SwaSan Drabble OS ---- The Color Black

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: srividhya87
Excellent work..
I love this OS a lot..
U had potrayed Sanskaar's feelings perfectly..
The pain is easily visible...

Hey Srividhya 🤗🤗

So very happy to know that you loved this OS immensely. 😳🤗

And Sanskaar is such a compelling character, with such fascinating layers, shades, facets and edges to his nature. It's a lovely compliment to be told, that I managed to portray his gut wrenching emotions, his pain, in a way that you found perfect. I feel so very touched and blessed by those warm words.

I have posted an OS "The Color Green" yesterday, which is in the same continuum as "The Color Black". Do read when time permits , and let me know what you felt.

Love,

Viji

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Hey Viji
Unres on page 3
Love,
Piya

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: svg98
Hey Viji
Unres on page 3
Love,
Piya

Hey Piya 🤗🤗

Will reply on that lovely, awesome comment; the soonest I can.

Happy Saal Mubarak. 🤗

Lots of Love,

----Viji

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Viji darling...😉

Stupendous OS..👏.cherished it... black...i just love black for me its soothing color...The color black relates to the hidden, the secretive and the unknown... it creates an air of mystery.In color psychology this color gives protection from external emotional stress.It creates a barrier between itself and the outside world, providing comfort while protecting its emotions and feelings, and hiding its vulnerabilities, insecurities...😃 exactly what sanky is doing😉..read it internet...

Well you are the best when it comes to emotion quotient...the inner turmoils n deep thinking...im so impressed ...you know that already...i love u😳

im actually super late n nearly 27 post behind..im actually counting n unreserving slowly...but catching up...😭

About OS...i feel horrible for sanky...you all described so well the situation n possible reactions...but i only wonder about reunion...how will cvs or u reach to that point...how will swara realise.or convince sanky..?? Becoz for me swara is more wrong that sanky...even sanky said few things in anger but swara actually ruined everything by declaring never to wear sindhoor n mangalsutre... in intense moment they parted...n it will be difficult for both to forgive each other..im soo scared..they will unite..but how is the question..??that all i think about...u do give us sequel to all OS...n possible reunion...which is still very far...im sure...definetly will read your version...thank u for this...

Off to read green...😃

Love

Talia

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Talia sweetheart 🤗🤗

So incredibly moved by your comment, and very glad that you loved the emotional quotient here, Sanskaar's anguish and heartbreak. Poor guy is going through so very much. 😭

I shall revert in detail, to my hearts content, to your lovely message. Just bear with me till I finish Part 2 of 'Solaris Rising'.

Loads of Love

Viji