SwaSan SS: Amaranthine - A/N pg. 70 10/12 - Page 20

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Res nynu...😭

Unres

Nyna sweetheart...😉

What a heart warming..soul stirring update... i was lost in it...😳😭

I am glad you liked it - it was a chapter of absolute contrasts - pure happiness to absolute desperation😈

First half was amazing...sanky proposed swara..whole setting..n the dialogues..i guess we all swasan fans have learned that confession by heart now..its etched in our hearts ..i just cherished it...😳

That proposal was amazing - none of us could have enough of it. Along with some unforgettable dialogues and memorable scenes - how could I resist "stealing" it?😉

Chapter 2.last line left me panicked that how swasan are going to face rough patch in life..i imagined many reasons..scenarios for seperation.kavita..family...any new entry...but never i though you would plan this..n that on sanky..😭😭😭..i cried so much in second half of story till the end of update...now hell scared what will happen to sanky.😭..memory loss...nooo..i dont want that...or any other things..paralysis..vision loss..mobility loss..🥺..God..im thinking such worst scenarios...

In any love story - separation is a must (as writers we are such sadists😈😈😈😈). So the event is not surprising, the element of suspension is in the cause. Since I mentioned in the foreword itself that there would be no villains among the relations, it had to be fate that would turn cruel.

As to what could happen - that is also a cliched one as already hinted. But I hope that the reactions and the way ahead would be interesting enough.😉

😭💔but i trust you...have faith in swasan love n your skills..that we will have swasan in end..togather...forever...😉

Faith in SwaSan - absolutely - they just have to battle their own fears and destiny to be together. But do not worry, it will be a happy ending ...! And love you for the vote of confidence in my writing😳

Will wait for next dear...😊

Will update over the weekend?

Love u..🤗

Talia

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

Awesome update

Originally posted by: StarySKY

Nynu .. 🤗

Dear .. I just read your reply to my 2 comments ..

Thank you darling ..

You are most welcome😳

You are welcome to ask me anything any time .. no trouble at all ..

You are so going to regret this😆, sent a pm to you

And about the OS .. is it " a love like none other " .. ?!

If not this .. then please give me the name I will read it for sure ..

No, this is another one (Guardian Angel) - the link in my index (which is in my siggy below)😊.

Anyway the link is here: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4582292

Love

Khushi

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Unrested page.. 23.

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Kamila❤️ will get back, once I go home. I have to unres for both your updates too (I seem to have become tardy again).

Regarding the unpinning of the hair knot - we do think alike quite a number of times. Remember we both used Pablo Neruda poems too😊

love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Res Nyna darling.. will unres soon..

Late unres Nyan darling.. 🤗..

Please your "late" is earlier than mine😆

Anything baby even a maasi.. but my Sanskaar is affected by a clot.. blood clot in his pulmonary lobes.. nnooo... 🤢...

Blood clot in the artery leading to frontal lobe (there is a reason why I am stressing on this😉) Do not worry, he will be alive😊

When I was reading the first half.. it was pleasant.. but I knew you'll give me a shock at the second half... Neatly I'm dead..

Well, we cannot have too much of sweetness, right, so this was my way of gently letting everyone down😈

What can I do you... 😡... Soo the memory loss is on the way this time Swara going to woo him... Yaaayyyee for that I'm leaving you... 😳...

Memory loss - yes, but Swara wooing him backyou think she is upto that?

Okay my relative she undergone for the same surgery but a big cystic tumor that was not once but twice.. after ten years gap she undergone for the surgery last year... She is healthy and wise... Just thoughtto share my memory with you...

She is definitely blessed and lucky, I know of some who have not been so blessed.

Haan... I planned the same unpinning the bin scene in my SS... What is this... No way... 😲

You can use it, I also have a letter in my tale and so did Viji in hers😆

Now I'm curious to know about the letter... Hope that letter will unite them both.. I know not soo soon at the end... 😆..

The letter in next part - will it unite them - not so sure - maybe a couple of chapters down the lane😉

See you later baby...

Till then kisses and hugs...

Kam...😉

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

No worries Nyna darling... Reply when you're free.. 😳..

Again no worries darling take your own time.. 😊.

Yeah I forgot that.. Pablo's quotes.. But it was quite A romantic moments between couple.. 😆...

Love!! Love you..❤️

Kam..

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Res Nyna dear, You come back home and update.. I will be here waiting..

Unres Nyna dear..

Typing unres makes me happy 😆..As i got so many of them pending 😭...

You are so right, typing unres does make me happy too. And I think I have more pending than yours😭

Why happy because i finally get to blabber how much i liked something 😉..Yes i heard the doom of memory loss in the end, i wrote three stories on it and saw the disaster of it in the show..So i am just expecting how they fall in love the second time..With you as the writer..I say bring it on 😳..Nyna dear reading your SS makes me giddy,happy and excited..I love love love it 😃..

You heard the memory loss - everyone did - though I wonder why I am surprised about it😕😕😕 considering that I myself informed everyone in my foreword.

The proposal scene was so good.. How you guys write such romantic scenes that makes every one just go to a dreamy land of swasan and never return..I just cant stop reading such scenes again and again..

The dreamy proposal scene - I think maximum credit should go the creatives and the one who wrote that dialogue - nothing beats it.. It was so beautiful and surreal, though credit should go to VaHe for breathing life into those lovely words.

You said three to four parts of memory loss.I can handle it..But dont inflict too much pain on poor swara.. 😭..That girl has finally found a person to love and i dont want her hope of love to shatter again.. Sanskar will once again fall for her i know but she doesnt right 😆

The story itself has only four parts remaining😈😈😈😈. Swara - she will be devastated and would lose her faith in love. But as you said, Sanskaar would fall for her but would she be able to believe it the second time round

Also how innovative of you to introduce memory loss this way, not an accidental hit to the head or jump of the cliff.. Wait mine had both i suppose ..It because me has no idea and no patience to search for information either I meant to say i liked it.. We all had enough of the accident that causes ML right.. But this gave me so many moments of SwaSan and how they stood by each other ..I understand Sanskar fear, if it was on the show i would have been yelling in frustration as he might change 360 degree..But since you are writing i am not that scared..

That idea was born out of desperation, I have already used the accident / trauma cause for my FM and am hopeful of bringing it into shape to post it (I have invested quite an amount of time and effort and I am not willing to let it go😕) so I had to search for an alternate idea. This was a little easy in a way, because my Dad had it, though it was not a happy ending, the clot ruptured twice and he did not survive the surgery.

Which is why I am aware of how both Sanskaar (my dad had the same apprehensions) and Swara (we had the same prayer) would react.

Here Sanskaar will survive the surgery and both their prayers will come true - which is the twist of fate.

Once again asking did my comment makes any sense..If not in short, i am not worried about the upcoming parts so do update soon .I wanna read them like now ...Tomorrow is the day right i will be here waiting for the update.. Also i loved Chapter 3 so much... Nyna dear.. i dont want this one to end..But i know you already has set limited number of chapters😭... So will cherish the ride while it lasts. And will wait for more such amazing journey of SwaSan from you..And i am so sorry for such a late unres..

Oh, your comments make sense, what does not make sense is your fear that they do not make sense. Now am I making sense???

I should be able to update tomorrow.

I am so glad you liked it, and I loved writing this, it was a breeze, not much of effort. I had intended it to be six parts, though the story went on to seven parts (that is a nice number - seven wonders, seven vows😳😳😳) And please never apologise for delayed unres, I am yet to unres for yours😭

With love

Nita