' Moksha' a swasan story chapter NOTEup @ 24(13/12/17)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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"Dreams come true but they never told that nightmares are dream too..."

A ravishing house malhotra mansion more like a castle are having so many nightmares to tell you... it's already 3 AM in night when Mrs.malhotra sleep was disturbed by hearing a call from 5 years old kid...


"Mom... di is sobbing very badly I am scared please come with me..." Kid said... "What happened did she got hurt while sleeping or she is not feeling well...tell me beta did you tried to talk to her..." Mrs malhotra asked... "No mom she is just crying burying her head down in her lap..." Kid said... " Okay fine...let me she her" Mrs malhotra said


At the room...

"Moksha...beta why are you crying...what happened are you not well...tell me dear..." Mrs malhotra asked... " Mom that uncle...who died because papa took their property talked to me again...he said he is feeling miserable as he is not able to help his kid who is suffering from brain tumor..." Moksha said... " But beta we told you earlier also that the kid can't be cured now as he is in last stage..." Mrs malhotra said... " No mom that doctor lied to us...mom please do something mom I can't see uncle in pain anymore..." Moksha said... " Okay fine... I will talk to your father tomorrow morning itself please try to sleep now dear..." Mrs malhotra said...


After 13 years... A grand house is shown...a lady enters a room...

"Swara... ragini how much time you need to sleep...get up now... it's already 8 AM... ragini it's your first day at college and Shona's birthday also..." Sharmishta said... " Oh yes mom... today di will become 20 years old...wohoo and tomorrow I will be 18" ragini said excitedly... " Yes dear...now get up and get ready...shona get up or else..." Sharmishta said with a winning smile... " No maa...no don't pour water on me today at least see I am awake..." Swara said annoyingly... " Happy birthday shona..." Sharmishta said... " Thanks maa " swara said... " Hmm happy birthday my big sisso..." Ragini said... " Thanks chooti..." Swara said...



After a week...


" Ragini don't you feel there's something wrong with sanskaar" swara said... " Hmm but why do you think like this..." Ragini said... " I don't know ragini but I feel something bothers him and today I am gonna ask him...why is he so nervous always and tries to escape from talking to anyone..." Swara said... " Are you sure swara do you think it will be a good idea..." Ragini said... " I don't know but I have to do this..."

Ragini was watching them from a distance but she was not able to listen their talks...but after a couple of minutes see saw swara coming towards her teary eyes...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Guys it's my first ever try to this genre... I am soo excited but nervous too...as I don't know will you all like my this idea or not...

It's a parafic which means paranormal fiction...if you all will not like it I will discontinue this here only 😭 but will complete it in dairy where I write normally...cause you all won't believe me this idea is fascinating me soo much that I was not able to sleep yesterday night...🤪


Tani

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Tani di 🤗. This was the story u were taking about, right. It is completely awesome. I loved it. But there are a lot of mysteries, I believe. Is this story some kind of super natural thing. Update soon.
Love u loads
Nivi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nivijo

Tani di 🤗. This was the story u were taking about, right. It is completely awesome. I loved it. But there are a lot of mysteries, I believe. Is this story some kind of super natural thing. Update soon.

Love u loads
Nivi

Yes nivi...this idea had really stalked my mind...😕 I had to post it or I would have gone mad
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow nice tani...u believe in paranormal things I didn't knew...keep it up...I will defo read... 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I love parafic.
This is damn interesting..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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its intresting tani
looking forward to it...
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Tani🤗. You know I have a thing for Paranormal fictions and thrillers. I loved your start. Continue with the story ASAP😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey tani this is something different.
Loved the first part...
Thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pari_1995

Hey tani this is something different.
Loved the first part...
Thanks for the pm dear

Pari...🤗 it's not the first part... it's just chotu sa sneak peak...😆

Tani

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