SwaSan SS: Amaranthine - A/N pg. 70 10/12

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#211

Nyna this was really a painful update. Kismat ka anokha khel. Loved swara's line duniya se lad sakti hoon main kismet se nahi. The irony is sanskar does not even know her. Plz bring sanskar's memory back and swara to him. Thanks for the pm.

Love

Nivi

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Nupur

@Nupur_5

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#212

After reading Act 2 Part 1, I knew this will happen & Sanskaar will suffer from memory loss thus forget Swara & their beautiful FOREVER love!

Bt a love which defines Forever & Beyond can be forgotten forever?

And Part 2 of Act 2 gave what most of us suspected! Though I was hoping fervently that Sanskaar don't remember Kavita but I knew it will also happen!

And it happened!

So Swara left Kolkata to pursue her PhD, more appropriately to stay away bcoz she won't be able to live without meeting Sanskaar!

So more than 6 months have passed which was agonizing for Swara when she got to know that according to doctor Sanskaar's chances of remembering his forgotten past is almost nil or maybe non-existent!

Bt what about Sanskaar? How he lived those 6 months? Did he get to know that Kavita left him & married someone else? How did he cope with everything?

And now Swara decided to never return in Kolkata as she thinks she can never be with Sanskaar!

Then what?

I don't know why but I feel like Sanskaar will fall in love with Swara once again! Either Swara will come to Kolkata for some reason or Sanskaar will visit her city for Business or other purpose!

I'm eagerly waiting for next chapter Nyna!

Btw I just loved the letter Sanskaar wrote for Swara! I read that part twice and I was awestruck!

The letter is marvellous!

Please try to update soon Nyna as I said I can't wait to read further!

Loads of love & hugs <3

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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+ 19

Posted: 8 years ago

#213

My Sunday is bright and amazing with your update.. Love you Nyna dear.. Just had a three quick read and me is so very happy now.. Happy Sanskaar lost his memory, happy at Swara lain.. Obviously not but I expected this outcome and in your words this update was something to be cherished as I can't wait to read Sanskaar pov and how the fates reunite them again..

Tell me few months ago that Swara or sanskar has gonna have memory loss in the ff I am reading .. I would have screamed in frustration.. Now I am just so excited and curious to read how it plays out, .. Since I had the serial to remind me of the worst and mine to make the concept more acceptable and my dear friends FF to make it more interesting and exciting.. So count me in as one reader so excited for the next part.. Memory loss you say I say bring it on..

Detailed unres will be done soon.. As you know I need to be on my blabber mood for that..

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Tardis

@DreamOfEndless

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Posted: 8 years ago

#214

Dear Nyna🤗,

It was very very beautiful. I do not have words to describe how I felt, but as you can see, I couldn't stop myself from commenting. I have been following the chapters regularly right from the start, and in chapter-4, I was actually crying😭. Swara's last question to Sanskar just broke my heart💔. I hope Sanskar finds out that book gifted by Swara and the date on it. As analytical Sanskar is, I hope he would also notice the calender year. More than a God gifted miracle, I hope Sanskar's subconscious willpower to protect their love returns him back all his memories.😊 Also, it is interesting that Sanskar quoted Bertrand Russell in his letter, I wonder when he read his books.

Mathematics is always very close to me, and SwaSan too😳. Eagerly waiting for the next part... Please don't make me wait too long that I cry buckets and flood Kolkata😛😊

- Tia

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Grrr 😡 I SO wanted the pole position. 😆 But ok...second slot after a sweetheart like Lucky isn't so bad. 😉

Now off to read. Will un res later Nynu...have a vallaikaapu and seemantham function of a very close pal to attend. Lovely music too during the function...live instrumental. 😊

Enjoy your day and I want a update about the music too 😳

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: lucky.m

😭😭😭. Nynu ...why why why ..this is achingly beautiful ..and I might just cry bucketts ...where is kavi ...🤢😭😭..god ..that was sheer painful.

I will be bk soon

Love
Lucky

As writers we are quite sadistic, right😈😈😈 - I so hate you and Viji for the pain you guys gave our SwaSan😭😭😭 and here I am doing the same thing. But do not worry, every one does not get a chance to live - "twice in a lifetime (Act III part 2😉)

love,

Nyna

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Tardis

@DreamOfEndless

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Posted: 8 years ago

#217

Sorry I forgot to add iin my grief for Swara😆

I loved the letter that Sanskar wrote to her (and even spayed it with his cologne). It is like a testimony to their love and I think it will play a very important role in reuniting SwaSan. Sanskar would be so consumed in guilt for forgetting her, but on the positive side, they would fall in love all over again😊

Please update soon😉

Tia

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#218

Dear Nivi, Nupur and Tia,

Will get back to you lovely comments in a while - I have a few guests over and cannot sneak enough time to give detailed reply. Needless to say I loved and do cherish each of your comments.

@ Tia,

Sanskaar never read any books by Bertrand Russell nor any of his works. 😃😃

But as his character is sketched he just did a lot of internet search on mathematicians who were poets or vice versa. (I did too, and picked my choices😉😉), which is how he came across both Russell and Sofia😊😊😊. Sanskaar believes in research, remember?

@ Nita - take your time - I love reading what you label as babble, which I do not think it is.😊

loads of love,

Nyna

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StarySKY

@StarySKY

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Posted: 8 years ago

#219

Res ..

Will be right back ..

Un-Res

Dear Nynu ..🤗

Thank you for the special mention .. it was a pleasure to help you .. and I don't mind doing it again .. I really loved it ..

You very welcome .. ❤️

I am sorry for been late .. I am busy these days .. Actually I am writing these words while I am in the clinic ..

Act 2 part 2

I really loved the chapter .. your story is getting better and better .. 👏

I really loved the quote .. and the title too ..

P.S I Love You .. ( I love this movie )

I loved Sanskar concern for her .. not to wake her up ..

Waiting .. is one of the hardest things ever to do in life ..

Waiting for the unknown ..

Sanskar's letter ..

His words did reach my heart .. I really felt it ..

" I love you .. from now to infinity " ..

The operation was successful and everything was good ..

But who know what destiny hides for them ?!

And when Sanskar wake up ..

" where is Kavi ?! "

This indeed broke my heart ..😭

Swara poor her .. my heart went for this girl .. it is a cruel game of fate .. 😭

The person you love the most and love you too .. forget you and your memories ..

I never want to get into this situation ever .. it is hurt so much ..

And Swara decided to leave ..

Her last meeting with Sanskar .. I was in tears .. 😭😭

I know why Swara left .. but

Why did she ? Why she is just waiting for him to remember her ? Without even trying ?

Maybe meeting with her again will treger his memories .. or if not

Then .. he fell in love with her once so he can do it once more ..

Why she left without trying ?!

Why she lost hope in her love , in Sanskar Love ?! ..

Nynu I really loved it ..

My words can't describe how I am feeling about your story ..

You are an amazing writer .. 👏

Waiting for next ..

P.S

I notice lately there is many stories with a memory loss ..😃😆

Love

Khushi

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kamila.

@Seriously.

Inactive

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Posted: 8 years ago

#220

Re darling

Unres darling...

Nyna... Meri Nyna..🤗 I have to sing a song for you darling... I loved it very much like I love you...

As I promised..

From the very first... I liked the way how Sanskaar doesn't want to wake her from her peaceful sleep... It might be the last peaceful sleep of her.. What he afraid is came true... I cried baby.. you made me cry... I loved laksh words to the broken swara..

Here comes the letter.. What can I say... I never cried when Gerard died in P.S I love you... But I cried a lot after reading Sanskaar words to Swara😭😭.. as I said in the pm.. you play with the words.. they are bewitching me... 👏👏

Then the shattered news.. he lost his memory of her... Forever.. why God.. why??? I cried.. I liked her decision and respect it.. but it's like a meek.. of her... Sorry dear.. for this.. she have to try at least for once.. I know how difficult it'll be for her.. But I'm not convinced with her decision..

I cried a lot reading last two updates.. I want a refreshing updates hereafter... It's a request or order😡😲⭐️..

Soo from next it's going to be my hero who going to her place.. And going to fall for her again.. it'll be fun if he meet her again in a coffee shop...

You know how much I love you.. or I have to say it to you... Ahh I'm more romantic(frantic, dramatic) than your Sanskaar...

Love you darling...

Kam..

Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 8 years ago