SwaSan Drabble OS ---- The Color Black

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Nivijo
Res viji. Will Unres after reading it once again. Lost in sanskar 😳
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Viji,
This is amazingly marvelous. U know I totally get lost into ur characters. U seriously are an outstanding writer. Mera sanky 😳. This is the sanskar I always wanted but he was lost long ago in the serial. Glad cvs are again bringing that sanky back. Swara has, hopefully, realized that she was equally wrong. Now she is all set to manao her sanskar. Want u to continue this plz. Of course only if u are free.

Black is one of fav colors apart from red, blue, green and brown. Almost all are dark. But black is a fascinating color. Black, as many of us believe, is known as the end of everything. But we do forget that with an ending there is a new begining. If there is a shiva who destroys the world, then there is certainly a brahma to create a new one, isn't it. When I connect the thoughts which I get on seeing this color with swasan, I certainly feel we would be getting completely new swasan where swara prioritizes sanskar above anyone else ( at least a few times)and sanskar keeping his anger in control. Let us see how this shapes up.
Love u loads
Nivi

My Dear Nivi 🤗🤗🤗

I can't tell you how touched I was, with your amazingly lovely comment. It really made my day, my weekend. 😊 Felt thrilled to know that you loved this OS so much.

I agree completely---I am very eager to see how the serial portrays the return of the embittered, gray shaded Sanskaar. He has just so many layers, shades, angles and edges to his nature. 😊 There is truly a lot of depth to his character, even in this 'gray' avatar, he is literally a devilishly determined and demoniacally smart character, with a beating heart of gold. 😳

Swara certainly has to take the first step, and then some more, in order to succor Sanskaar, and alleviate the grievous hurt which she caused him. It is not a question of whether all the fault was hers, if Sanskaar also did some mistakes or not. That is ultimately a futile discussion. The point was, that when she should have stood by him, supported him through thick and thin and kept their disputes to be aired between both of them within the sanctity of their home, she elected to leave him even though he had clearly indicated he could not accept that. To that extent, she did terribly wrong by him. And now, no question about it---she has to set that right again.

It would be a difficult task, for now Sanskaar's wounds run very deep, and he would find it difficult to immediately trust her again. But her love for him is true and intense---I have never doubted that. She just needs to put him right up there on her list of priorities, just as Sanskaar always holds her the most dear.

Your outlining of the meaning of the color black, the nuances it carries, was superb. 👏 👏 Couldn't agree with you more. Truly, as you said, it indicates the destruction and the close of an old system/ world view. And hopefully, the creation of a new and wonderful one.

Loads of Love, 🤗🤗

----Viji

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: sarathy321
Wonderful os

Thanks so much, Arathy. Long time no see. 😊

Glad you loved this OS.

Cheers

---Viji

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: lucky.m
I am super late ..For me 😳😳😳
I love u viji 🤗..I will be back soon ..running to read😊

Lucky my dear 🤗🤗

Love you loads too. 🤗 I shall reply in detail to your latter comment in just a bit. 😊

Loads of Love,

----Viji

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Sanya17
wow if they show scenes like this in the show instead of unnecessary sister drama the show will be superhit i loved loved this story swara needs to have some reality check she has always chosen her selfish murderer sister over sanskar she has chosen the person who dont give a damn about her over the person whose life revolves around her such huge wrong decision has huge result in llife and call me sadistic but i want ragini to try kill swara again resulting in injured sanskar and when sanskar recovers i want him to leave swara that will be swaras real punishment losing the only person who loves her deeply madly for the person who never loved her who always hated

i loved that in your story you made swara realise her mistakes thats why i loved your version of swara but in the show i am very doubtful that the cvs will never make swara realise her mistakes

it is an awesome story

Hey Sanya 🤗🤗

So thrilled to know that you loved this OS. I completely agree----Swara needs to now focus on Sanskaar, she needs to go that extra mile in order to soothe all the grievous hurt caused to his heart, soul and psyche.

I don't doubt the fact that she loves him. Her love for Sanskaar is true and intense. But somewhere, she does not place him at the very top of her list of priorities. Whereas for Sanskaar, Swara comes first and foremost, before anyone else, himself included. Swara places Sanskaar before herself, plenty of times. But when it comes to immediate or even extended family, somehow she tends to get diverted into the drive of keeping family together, soothing tensions, ensuring family unity and peace, etc. And in that quest, noble and good as it may be, she loses sight of Sanskaar's feelings, his needs and wants, his self respect. That is what has brought them to this pass. Splitting hairs on whether some fault lay with Sanskaar too, is to my mind, pointless.

Let's see how the serial takes it. I also hope they don't invent some elaborate reason for the misunderstanding between SwaSan 6 months prior. Yes, perhaps it could be said that Sanskaar needs to try and control his overwhelming, overpowering rage. But the thing is, he normally never descends to that fury, It only happens when he is pushed, intolerably and forcibly pushed, beyond a tolerance level. But ok, he needs to work on his temper perhaps---but equally, and even more so, Swara needs to work on letting go of her constant quest for the greater good. She needs to focus on the person most important to her, who loves her above all else and always will. They need to be happy first---because for how long can she ensure others' happiness in the family, if she and her husband are so unhappy?

Very touched by your comment,

Lots of Love,

----Viji

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: lucky.m

God viji 🤗..this is absolutely fantastic ..⭐️⭐️ I love this Sanskaar and swara at the end not willing to give up . I literally had goosebumps all over👏👏 and the title the color - Black how perfectly apt .. reflecting Sanskaar's Pain and his current state .. and that line on doing right things in wrong way👍🏼 👍🏼..wish swara would have realized that ..when would she

This drabble ..all pain and anguish of Swasan esp of Sanskaar ,,👏 loved it darlin

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Lucky

My Dearest Lucky 🤗🤗🤗

So thrilled that you loved this OS, yaar. Means a lot. 😳 I really wanted to write this piece portraying Sunny boy's immense anguish and heartbreak, the way he has become so embittered and broken from within, at the way Swara left him 6 months back.

He really has gone back to that layered, complex, gray shaded character. Its really compelling, the angles and sharp edges to his nature----the devilishly diabolical man with a still beating heart of gold. 😳 😉 And try as he might to hate Swara, he simply cannot do so. She has seeped so much into his very being.

Yeah, I have always felt that it is one of Swara's weaknesses. Her intentions are always noble and good. But several times, she takes the wrong way to do the right thing. Which leads to the question, when the path chosen is so terribly wrong, does it not make the end itself no longer right or admirable? 😕

Really touched that you loved the portrayal of Sanskaar and Swara's emotions here. 😳 🤗

Loads of Love,

----Viji

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: luvakanksha
Perfect piece of work
Sanskar's hurt and Swara's breakdown was heart wrenching to read.
And the swara's determination to correct herself n bring him back was 👏
I loved it.
This track is so good, like our old fake marriage days where people were forced to write n read on Swasan.
Great work.

My Dear Akanksha 🤗🤗🤗

So happy to hear from you, its been a long time. 😊 Am thrilled to hear that you loved this OS, the portrayal of Sanskaar and Swara's emotions.

I agree with you completely, this track has a lot of potential, could go on to become a watershed in the SwaSan story, just like those memorable fake marriage days. Theirs is already a classic, legendary love story, and this could well make it even more so, with its intensity and depth. Lets keep our fingers crossed that the CVs portray it powerfully. 😊

Very touched by your words.🤗

Love,

---Viji

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: svg98
Hey Viji,
This drabble dedicated to me..thank u so so much.. I can't believe it really.. But still thank u so much..

Res for drabble
Love,
Piya

Hey Piya 🤗🤗

Of course its dedicated to you too, you know how much I value your feedback. You have always been so very motivating. 🤗 😊

Lots of Love,

----Viji