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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Helee
Hey viji,

What a beautiful os...the pain which the both feel was so evident in your words...and equally beautiful end will it's not end but a beginning of love story all over again... 😳

Lots of love ...stay blessed. 😳

Hey Helee my dear 🤗🤗🤗

So very glad you loved this, yaar. Was very touched that you felt the OS conveyed SwaSan's anguish and heartbreak.

Lots of Love,

-----Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
Dialogues of Devdas were apt ..i loved them..

Yup Swara is guilty here..
She has to repent her mistake..

Thanks

Hey Bhardwaj 🤗🤗

So glad you loved this OS and the dialogues. 😊

True, Swara has realized that she had done terribly wrong by Sanskaar. Her remorse and contrition is genuine, and she feels a lot of pain, seeing his heartbreak and anguish. She has resolved to bring Sanskaar out of that dark shell of bitterness, rage and vengeance; once again.

Cheers

----Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: ...Penknife...
This absolutely wonderful viji❤️
I've been away from swasanland for a while and this is the first fic I've read on coming back and this is such a treat!!
I love each and every bit of it.
I love the way you write🤗

I would love to type out a long description of how I was bowled over by the sheer beauty of this story, but I've class tomorrow and my half an hour is almost used up. 😭
And I also know I have to reply to all your PM'S and I promise I'd do it soon you know how much I adore your stories right?? Will reply asap. Pinky promise😆

It's been so long, I hope you and kiddo and everyone's doing well
Loads of love
Nandu🤗

My Dearest Nandu 🤗🤗🤗

So very happy to know that you loved this OS. And really touched by your warm words about my writing.

Like I said the other day, please don't worry about the comments. Do so when time permits, no rush.

Hope your classes and papers go well. 🤗

Lots of Love,

----Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: sharif_lafungi
dearest viji...🤗
though i m keeping myself away from the show for time being...I still keep tabs...current track definitely has potential...rest on CVS..
coming to the one shot..
this was enigmatic.. I loved it totally.
our dark sanskar,the one who is what he is on face,
who believes in tit for tat...
full of hurt nd indifference...yet the concern nd love couldn't be masked...
he once mentioned her love for family is one thing with which he fell for her...never he knew that the same
quality will choke the very essence of their relationship..
I loved how u didn't create some reason for swara's ruthless behaviour six months back.. u kept it the way it was. ..nd I must say the acceptance swara had here is what we all crave to see in future...she knows she pulled him out of his darkness nd
again pushed him back. nd this time. he is quite deep within...it won't be easy to mend things but her determination is another attribute that her sanskar is a fan of...
a beautifully penned down dream of all the swasanians...
cheers...
akanksha

My Dearest Akku 🤗🤗

So very thrilled to know that you loved this OS. 😳 🤗

I agree with you completely, this track has an immense amount of potential. Would be great to see the return of the gray shaded Sanskaar, devilishly devious, and yet with a heart of gold. 😊 His is really such a compelling character, with so much intricate depth to his nature, so many layers, shades, angles and edges!

Yes, Sanskaar certainly has become embittered and vengeful; he is trying to portray nothing by rage and hatred towards Swara. But try as he may, his deep rooted love for her comes gushing out as concern and care, which he cannot completely hide, nor can he ever remove from his heart.

Swara really does not have an excuse for whatever happened 6 months back, not how I see it. She is a large hearted, genuine person---I hope they show her realization that in her constant effort to do good for the family, she did a terrible wrong to the person who loved her more than anyone else; who never demanded anything of her except her faith, love and companionship, the same which he always showered on her without stint.

He has again been pushed back into that dark morass of despair and anguish, and she needs to take the first step, and then more, to pull him out again. The going is certainly going to be tough, but she needs to do it. For herself, as well as for Sanskaar.

And like you said, her grit and resolve is something that Sanskaar always loved. 😊 😳

Loads of Love,

-----Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: aamias
Viji🤗, after a long time isnt it really missed u . little busy due to puja and also bcoz uncle is sick
i really loved the os re i want another os to know the next part
i will try to write more if i get time

Hey Asmita 🤗🤗🤗

So nice to hear from you yaar, been a long time. Missed you too!

Take care of yourself, no rush on the comments. Do so when time permits.

I am so very happy you loved this OS yaar. At the moment I don't plan a sequel, I need to complete my ongoing SS Destined by Choice. And then the SwaSan 3S I've just started: Games People Play. Maybe after that. 😊

Lots of Love,

----Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: reeyacute
Hi viji
After a long time...i have read an os...really loved it
This track of swaragini is very interesting with tashan between swasan...reading an os relating to it is fun...loved the title 'The colour black', sanskars recent outfit.

My Dear Reeya 🤗🤗

Nice to hear from you after a long time. 😊 So very glad to know that you loved this OS. And yes, Sanskaar certainly has become the 'Man in Black', no? I feel we are in for a very intense track, with the return of the brooding, embittered, devilishly smart Sanskaar with shades of gray----but all the same, with a heart of gold! He is going to have so many fascinating layers, shades, facets, angles and edges to his nature! 😊

Lots of Love,

----Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: kriti_sologar
i am not really good with detailed comments but dang!! this was one heck of a drabble...sanskar is in so much pain that swara cant see him in...she is also going through the same oain and as for sanskar he is very defeated at the moment...just trying to stay strong but broken from the inside...ohhh soo happy that swara has decided to fight for hhim...awsuuum work dear...loved it very much!!

Hey Kriti 🤗🤗

So thrilled to know that you loved this OS. 😊 🤗

Yes, Sanskaar is feeling absolutely heartbroken and anguished, and Swara in turn, feels a lot of pain seeing him like this---a shell of his former self. Sanskaar has become embittered and vengeful, but as you mentioned, he is absolutely broken from inside. And no matter what gray shades he may portray, one thing hasn't changed---he has a heart of gold, and deep within, he would always love Swara.

I hope to see Swara fighting for their love, to retrieve Sanskaar once again from that dark morass of pain and rage. She can do it, with her love. 😳 😊

Lots of Love,

----Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Hi Friends 🤗🤗

I guess I have completed my individual replies to all your amazing comments. In case I have left someone out inadvertently, give me a quick shout and I shall respond. 😊

Loads of Love,

----Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: kritz4ever
loved it

Thanks 😊 Glad to know you liked it.

Cheers

Viji

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Aheli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#60

Res Viji dearest. 😳
Unresed. 😃
Viji!! 🤗
What to say darling?? It was mindblowing!👏 I'm really speechless! 😳 The way u penned SwaSan's pain, agony, frustration! Brilliant! 👏 Loved the way how Sanskar controlled his anger and at the ending Swara was determined to win her love, her life, Sanskar back. 😃 😉 I loved this OS so much dear. ❤️ Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago

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