SwaSan SS: Amaranthine - A/N pg. 70 10/12 - Page 18

Originally posted by: Asyalover

i sense memory loss coming???

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Res Nynu 😊 🤗

Shall unres tomorrow.

Originally posted by: showrav24

Nice update dear

oh no now sanskar fall ill i hope operation go well but why i feel something will went wrong.

Here also marriage r same day why dear why pls make something different from show they destroy swasan marriage there. i want swasan marriage alag se

waiting for next update dear & want to know what sanskar say that chit which he gave swara.

Bye dear

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Unres

Whoa Yes Finally

Nynu I love you 🤗..You didn't leave with revelation of blood clot and sent him to operate I can sleep in peace hoping no heartbreaks .I didn't even realise when it ended.It was moving and beautiful in its own way👏⭐️❤️.. Proposal to operation theater..So Well done 😳

I love you too.

No way, the blood clot and all those medical terms, pure filler and drama. Not the main crux of the tale, so there was no point in building in suspense. And since I wanted to finish this off in three acts and six parts (Act III is most probably going to be in three parts, though) so no suffering unnecessarily.

But I was worried, I started with a proposal and end with a surgery, your comment gives me a lot of relief.

The proposal was dreamy and cliches ...I tho I am all for it .I guess in love stories you have to give into them at a point atleast a few but its about placement which was bang on😊👏⭐️ and dialogues so aptly placed

That proposal - how could I resist it - and as you said love stories can afford to have some cliches - maybe that is what makes them nice too.

All those good memories flooded back and you have no right to make sanskaar look damn hot before I go to sleep in the first part 😳😆

Sanskaar looks hot in second part too (the reference to Yul Brynner was intentional😉). Kuripi ki aina kurule andam - Sunny boy would looks sexy in his bald avatar too - after Swara did give that statement.

But he really should not be allowed to look that good - right?

Loved it bangaram ..😊🤗 ok let me dream about sunny boy

Dream on, while the gold lasts😉

Lucky

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Nynu...🤗🤗🤗


This chapter was like dark chocolate...or like Naturals Ice cream jackfruit flavor...truffles filled with orange/ raspberry tart.😳 A very tantalizing, interesting melange of delicious flavors.

And I am now:

That date and the proposal... Dreamy...Ethereal. Recaptured in distilled, concentrated form, the sheer poetic magic of the on screen version. That image you skilfully conjured up---Sunny boy in that dashing attire, the Prince ready to sweep his Princess off her feet...
Glass slippers...😳. This Princess would never run away from any dance she has with this Prince, for sure. 😳😉

That date and proposal - quite irresistible, right? And when I made a declaration as to the story containing numerous cliches, it was with this in mind. But there is something magical about this couple, anything you write is touched by their magic and turned into a thing of beauty. And writing about them is a sheer joy in itself. And though the princess would not run away from any dance she has with this prince, she might...- more in the next parts😉

And then came the sharper, more pungent flavors of worry. Optimism that everything should be fine, given Sanskaar's youth, great state of fitness and his formidable will, but all the same, the ever present worry. Since risk of aneurysm is after all, something to be taken quite seriously.

And that is life for you, we do need that sharp flavour of worry, at times it reiterates how fleeting happiness is. And the risk of aneurysm, is a very serious one, few recover unscathed, which will not be so in this case. Sunny boy will come out, bright and beautiful, more or less😉

The way you described why Sunny hesitated about the procedure...the way he felt so complete and content in Swara's arms before his surgery, brought tears to my eyes. Its moments like these which make this marvelous pair so relatable, so very beloved. You made me feel that intense rush of protectiveness towards them, I actually caught myself muttering a prayer that he should come out unscathed and they should lead a long, happy life together! 😳 They felt so very real, and that's your magic---the fact that it does not seem like fiction. Cliche or not, it was intense and palpably effective.

That is Sanskaar - brave and strong. But at the moment, he was prepared for everything, he feels that Swara being in his life and her love is even worth giving up his life. So at that point, he is only grateful for having her in his life, despite his dreams and hopes of having a very long life of togetherness. And that is what they deserve right, for a love that they share? But then one would also have to pay a price for such a blessing, and only time will tell what that is, or in this case, Me😉

Sigh...That fervent, soulful prayer of Swara's---asking that Sunny be returned to her alive, that was all that mattered, no matter even if he suffered some impairment----that was a hint, was it not? I was thinking we might see him partially paralyzed perhaps; but then I thought, perhaps the effect could be on his mind, not his body? Could it be that he wakes up remembering his "love", or rather his belief that he was "in love" with Kavita; and consciously remember not a whit about Swara? 😕😭

Swara's prayer is similar to what any of us would have when someone we love is undergoing surgery. You never know what complications could arise and however much science has advanced, Chance and Destiny play their own games. What makes or breaks us are the choices we make. But then, do we really have a choice or is even the choice we make predestined? Which is what the next part would be all about. As you guessed, there are no two ways this tale could go ahead, right?

Waiting with a great deal of anticipation (and not a little foreboding) for Chapter 4.

Part 2 (chapter 4) would be a short one, already have the rough draft, so maybe will post before the weekend. And it will not make much of a difference, really, as this tale is short one, (total seven parts) so any pain, angst or separation for SwaSan would last..., one, two or maximum three chapters😉

Loads of Love,

---Viji

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Finally gotten to read it.. And I loved it . the proposal was beautiful and I loved it..

still I am very curious about Sanskaar recovery given Swara silent prayer.. What twist are you coming up with now.. Let me wait and see.. Will unres ASAP Nyna dear..

Love

Nita

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Kushi,

First to res even without pm - love you. Will await for your revert.

love,

Nyna