SwaSan SS: Amaranthine - A/N pg. 70 10/12 - Page 21

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nynaeve



You are so right, typing unres does make me happy too. And I think I have more pending than yours😭..Well that means you read more than me and that a good thing, i still got several stories that i yet to read as well😭😭



You heard the memory loss - everyone did - though I wonder why I am surprised about it😕😕😕 considering that I myself informed everyone in my foreword...You did inform ,well i forgot but then you told me it not much of a surprise so i guessed it all over again😆...




The dreamy proposal scene - I think maximum credit should go the creatives and the one who wrote that dialogue - nothing beats it.. It was so beautiful and surreal, though credit should go to VaHe for breathing life into those lovely words.I meant the whole sequence and yes i know we should credit the writers for giving us the golden memories with VaHE and i do but i also loved the little touches you added to it😳...



The story itself has only four parts remaining😈. Swara - she will be devastated and would lose her faith in love. But as you said, Sanskaar would fall for her but would she be able to believe it the second time roundI knew it 😭..Swara would lose hope i expected it ..But still sanskar will make her believe once again right😉



That idea was born out of desperation, I have already used the accident / trauma cause for my FM and am hopeful of bringing it into shape to post it (I have invested quite an amount of time and effort and I am not willing to let it go😕) so I had to search for an alternate idea. This was a little easy in a way, because my Dad had it, though it was not a happy ending, the clot ruptured twice and he did not survive the surgery. I am so sorry to know about your dad Nyna dear..

Which is why I am aware of how both Sanskaar (my dad had the same apprehensions) and Swara (we had the same prayer) would react. My father went through an surgery as well but like swara we had an happy ending ,But i know the feelings and emotion that run through our brain at the point of time.. So i can connect with Swara reactions..

Here Sanskaar will survive the surgery and both their prayers will come true - which is the twist of fate.I am happy to know that ...😃




Oh, your comments make sense, what does not make sense is your fear that they do not make sense. Now am I making sense???Yep you are making sense, i get you Nyna dear, well you know me i am always hesistant about my FF and even my comments 😆


I should be able to update tomorrow. Yay ..I will be waiting all day

I am so glad you liked it, and I loved writing this, it was a breeze, not much of effort. I had intended it to be six parts, though the story went on to seven parts (that is a nice number - seven wonders, seven vows😳😳😳) And please never apologise for delayed unres, I am yet to unres for yours😭..I like seven as well, i am happy to have seven parts 😳... Dont worry about unres on BTM..Take your time..



Dear Nita,

Replied in blue above,

love,
Nyna


Love

Nita



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Posted: 8 years ago
Nynu🤗
Res for Chapter 4😊 We are getting it this weekend right !😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Nynu🤗

Res for Chapter 4😊 We are getting it this weekend right !😳


Lucky - 🤗 should be able to post it tomorrow - only minor editing to be done. Though I am thinking whether I should ruin your week end (by posting in in the morning) or the week day (if I post at EoD)😈

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear Friends and lovely readers,
I have updated Chapter 4, rather Part 2 of Act II on page 1. As most guessed, it does run on the predictable lines😆 and yet I am nervous and anxiously await your verdict. Do let me know.

Act III is already drafted, (has three parts, each a little longer than my standard updates😲 and my ideas for FM also seem to be flowing these days😕😕) but would be delayed as I am determined to first unres all my Res posts on all the marvellous updates that I have read and am yet to comment. I have already crossed all acceptable limits of tardiness when it come to unres'ing

Please bear with me, I shall try not to delay updating this tale.

A very happy Navaratri to all of you.🤗🤗🤗🤗

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res 😊
Me first? 😊😉🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res for Chapter 4 Nyna dear

Unres🥳


Hi Nyna dearest🤗


Let me start with an query..Am i getting Chapter five today😆. Also so sorry for such a late unres..You know me right.. 😭... And i told you i will unres yesterday and finally gotten around to do it now..So i am happy 😃..



I dont think i have to say i loved it for you to know that right..But commenting means saying how much i loved it so here you go ..I really loved the chapter because it was the intial start of an ML track and you do know how excited i am about that..Do i make sense that why i call my comment a blabbber because i dont know if i make sense or not😆



The letter was amazing.. Only you can i write such wonderful letter Nyna dear.. I read it few times too..If it was for me from Sanskar i would probably read it hundred times too just like Swara.. 😆... And Swara fear and her worry during the operating hours was heart breaking and just when she thinks everything is fine..Fate intervenes..Poor Girl



Seriously Sanskar first line is where is Kavi😡..Idiot..I know you got ML but still idiot😆...Poor Swara..So as i predicted Swara lost hope in love.. I totally loved all the scene after Swara found about Sanskar ML, her meet with Sansakr and wanting to hear his definition of love one more time was heart breaking 😭.. Her conversation with DP was good too.. I really feel so bad for her now😭...




Hmmm..How will Sanskar win her back again i am so curious to know.. But you told me next update wont have SwaSan but just swara and Sanskar.. so i got a long wait ah 😭..Fine i wait ..Once again asking if you are gonna update today or not..




In short as always i loved the update and cant wait to read the next one.. Do give me the next one soon..😆


Love

Nita



P.S- I really loved reading your comment for chapter 9 and 10..Will try to reply back asap..



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Res 😊

Me first? 😊😉🤗


Dear Viji,

Yes, darling you first - after updating.



Lucky res'ed before I updated, last night itself.😉

love you girls,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Res for Chapter 4 Nyna dear


Dear Nita,

Take your time 😊- the update is along the expected lines though I hope the slight twist in reactions is acceptable.🤔

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nynaeve


Dear Viji,

Yes, darling you first - after updating.



Lucky res'ed before I updated, last night itself.😉

love you girls,
Nyna


Grrr 😡 I SO wanted the pole position. 😆 But ok...second slot after a sweetheart like Lucky isn't so bad. 😉

Now off to read. Will un res later Nynu...have a vallaikaapu and seemantham function of a very close pal to attend. Lovely music too during the function...live instrumental. 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Nynu🤗

Res for Chapter 4😊 We are getting it this weekend right !😳


😭😭😭. Nynu ...why why why ..this is achingly beautiful ..and I might just cry bucketts ...where is kavi ...🤢😭😭..god ..that was sheer painful.

I will be bk soon

Love
Lucky



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