SwaSan Drabble OS ---- The Color Black - Page 2

My Dearest Friends 🤗🤗🤗


I am literally in tears at all the moving comments on this Drabble. I was motivated to write it, by all the raw pain and anguish Sanskaar/VK portrayed so masterfully yesterday. To me, this ranks right up there with the finest Sanskaar moments. It is literally impossible to separate the performer from the role-----VK breathes so much passion into his performance, Sanskaar is Varun, and Varun is Sanskaar.

Feeling completely humbled and blessed by the warmth and love in your feedback. Please bear with me for the delay in replying, I am caught up in a massive pile up of work, and I must confess, I procrastinated a few urgent tasks when I felt compelled to pen this drabble in the morning. 😊 So I have only myself to blame. 😉

Will be back with PMs and individual replies, the soonest I can. And for those who are asking me to continue this...guys, love you for all the motivation and love. But I need to finish my SS Destined by Choice first, and then also roll out chapters on Games People Play. 😊 Maybe after that? Lets see how the plot plays out in the serial, I just might get the mojo for a sequel then. 😉

Loads and Loads of Love,

-----Viji

Viji🤗

Res viji. Will Unres after reading it once again. Lost in sanskar 😳

I am super late ..For me 😳😳😳

wow if they show scenes like this in the show instead of unnecessary sister drama the show will be superhit i loved loved this story swara needs to have some reality check she has always chosen her selfish murderer sister over sanskar she has chosen the person who dont give a damn about her over the person whose life revolves around her such huge wrong decision has huge result in llife and call me sadistic but i want ragini to try kill swara again resulting in injured sanskar and when sanskar recovers i want him to leave swara that will be swaras real punishment losing the only person who loves her deeply madly for the person who never loved her who always hated

i loved that in your story you made swara realise her mistakes thats why i loved your version of swara but in the show i am very doubtful that the cvs will never make swara realise her mistakes

it is an awesome story

Originally posted by: lucky.m

I am super late ..For me 😳😳😳

I love u viji 🤗..I will be back soon ..running to read😊

Perfect piece of work

Hey Viji,
This drabble dedicated to me..thank u so so much.. I can't believe it really.. But still thank u so much..



The beginning is absolutely beautiful..the turmoil in which Swara is,the atmosphere of the house is just like her life currently but she have to realize that maybe all was not her mistake but her decisions which always tend to someway or the other seems to hurt the very center of her life..ruining their relation and destroying the endless faith he has on her..

Sanskar is just sooo broken..can't Swara read him how his every action tells the hurt and pain he is carrying within himself..doesn't she knows that he hates to see tears in her eyes and knowing that he is hurting her,punishing her means punishing himself..hurting himself a thousand times more..every tear of hers slashes his heart..the way he raised the toast to her..how much he is destroying himself every second...Swara can feels the vibes of hatred from him..can't she feel he has started hating himself for loving her and then for punishing her..

The scene where she says you have changed..and he laughs Gosh that gave me goosebumps..Here Sanskar was right can she understand the she has forced him to change..has frozen his heart..she thinks he is torturing her..but its the other way around he is torturing himself..to stop loving her anyhow...but I don't think his heart will ever stop loving her..and that's why he is punishing her and himself for loving her so selflessely,with so much intensity that he will cease to exist if he ever stops..wonderfully written Viji..so much pain and anguish..

Last few scenes were just amazing..atleast Swara seemed to understand that not only him she has changed too..and the way Sanskar was applying the ointment.. It brought tears to my eyes..he loves her so much..in only Swara had seen this a little before..nonetheless.. The way she realizez that she was so wrong to hurt him in such a terrible way..causing him wounds so deep..but not her new mission was set..to finally make herself and Sanskar realize how much he is important to her and how she will never ever be able to live without him..

Wonderfully written Viji..the protrayal of Sanskar despair and Swara's realization was just amazing..
P.S.:I knw I m very late..but now I wiill surely unres my post soon..Sorry again..


Love,
Piya

🤗 X 1000,000 for all the amazing feedback guys. 😳🤗

This absolutely wonderful viji❤️