli

Thank you dear!

Yes its different but not too different. It's modern 21st century but with something special.. You got two correct. The fairy is not Ragini. They know each other but how, you gotta wait for it.

MSI is a company trying to hire Swara. What exactly is it.. You need to wait for it too..

Karen is partially inspired from a real time person however I exaggerated to make her bad.. Swara just has to get out of there first.

Hope you will enjoy rest of the chapters as well.

Cheers

Sharon