' Moksha' a swasan story chapter NOTEup @ 24(13/12/17)

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Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Nivijo
Mere ko pata hai aapne kis liye res kiya hai 😉. So I too res 😈 . First me 😃 😳.

So smart...😆

Love you loads baccha

Tani di😳

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#72

Kya baat hai Tani partner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#73

Res sisy wil unres tomorrow.

Unres sissy..

Hey tani darling.. I said tomorrow but I couldn't.. soo it came after two days.. sorry for that..

I loved both the updates.. layer I realized I have one left part to read.. again sorry for that..

Part 2: I loved ever about it.. their college scenes and the bond between sisters and mom.. and kavya.. I loved it.. then Sanskaar ought to be a Introvert and laksh opposite to him I loved the contrast too.. soo the hero saved the heroine.. I loved it..

Part 3: Here I loved all.. especially Swara trying to sort out the pain in him.. this I loved more.. then he saving her.. their little conversation. Then he walking her home.. I loved it..

Again dreaming.. hope it'll clear soon.. as a reader I'm very eager to know.. then who is the horse riding man who is the princess and her lover boy... Wanted to know..

Love you a loads..

Kam...

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#74

Tani...

Chapter 3 was fantastic...swara always in trouble n sanky like knight in shinning armour protecting her...but why is he not speaking...??swara initiated to talk..n wanted to know the pain he is hiding in his heart...but he bursted out at her...felt bad...n u added kavita...nooo plzzz...i just dont like this name...mention of it ..makes me think of some trouble...but still..will wait for next...update moskha plzz soon...

Talia

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#75

Dear Tani,

Nice update, Sanskaar always in time to rescue Swara and despite his attempts to be rude she somehow understands he is in pain.

Their confrontation and Swara learning of the reason (the fact that she could "hear" the wind would play out in a future scenario, I presume) and blurting out did not do much to smooth their situation. But I guess in the near future, since Swara now has an idea as to why Sanskaar does not prefer to be in the company of girls, it would be easier of her to help him.

Do update soon.

love,

Nyna

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elsanna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: kashaf789
Kya baat hai Tani partner

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Do continue soon

Thanks yashmin di😳

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elsanna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written..

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elsanna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...
Res sisy wil unres tomorrow.

Waiting di😉

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elsanna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Tani...
Chapter 3 was fantastic...swara always in trouble n sanky like knight in shinning armour protecting her...but why is he not speaking...??swara initiated to talk..n wanted to know the pain he is hiding in his heart...but he bursted out at her...felt bad...n u added kavita...nooo plzzz...i just dont like this name...mention of it ..makes me think of some trouble...but still..will wait for next...update moskha plzz soon...

Talia

Hehehe...😃 Talia di kavita is 🤢 to me also... Wait for next update your all doubt about her will be cleared😆

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elsanna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Dear Tani,

Nice update, Sanskaar always in time to rescue Swara and despite his attempts to be rude she somehow understands he is in pain.

Their confrontation and Swara learning of the reason (the fact that she could "hear" the wind would play out in a future scenario, I presume) and blurting out did not do much to smooth their situation. But I guess in the near future, since Swara now has an idea as to why Sanskaar does not prefer to be in the company of girls, it would be easier of her to help him.

Do update soon.

love,

Nyna

Nyna di🤗 yes sanskaar is the only reason why swara has developed new interest of being in trouble😛 only you catched the hint I guess about kavita you will know in the very next chapter😳

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