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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Aheli 🤗🤗

So glad to see you here. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum



Hey Kriti 🤗🤗

So thrilled to know that you loved this OS. 😊 🤗

Yes, Sanskaar is feeling absolutely heartbroken and anguished, and Swara in turn, feels a lot of pain seeing him like this---a shell of his former self. Sanskaar has become embittered and vengeful, but as you mentioned, he is absolutely broken from inside. And no matter what gray shades he may portray, one thing hasn't changed---he has a heart of gold, and deep within, he would always love Swara.

I hope to see Swara fighting for their love, to retrieve Sanskaar once again from that dark morass of pain and rage. She can do it, with her love. 😳 😊

Lots of Love,

----Viji

hey hun...

maybe u can continue with just one more part on how Swara wins Sanskar back...I would totally love to a see a happy ending because most stories in d Forum is nowadays is filled with Sanky leaving Swara...pliiiz happy wala ending dedoh na...

Love
Kriti

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakura24

Got to rise earlier tomorrow so res for now..meanwhile I think you have convinced me to start watching SR again if anything along these lines are expected in the menu:-) Good night sis...!


Hi dearest,🤗
A late unres, as it has been the case recently. I should confess properly that I have completely given up on the show. It is because I can't bring myself to let the present of the storyline destroy the beautiful memories I have of the past glorious moments...that otp only lives in fictional world nowadays. It is in fics like these they come to grip the full essence of what they are...their gloriously intense emotional bindings restored in roaring fires, pains and trials that only serves to mold them better added to the mixture.

I always admire the way you deal with Swasan, there is love in its sublime beauty and deep running roots of intensity but nothing too fanciful or utterly fluff that would make the whole thing sugar floss. They are as human as you and me in your writing, people with blood tears and flaws to their being. What I adore most is that in spite of all that they have courage to always hold on to each other in the most impossible of situations.

Here the story hints at a probable role reversal. What I mean to say is Sanskar has always been the earth of their equation, providing the stable anchor point as well as the path finder in all scenarios to Swara's water like nature. Now is the time when the compressed emotional turmoils of earth is finally gonna erupt in the form of the most impactful of volcanos. The scorching lava of intense agony running everywhere setting all ablaze. Wouldn't it be the cool water now coming to play in and all different persona to extinguish the flames before they causes some unstoppable harm to themselves and the others? I liked how you played with the possibility not really stamping upon a fate for them to follow but choosing to muse in Swara's voice of cause, that it had been her who pulled him in to the light once...can't she do it again?
Wonderfully, wonderfully done!
Just, I know there's no way something so masterful would occur to our CVs. If so, world would have been a beautiful place to live and watch serials 😛

Love you loads,
Saku
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Saku dearest 🤗🤗

Shall revert to your lovely comment tomorrow. 🤗 So very touched by all your warm words.

Lots of Love

Viji
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum



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Hey Aheli 🤗🤗

So glad to see you here. 😊
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Unresed @9. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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My Dearest Aheli and Nita


So immensely touched by your warm words. 🤗
🤗

Shall reply tomorrow, dears. All my free time is going on typing up the final proof of the long due Chapter 6, of Destined by Choice.

Will reply as soon as I finish posting the chapter. 😊


Lots of Love,

----Viji
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

<font size="2">My Dearest Aheli and Nita


So immensely touched by your warm words. 🤗</font><font size="2">🤗

Shall reply tomorrow, dears. All my free time is going on typing up the final proof of the long due Chapter 6, of Destined by Choice.

Will reply as soon as I finish posting the chapter. 😊


Lots of Love,

----Viji
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Take ur time Viji dear. 😃 And I still now have lots of pending res, so trying to unres them within this week. 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98


Take ur time Viji dear. 😃 And I still now have lots of pending res, so trying to unres them within this week. 😆



Take your time, Aheli dear 🤗🤗


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Posted: 8 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Res Viji dearest. 😳
Unresed. 😃
Viji!! 🤗
What to say darling?? It was mindblowing!👏 I'm really speechless! 😳 The way u penned SwaSan's pain, agony, frustration! Brilliant! 👏 Loved the way how Sanskar controlled his anger and at the ending Swara was determined to win her love, her life, Sanskar back. 😃 😉 I loved this OS so much dear. ❤️ Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.


My Dearest Aheli 🤗🤗


So happy to know that you loved this OS. I wanted to capture Sanskaar's heartbreak and anguish, the way his agony was literally eating away at him from inside. I feel very touched that you felt it portrayed his emotions well.

Swara feels his pain keenly too---in this fic, I made her resolve firmly, that she would succor Sanskaar, heal the hurt she had caused him. And bring him back once again, out of all that pain and bitterness.

Lots of Love 🤗🤗


Viji
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Posted: 8 years ago
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My Dearest Nita and Saku 🤗🤗

Will revert to both your marvelous comments in detail, tomorrow.


Loads of Love 🤗🤗

Viji

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