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Posted: 8 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: anika2

Superb tani... Donkey& sadist 😊 loved the epi, kavya is so sweet.. but lots of cofusion about the connection b/w moksha & swara & about those two men. Update nxt soon or else i'll become mad out of thi suspense😛

Thanks anika😳 ar confuse karna to mera param dharm hai😛😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks kritz😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Monucute

Hey!
Man that was an awesome start..
Sorry for my late latifi, was being held by college projects😛
Thanks for pm..
Update soon

It happens dear...😳 glad you liked it😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
Wow tani...
Awesome chapter...full entertaining..

Soo sanlak enters the story of swaragini...well sanky is little reserve..more thanswara..that why she was irritated n lucky is chatterbox..even ragini is chirpy..but still both swaragini are annoyed with sanlak behaivior.but did not realise they are quite same...kavya constant teasing was soo cute...these trio are amazing...even shomi is not typical mom..very friendly like friend to swaragini...your conversations part are nicely penned...swara dream part was interesting...are raglak going to be in dream parts????or its just swasan reincarnation???

Talia


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Originally posted by: krishuuu

Wow tani...

Awesome chapter...full entertaining..

Soo sanlak enters the story of swaragini...well sanky is little reserve..more thanswara..that why she was irritated n lucky is chatterbox..even ragini is chirpy..but still both swaragini are annoyed with sanlak behaivior.but did not realise they are quite same...kavya constant teasing was soo cute...these trio are amazing...even shomi is not typical mom..very friendly like friend to swaragini...your conversations part are nicely penned...swara dream part was interesting...are raglak going to be in dream parts????or its just swasan reincarnation???

Talia


Thanks Talia di...🤗 well ragya being part of past...😕 can't tell you now😛 wait for some time😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 3
{Angel in pain}

One of the hardest decision in life is choosing whether to move on or stay in...


She didn't knew when she got up from that dreadful but now she was in a dilemma whether to share it with her mom or not but then she thought that it will give more stress to mom so at last she decided to move on from that dreadful dream... after eating a little supper ragini and swara reached college... where she met kavya...


"Swara did you completed your project..." Kavya asked... "Oh! My Lord how can I forget about the project...shit man professor sehgal gonna kill me today..." Swara replied worrying... "No swara...she will not kill you alone I will also accompany you in dying..." Kavya said... "Oh! I don't want us to die this soon... let's complete it before it's too late..." Swara said... "Well... great idea but how..." Kavya inquired... "Library...dear now come fast..." Swara replied grinning... "Ooo yeah... God bless me also with a little brain..." Kavya said making a silly face... "Kavya you such a drama queen...now come..." Swara said laughing sweetly... They were working on there project kavya got a phone call since librarian told her not to disturb the library she excused herself from there saying she will be back in ten minutes but when she didn't showed up even after 20 minutes swara decided to check upon her for which she excused herself from library... "Where is she my GOD I completed both the projects and she is no where to be seen..." Swara said... She was walking down stairs murmuring to herself when she tripped...she was about to fall when a strong pair of hand pulled her...she landed oh that man chest when she opened her eyes she again saw those deep brown eyes which again melted her...they both came out of their eye lock when kavya showed up there... "Swara... Good morning..." Kavya said teasing Swara... " "Thanks..."but before she could complete her sentence he was gone again... "Hmmm... swara again in arms of your dream boy...not bad haa..." Kavya said grinning hard... "Shut up kavya...here take your project now let's go for class..." Swara said half-heartedly... They were chilling out in break when ragini invited kavya for her birthday which was accepted by kavya whole-heartedly...




Swara was getting ready when she got to know that cake wasn't there and guests would be there at any time...she decided to bring the cake on her own...she was on her way back to home when some stray goons started teasing... " Hey...sexy where are you going come with us..." Goons said coming closer to her... "Leave my way or else I will call the police..." Swara said showing some courage in front of them... "Well going to celebrate someone birthday we guess feed us some also..." Goons said coming even closer to her...she tried calling police station when one of the goon came forward and snatched her phone...she slapped the goon but it made the situation more complicated... "How dare you slap me... you have to pay for this girl come with us..." The goon holds her hand so hard that she starts sobbing... "Leave my hand... please let me go..." Swara said pleading to them... The goon was about to tarnish her image when he received a hard punch on his face which led in setting swara free... She saw sanskaar was the person who punched them but after that punch it broke into a street fight among sanskaar and goons some people also came there to help them and after pinch of time police came there as swara called officer just after she was set free... Swara was still sobbing badly when sanskaar came forward and coiled her in his jacket... "Swara you alright..." Sanskaar asked coiling her... "Hmmm I am alright... sanskaar..." Swara replied in a shaky voice... "Well then I will be going now..." Sanskaar said... "Hmmm okay..." Swara said... "Will you be able to walk alone..." Sanskaar asked... "Of course not you idiot..." Swara thought... "Hmm I can..." Swara replied... "Well I don't feel you will be if you don't mind I can walk along..." Sanskaar said when he felt everyone else present around were gazing at swara... They were walking together with out any exchange of words when suddenly swara stopped... "Oh! Shit man I forgot about the cake totally now what we have covered half a way..." Swara said panicking... "Hmmm cake...well I know a place it's just a few steps behind you wait here I will be back in 5 minutes..." Sanskaar said making her comfortable on bus stop... She was thinking sitting there about what happened just a few minutes ago...and she could only real those deep brown eyes... After a while he returned with a cake in his hand... "Swara here is the cake now let's go..." Sanskaar said hurrying... " Thanks sanskaar how much did you paid for this..." Swara inquired... "Well it doesn't matter come fast..." Sanskaar said... "Ok..." Swara replied... After this they spent their journey in utter silence... "Sanskaar I can from here...byee... I don't want my mom to panic..." Swara said... "Hmmm okay..." Sanskaar said... After that party moved on an ease well she was able to hide what happened in the birthday chaos... Now she was in the bed thinking what all was happening around past few days it's been a week after that incident it seems to be habit of her to be in trouble and he being the saviour but it seems how hard she tried to talk to him he ignores but even after that she couldn't ignore the fact that she was attracted towards him how hard she tried not to think about him not to be around him but her heart and mind were not in her control her mind wanted to go way from him...but heart finds an immense pleasure around him at last she decided to talk about this to kavya... "Kavya I don't know what's happening to me but I feel that I am bounded by my heart to be around him he always ignores me...not even me he tries to ignore everyone present around him always in his own thoughts always sad I want to save him...just like he saves me from every wrong fate of mine..." Swara said showing her dilemma... "Well... Swara accept it you are in love with him..." Kavya said clearing her thoughts... "I don't know kavya if I am or not...I just want to heal him..." Swara said... "Well then you have to confront him ask him what's the reason of his sadness why he is so alone in this world..." Kavya said... "Yes...but I can't do this alone will you come with me..." Swara said... "Of course swara...ok byee good night... take care..." Kavya said...




Edited by elsanna - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Continue...


It was already morning and swara was outside the college waiting for kavya but when she didn't showed up even after college started swara called kavya... "Kavya what happened why are you not here it's already late..." Swara asked... "Swara...I am sorry I can't come today as mom is not well...but you don't worry I have told everything to ragini she will accompany you..." Kavya said... "Oh! Please take care of aunty... We will handle it don't worry..." Swara said assuring kavya... "Hmmm ok give me the updates time to time..." Kavya said grinning... "Ok drama queen..." Swara said... Since it was already classes time so she decided to talk to him in lunch break... "Di...are you sure you goona talk to that ignore master..." Ragini said pointing towards sanskaar who was sitting alone on a table with a book on his right hand and coffee in left... "Well I know he is so rude...but I find his rudeness just to hide from people around him I know there must be some reason why he is like this...I am very sure about this ragini... don't worry..." Swara said assuring ragini... "Well I don't want to interfere in you two..." Ragini said showing thumbs up to swara... "Ok... thanks..." Swara said... she didn't knew what was next but she reached there with a firm determination she took a seat next to sanskaar without waiting for his permission... "Hey sanskaar... I want to thank you about everything you have done to me in previous days... You have came as an angel in my life who always stands in front of me to protect me in every manner and I feel that angel is in immense pain..." Swara said with a heavy heart... "Swara you are welcome but please don't enter my life and what pain are you talking about..." Sanskaar said rudely... "I know there is something which you are hiding from everyone behind this rude face... I have seen the pain which your eyes reflect..." Swara said having tear in corner of her eyes... "Which pain swara stop right there..." Sanskaar said in anger... But before she could reply to his question the wind around her wishpered something in her ears while made a lone tear escape from her eyes... "Kavita..." Swara said... "Who told you about kavita...look I don't know how you came to know about her but I don't want to talk to you now or any day...just get lost from here...and never try to cross me again..." Sanskaar said shouting at swara... And then be left from there leaving swara all shattered...she also returned to ragini crying her out... "Di I told you before he is rude jerk..." Ragini said in anger comforting swara... "I know ragini but I just wanted to help him..." Swara said crying on ragini shoulder... "But di who told you about kavita..." Ragini said puzzled... "The wind passing by wishpered kavita in my ears... I don't know if this thing is possible or not but it happened and I without thinking twice blurted it out in front of sanskaar... Oh! How idiot I am I opened his closed wounds once again..." Swara started crying miserably when they both hear someone's footsteps...



The prettiest smile hides the deepest secrets. The prettiest eyes have cried the most tears and the kindest heart have felt most the pain...
Edited by elsanna - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69
Mere ko pata hai aapne kis liye res kiya hai 😉. So I too res 😈 . First me 😃 😳.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So guys done with chapter 3... I don't know why after that long writing of 1st post it was not accepting more so I continued in just below post... 😳

Baccha pata nai kyun wo siggi mai nai daal paa rahi hu isme... If anyone can help me in there please do it it's a really nice siggi made by nivedita for my ff...😭


And yaa guys please tell me which ff update do you all want next...
1. Moksha

2. Mujhe jeena shikha diya

3. Ek chooti si bhool


Tani🤗

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