SwaSan SS: Amaranthine - A/N pg. 70 10/12 - Page 19

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Will wait for your comment - a little nervous.😕</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">love,</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Nyna</font>

Originally posted by: StarySKY

Res ..

Yay I am the first one ..

Un-Res

Dear Nynu .. 🤗

I am so , so sorry for been late 😕 *holding ears* .. I am ready for any punishment ..

So much are happening in my life right now ..

And everytime I want to right something about your story I fell short with words ..

Sorry again ..

Dear Kushi,

Do not apologise for late unres - life happens😊 and the fact that you read my ramblings is quite enough for me😊

Act 1 , part 2

" a walk to remember " , I loved the title .. ( I love this moive too )

I fall in love deeply with chapter , I loved every words of it ..

*a bow down* 👏

Nynu .. Thank you for this chapter , you are so much amazing ..

" A Walk to Remember" surprisingly one of the books I did not read😲, though the movie was good - and it did fit their tale, their friendship grew and love blossomed - mostly during their walks. And you falling in love with this chapter, that is thanks enough for me😳

I love what he did when he asked her to stop blaming herself ..

That is the underlying sentiment, which be reflected in her actions in future also - Swara is not sure about destiny supporting her when it comes to love, whereas Sanskaar is a greater believer in love and soulmate concept😕

And when he walked her home , her thinking that she will fit it his arms .. oh God *blushing* ☺️ 😳

And their fingers were entwined .. and she kissed him on his cheek .. *blushing* 😳😳

The whole scene was amazing ..

Actually, that was Swara thinking that she is just the perfect height for him, if she tumbled into his arms, she would have her ear against his heart☺️ She could not help kissing him, she always found him irresistible.

Their journey to know each each other was special .. so definitely their love is going to be more special ..

I loved the way Sanskar protect her .. like her guardian angel ..

They are such a magical couple so their journey also has to be special, and so would the love they share. Sanskaar, is always her guardian angel (I had written a One Shot as to how he ends up being Swara's guardian angel😳, have you read that?)

And the way he talked about her eyes .. oh God *blushing* ☺️

She does have beautiful eyes, and he being the romantic types, certainly cannot resist☺️☺️

Her gift for him , I really loved it .. That is a "teasing" gift, she gave something only he would relate too, it would play a role in future😆

And the scene when she was talking about mathematics and all he did is just starring at her .. oh God *blushing* ☺️( I will stop breathing if this ever happened to me )

So would I, imagine someone like Sanskaar staring dreamily at you and ending with that flirtatious comment - no, not blushing, I would be a molten puddle☺️☺️☺️

Sanskar took her to a lecture about Mathematics ..

And she let him sleep and never wanted to wake him up ..

This definitely true love ..

Definitely, when the other person's happiness and comfort take precedence over our own, then it is true love

Their conversation about educational qualifications ..

For me it doesn't matter as the most important is the understanding between the two ..

But you know seems males don't like that their life partner been smarter than them ..

It reminded me with me and my eldest sister ..

My friends always tell me that if you keep been one of the person who topping the batch ( thank God to that ) you will never get married soon .. and they said too that sometimes I made them feel a little stupid so what about the males who want to approach me .. ( I think it is a weird thinking 😆)

And my sister is doing her PHD .. one of other distant relative said to my mom .. " if you let you daughter go behind her education, then get ready she is going to stay with for along time " 😆😆

Well all of this is just ridiculous .. and I loved Sanskar answer ..

( if just I get someone like Sanskar )

It takes a very strong man not to be intimidated by his wife's qualifications / salary / position. Very few men exist in the real world. Few men can answer like him and fewer still can live upto that answer. Sanskaar is truly an exception.

Ragini and Laksh

I really like this two .. especially Ragini .. she was more interested in Swara and Sanskar than her and Laksh .. So at the end they were successful in uniting Ragini and Laksh ..

Poor Ragini and Laksh, the serial and the CVs butchered them beyond redemption, if you can ignore that, they are a nice couple too, so I try to bring that shade in my stories. Yes, they united RagLak and it was fitting that they confessed during the engagement.

About the question of how I want a guy to propose ..

Well as me .. I will choose Swara's choice but I wouldn't mind Ragini's too ..

( well actually I should get someone in my life before starting to dream how I want my proposal be 😆 )

Best of both worlds😆

The garden Scene is my favorite in this whole part ..

And their love confession and the kiss .. ☺️😳😳

Ok now I am completely red in color ( Me dead 😳)

Imagine my state, when I wrote it out, I am a little apprehensive about kissing scenes, so they are quite challenging to write. Glad to know you liked it.☺️☺️☺️

I really loved this chapter ..

Nynu I know I didn't say much .. but this what I can say about this part ..

I am thrilled that you loved this chapter😳

P.S

I am little scared about the new part .. as there is so much happiness and I know something bad will happen .. *figer crossed*

You have read next part, nothing much to worry, right?

Love

Khushi

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Res for ch-3 Nynu. 😳
Unresed. 😃
Awesome update. 👏
Loved the way Ragini, Shomi, Dadi were teasing Swara. 😆 And Shekhar and Dada's reaction. 🤣

That was a nice touch of humour, right -

Then SwaSan moments were heavenly!!! Sanskar even gifted her glass heels. 😳 Then finally he proposed her in a unique way and Swara accepted him. 😃

Well, for that the CVs are partly responsible, they did give us such a beautiful proposal, the glass slippers, that was me - full cliche mode😈

Then again he surprised her the Ph.D. admission form for her. 😉 Then again their cute kiss. 😛 I just looovvveeeddd SwaSan moments.

See, he does believe that love should be liberating, not binding. So there was no way he would help Swara fulfil her dreams.

But suddenly what happened to Sanskar?? 😕 He is suffering from brain tumor?? 😲 But its not life threatening one, right?? 😕

No it is not a brain tumour, nothing so frightening, just a small blood clot - not to worry, at least not much😉

Loved the way how Swara, inspite of being gloomy, supported Sanskar and both the family without showing her fear and tried to cheer up Sanskar. 😳 But finally she broke down infront of Sanskar. 😭 And to make her silent, Sanskar kissed her. ☺️ Like SwaSan, even I'm tensed regarding Sanskar's surgery. 😕

Do not worry, surgery will be fine, and anybody would be tense, seeing that their loved ones undergoing surgery.

I think u r planning Sanskar's memory loss?? 😕 Update soon dear. 😳

No suspense😆 - will update soon

Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

Originally posted by: StarySKY

Res ..

Will be right back ..

Un-Res

Dear Nynu .. 🤗

I will never get enough from this story ..

It so much amazing .. 👏

Act 2 , Part 1

I had that feeling something not good is going to happen ..

But they are there to support each other ..

I cannot let something bad happen so soon, right? Though the ominous clouds are already looming!

I laughed at the Gadodia's reaction when Sanskar came to take Swara ..

They are really crazy ..

True that, but a lovable crazy, I hope😆

And love Swara at

" looking that good should be made illegal "

" it could cause accident "

" he also has no right to make me melt "

That was so much cute .. 😳

Sanskaar is too good looking - I am sure most would agree with that, he really does not have a right to look that good😉

I wondering the same as Swara how can he keep the white clean .. 😆

I have this colleague who wear a white shoes at it remain clean till the end of the day ,, I really want an answer to that question ..

If and when you find it, do let me know😆

The proposal .. ( I can't even describe it )

It was way better than the one in the serial .. 😳

I will take that as a compliment😳

And after so much happiness and dreams .. destiny happened ..

So Sanskar has an Aneurysm ..

( I really don't want to correct you as you are not in the medical field , but can go to google if want to correct it or ask me , I will tell where you went wrong .. it not a major one just a little mistakes .. you can ignore them if you want )

Thanks for that, I guess I simply used the literature term, without realising that medically it would be incorrect

I felt really bad for Sanskar .. and Swara too ..He is trying to act strong .. it is not that easy ..

However strong you are, it is not enough, trust me. I have gone through that

The Hospital Scene is my favorite .. it was cute ..

I loved that they felt complete with each other ..

And their prayers ..

Both their prayers - would come true - how that will be forms the crux of the next Act.😉

I have a negative vibes about what is going to happen ..

I think Sanskar will live but he will not be the same Sanskar ..

Are you up to a memory loss ?!!

Sigh, I hoped against hope (considering that I mentioned it in the Foreword, it was a hopeless hope😉) but everyone seems to have guessed😭

Thank you Nynu for this amazing chapter ..

Waiting for next .. *finger crossed*

I am thrilled you loved it, will update soon. And if needed will trouble you for a couple of points😳

Love

Khushi

Originally posted by: blindassassin

Nyna

Two heartbreaks one day. Viji just gave one but there I at least had a hope that the worst was over. But here why do I feel that's not the case. I remember reading one of your post where you casually remarked about liking tragic ends. Will you chose to do it here? No worries, I will still love your story, not all stories end up as we wish.

When you mentioned about fate striking at the couple s happiness ,never in my dreams I imagined such a twist. My guess was something terrible to happen to ragini or laksh and swara/ sanskar sacrificing their love... But here fate was much more cruel to them.

And how sanskar accepted the obvious. He is a strong man, hope his love shall help swara endure the pain and suffering.Waiting for the next update.

Love,veena

Originally posted by: SizzleDazzle

Hey Nyna🤗

I just finished reading all the chapters in a go...Glad I found this on the first page of the forum😳else would have missed out on another magical SwaSan story❤️...Loved every bit of this...Can't wait to read more...

I'm posting this in a hurry but will be back soon with a detailed comment😳...