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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome montage pic tani
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I am so glad that you guys liked nivi siggi🤗 ... thanks a lot guys😳

Nivi now I want new siggi for next update...be ready😛


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so sorry guys...😳 couldn't complete the chapter in one go as IF🤢 phir se dhoka de dia... N I edited galat wala res...
So part B next page with khoob sara roona dhona of swasan😛 ab sorry bola itna asan to hai nai😆

I know I am super last so sorry😳
Do leave your views and tell me if I can improve anywhere😳


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Chapter 4
{Forgiving him}


We understand death for the first time when he put his hands upon whom we love...


Their conversation was disturbed when they heard someone's footsteps...

"You...now what do you want from us..." ragini said shouting at lakshya... "I am sorry ragini for what happened between bhai and swara..." Lakshya said... " I know he was really harsh on swara I tried to talk to him too but he is not ready to listen anything...you should not have taken kavita's name in front of him..." Lakshya said... " Oh! Yaa...you and your brother...now just go from here..." Ragini shouted at lakshya... " But who told you about kavita..." Lakshya asked swara in a confused manner... " That's none of your business go away or else I will kill you right now..." Ragini said angrily... " Ragini... don't shout at him he is not at fault..." Swara said calming ragini... " Di... don't take his side...you...why aren't you leaving..." Ragini said... " Ragini... first let me talk to him..." Swara said... "Ok di..." Ragini said glaring at lakshya... " Lakshya I don't know how did I came to know about this name... You just tell me what's the connection of this name with sanskaar..." Swara said... "Well...yaa it's the most important name in Bhai's life... He used to love her soo much...but one day..." Lakshya said sadly... " Was she her girlfriend...he used to love her so much that he has closed all the gates to his heart..." Swara thought sadly..." " Tell me lakshya what happened with kavita..." Swara asked... "No swara I don't have any right to tell you about sanskaar's personal life...sorry I think it will be better if he will tell you..." Lakshya said... "Ok... lakshya don't tell me what happened to kavita... But atleast tell me was she his girlfriend..." Swara said half-heartedly... "Girlfriend... What no...Swara no you are taking it all in wrong manner...she was our sister..." Lakshya said coming out of shock... " Oh! I am sorry I just thought..." Swara said coming out of double shock... " Ok I will be leaving now...byee " lakshya said... " Ok..." swara said... "I think we should also leave now..." Swara said... " Ok di... let's come..." Ragini said...



It's already midnight everyone is sleeping but I am not able to sleep every time I close my eyes I see him...his deep dark brown eyes...and then him shouting at me...oh! I am still crying I know he was hurt...I tried to heal him I know none of us were wrong... still it's hurting... Ragini told me ' you dare not to talk to that jerk' ... kavya also said the same... well I can't leave him like this forever but it will take time for me overcome from this meeting...




"Good morning swara..." Kavya said... "Hi kavya...how are you and yaa how is aunty doing..." Swara asked with a fake smile... "Swara give me a hug there's no need to be sad about what happened..." Kavya said hugging tightly swara... " Oh! Kavya it's still hurting..." Swara said with moist eyes parting from hug... "Oh! It's enough swara or you want to be a devdasinow..." Kavya said looking at her moist eyes..." Yaa look at your eyes they have got dark circles..eyes are blood red...uff my sanskudasi..." "You are right kavya..." Swara said wiping her tears..." "No more tears...come let's go..."




At the canteen...

"Uff...Mr. Sehgal... I am telling you swara he will someday eat us and not even a hiccup...here take this hankie stop crying yaar..." Kavya said passing hankie to swara... "I am telling you kavya if I could I would have strangle him to death..."swara said wiping her tears... "You...again here go away I don't wanna talk to you..." Swara said bursting out at sanskaar... "I just wanted to talk to you...now I doubt my desicion...you are insane..." Sanskaar said angrily... " I am insane...oh! Shut up...just because of you that student-eater was ready from tip to toe to eat me up..." Swara said raising her voice... "Me.. what I didn't do anything you were not paying attention in class what's my fault in this..." Sanskaar said annoyingly... "Oh! It was your fault as I was not able to pay attention in class as I was thinking about you... about our yesterday meeting..." Swara said lowering her voice... "See... I told you it was not my fault..." Sanskaar said with authority in voice... "Whatever..." Swara said looking at another directions giving him IDC looks... . " You... Leave it I am going..." Sanskaar said... " Oh! Yeah...yeah just go..." Swara said...


At other side...

"see...your egoistic bro again broke my di's heart...may I ask you something lakshya..." ragini said with a stern look... "oh! I didn't knew things will go like this... ask whatever you want to ask from me..." lakshya said with a sad face... "Hmmm...so can i kill you now" ragini said angriliy... "That's your question..." lakshya asked in a confused state... "Oh! yeah Mr. Maheshwari... now tell me what's your answer" ragini replied... "Hell no... ragini you too are insane just like your sister my bro was absolutely right there..." lakshya replied giving a horrified look... "you...i'll kill you..." ragini starts hitting him... "Ragini...ragini stop yaar I am sorry please give me one more chance..." lakshya said making a puppy face... "yaa...you are right if we will fight with each other then how i am gonna see my di's happy face...okay one more chance granted but this time you should clean this mess totally..." ragini said calming herself... "okay then meet me tomorrow before lectures... " lakshya said... "see...your egoistic bro is coming this way only... I am going remember what you promised..."ragini said while leaving from there... "hmmm... ok"lakshya replied... "Bhai... what was that..."lakshya said angriliy... "you saw her lucky she is insane..." sanskaar said... "no...bhai she is making me insane" lakshya said thinking about ragini... "what..."sanskaar asked in a confused manner... "nothing bhai...but you were there to tell sorry na...then why all this"lakshya asked changing the topic... "I understand lucky I was at fault that's why I went there to ask sorry...and she started fighting what can i do in this..."sanskaar replied... "well...maybe she was off at that time you should also understand na when is the right time to talk..."lakshya said... "well you were at fault...so you should take care na bhai...leave it you will say sorry tomorrow"lakshya said... "No...not again... I am not gonna say any sorry now...let it go...I know I did wrong but it doesn't mean that I have to take my insult once again..." Sanskaar said... " But...bhai.." lakshya said... " No if and but the topic is closed now..." Sanskaar said... "Oh! God now what..." Lakshya saw himself drowning in water and ragini laughing at him... "You are finished lakshya maheshwari" lakshya thought...








Edited by elsanna - 8 years ago
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Ok tani di 😉 👍🏼. Which type u want. The old age dress montage or new college type montage.
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Originally posted by: Nivijo

Ok tani di 😉 👍🏼. Which type u want. The old age dress montage or new college type montage.

Will pm you warna...sab ko pata chal jayega😛😳
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Chapter 4 continued...


Next morning...

"Good morning di..." Ragini said... "Good morning chooti...hmmm what's the time..." Swara said searching her phone... "Well... Di it's already 8 and we are running late..." Ragini said showing swara her phone... "Chooti why didn't you woke me up..." Swara said hurrying to bathroom... "Well di I know you didn't catch your sleep well these days always thinking this thing or that thing..." Ragini said giving swara her clothes... "I love you chooti..." Swara said hurrying... "I know di...go get ready I am ready..." Ragini said...



At college...



"Byee ragini take care..." Swara said... "Di... I am no toddler... stop saying these things...my mates will tease me if they got to know..." Ragini said... "Awww... Ok ragini...take care..." Swara said hurrying to her classroom... She was hurriedly in corridors when she tossed with someone... "Ouch... My forehead... it's hurting..." Swara said...she saw someone was collecting shattered books from ground...the person collected the books and stood up... "Sorry... My concentration was on these books that's why..." Lakshya said... "It's ok lakshya... You study this much... My goodness it's more than 20 books..." Swara said when her eyes felt on a book 'kahi...unkahi battein'... "Wait a minute lakshya...this book looks really interesting..." Swara said showing lakshya the book... "This book oh don't worry I have already read half you can issue it before college gets over as I have to return it today only..." Lakshya said... "Oh! Shit I am already 10 minutes... sorry lakshya I have to hurry..." Swara said panicking... "Hmmm byeee..." Lakshya said... She hurriedly entered in the room but for her bad luck lecturer was already there... " Miss. Bose you are late..." Mr. Singh said... "Sorry sir... It won't happen again" Swara said... "Hmmm I know Miss. Bose you are a sincere child...go sit on that seat..." Mr. Singh said... she saw who was sitting there and then "Oh! Lord again him..." Swara said wishpering to herself... "What happened Miss. Bose any problem..." Mr. Singh said... "No sir not at all..." Swara said... She walked up to there without looking at sanskaar which made sanskaar grin... "Is she seriously looking other side and walking forward...my goodness she is really cutely irritating person..." Sanskaar thought...



After the break...just before college getting over...



"Oh! I forgot about book..."swara said... "Which book swara..." Kavya said... " I have to issue a book from library you two go kavya and ragini... I will come shortly..." Swara said... "Ok di..." Ragini said...



At library...




"Hello sir..." Swara said... "Hello swara... searching something special..." Librarian said... "Yes sir a book... 'Kahi... unkahi battein' " swara said... " I particularly don't remember where it is...you can search it in Hindi books section I guess..." Librarian said... "Ok sir... thanks for the help..." Swara said... Swara was searching the book but she wasn't able to find it on lower shelves so she climbed a ladder for searching upper selves but alas she didn't found the book there also she was coming down from the stairs when she tripped and felt down she thought this time one or two bones might crack but to her surprise she found herself in someone's arms she opened her eyes and..." Why are you always falling around here and there... don't you have any senses how to do anything..." Sanskaar said... "Oh! Shut up...put me down... I don't need your help..." Swara said... "Ok..." He left swara there only and thud... "Ouch...are you mad..." Swara said standing up... "No...but your antics might make me one..." Sanskaar said... " What are you doing here by the way...huhhh...are you stalking me..." Swara asked with an irritated face... "Stalking...and you...no way to street dog has bitten me..." Sanskaar replied..." And yaa I am also here doing what you are doing so let me concentrate on my work..." Sanskaar said searching books... "Oh! Yeah..." Swara said... After a while when swara couldn't find the book she thought to go back she reached the counter to meet librarian but the librarian was not present there she checked her phone... " Oh! No it's already 6 it means librarian closed me here..." Swara said panicking... " For a change it's not me... it's us who are locked here..." Sanskaar said... "Oh! God now what... Let me call ragini..." Swara said... "No use... library is in basement...so network is not working you see I also tried calling lucky..." Sanskaar said... "So what are we going to do..." Swara said... " I don't know maybe we have to spend our night here only..." Sanskaar said... "No sanskaar... I can't wait here...do something mom will be waiting for me..." Swara said... "But what can I do if our cell phones are not working..." Sanskaar said... " Ok... Then you sit here I will bring help..." Swara started shouting... 'help help'. "Swara stop shouting it's not going to help it's all packed with glasses windows..." Sanskaar said closing swara mouth... "Then what are we going to do..." Swara said... "Swara don't panic sit here I am thinking for way out..." Sanskaar said... They were sitting on chairs and thinking their way out... "Sorry swara for whatever happened that day... "Sanskaar said... "It's ok... sanskaar let us be friends..." Swara said forwarding her hand... "Swara I said sorry it doesn't mean we are going to be friends..." Sanskaar said with a firm look... " Sadu... " Swara muttered to herself but it was audible to sanskaar... "You can call me whatever you want it doesn't matter cause I don't want anyone in my life understand..." Sanskaar said looking out of the window... "That's the reason sanskaar why I wanted to help you no one wants to be alone I know you also don't want then why are you pushing yourself away from this world..." Swara said looking straight into his eyes... " Cause you don't understand the pain of loosing someone who are really close to you..."sanskaar said with a moist eyes... "Sanskaar...I do understand I have also loose my dad...but it doesn't mean I will shut everyone out..." Swara said coming closer... "No swara...you don't just stay away..." Sanskaar said shouting at her which makes her cry... "You know my kavita...my life she was the only light in my life after mom and dad died in car accident but GOD snatched that happiness also from me she died swara she died in front of me and I was watching this all helplessly she was only 8 years old when mom and dad left us... I used to take care of her tried to be her everything her mom ...dad and brother we were happy swara but he who is above the clouds didn't likes my happiness...on her 16th birthday she was coming back from her school when she saw a hurted puppy...the puppy was lying on middle of the road she reached there to help the puppy but speeding truck hit her... I was on the other side of the road she saved the puppy swara but died then and there only I was couldn't do anything swara... Now you tell me swara how can I allow anyone to come close to me...when I am a bad luck for everyone..." Sanskaar said crying his heart out... " No sanskaar... It's not your fault... She died because of that bus driver not because of you...and about leaving you... I promise sanskaar I will never leave you alone ..." Swara said... " No swara I will kill you too go away from me..." Sanskaar said crying miserably... "You... You will kill me sanskaar...who is always present at right time to save me from every accident...no sanskaar it's impossible..." Swara said crying harder... "If I have hurted you in any way sanskaar... I am sorry..." Swara said wiping his tears... "I am also sorry swara for hurting you every time when you were there to heal me... Will you be my friend..." Sanskaar said wiping her tears... "Yes sanskaar..." Swara said wiping his tears and then both hugged each other to feel that they are not alone anymore...







A friend who understand your tears is much more valuable than a lot of friends who only know your smile...
Edited by elsanna - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Tani,
Nice story! Waiting to see how it shapes up. Personally I loved past life more... and Sanskar's deep dark brown eyes!!! Does Sanskar have dreams too? Let us know..

-Dyuti
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Such an awesome update love it already
You are incredible writer and thanks for the update
Really waiting for next
This one is for you ⭐️ 👏
Happy weekend and merry Christmas
Lots of love
love you Tani partner

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