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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: DivineDarkness
BRILLIANT 👏 Take a bow Viji
Make it No Copy and remove Members Only so non members can read. Sharing it in Twitter tagging RS hope she reads

Leki sweetheart 🤗🤗🤗

So glad to see you here yaar. And I am all 😳 ☺️ at your warm words. Immensely touched.

You shared on twitter and tagged RS? 😳 ☺️ Yikes, I don't know what to say. Feel thrilled, that you liked it so very much.

Loads of Love,

-----Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
And I read it in hurry the first time. I loved the poem in the end, it was beautiful and very apt for this OS.
I did ramble in the earlier post, but somehow seem to find more to go on.

Swara's realisation was quite profound, for once she realised that there could be a wrong way to do a right thing. And when the result is so wrong, is the right thing right anymore?

But she has a very long way to go indeed, the first time wrong she was the one making an objective assessment of the situation. Now when she has to bring him back, she is too involved and too emotional. It will be a tough road indeed.

love,
Nyna

Nynu my dear 🤗🤗

Replied to this lovely comment, together with my revert on the earlier one 😊 🤗

Loads of Love,

----Viji

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Dialogues of Devdas were apt ..i loved them..

Yup Swara is guilty here..
She has to repent her mistake..

Thanks

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

dearest viji...🤗
though i m keeping myself away from the show for time being...I still keep tabs...current track definitely has potential...rest on CVS..
coming to the one shot..
this was enigmatic.. I loved it totally.
our dark sanskar,the one who is what he is on face,
who believes in tit for tat...
full of hurt nd indifference...yet the concern nd love couldn't be masked...
he once mentioned her love for family is one thing with which he fell for her...never he knew that the same
quality will choke the very essence of their relationship..
I loved how u didn't create some reason for swara's ruthless behaviour six months back.. u kept it the way it was. ..nd I must say the acceptance swara had here is what we all crave to see in future...she knows she pulled him out of his darkness nd
again pushed him back. nd this time. he is quite deep within...it won't be easy to mend things but her determination is another attribute that her sanskar is a fan of...
a beautifully penned down dream of all the swasanians...
cheers...
akanksha

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aamias

@aamias

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Viji🤗, after a long time isnt it really missed u . little busy due to puja and also bcoz uncle is sick

i really loved the os re i want another os to know the next part

i will try to write more if i get time

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reeyacute

@reeyacute

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Hi viji

After a long time...i have read an os...really loved it

This track of swaragini is very interesting with tashan between swasan...reading an os relating to it is fun...loved the title 'The colour black', sanskars recent outfit.

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kriti_atharv

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

i am not really good with detailed comments but dang!! this was one heck of a drabble...sanskar is in so much pain that swara cant see him in...she is also going through the same oain and as for sanskar he is very defeated at the moment...just trying to stay strong but broken from the inside...ohhh soo happy that swara has decided to fight for hhim...awsuuum work dear...loved it very much!!

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

I am so immensely touched by all the warm feedback guys. 🤗🤗 You've made my weekend so very special. 😳🤗

Had started off with my individual replies yesterday, have done quite a few, and shall catch up with all pending, over next few days.

It means a lot, to know you loved the portrayal of Sanskaar and Swara's pain and anguish in this one. Sanskaar's present embittered, vengeful and gray shaded avatar is very fascinating indeed...a devilishly determined and devious man, with a heart of gold. 😉😳

Lots of Love

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Red.orchid
Awesome

Dear Sadhana 🤗🤗

Very glad to know you loved it.

Cheers

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Kiara.25
Viji🤗
It is sooo good. 👏👏👏 Swara's monologue was beautifully written. The pain they had gone through and will to make it right👏👏.
Love every bit of it.
love
kiara

Hey Kiara 🤗🤗🤗

So very touched by your warm words about this OS. Really thrilled to know that you loved the portrayal of both Sanskaar and Swara's emotions; his anguish and intense heartbreak, and her pain at seeing him suffer like this.

Swara certainly needs to muster the resolve to set things right. She needs to take those vital steps needed, to succor Sanskaar, and bring him once again back to the light, out of the dark emotions of bitterness, fury and vengeance which are tearing him apart from within.

It made my day, to hear that you liked this so much. 😳

Love,

---Viji

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