SwaSan FF:Behind Their Masks(Epilogue (2) on pg 137 [15/03/17]) - Page 98

Hi Nita darling, 😊
U know that I went MIA for many days bcoz of my exam (its still going on), but managed to take out some time to read the stories today! 😳
Coming back to the chapters, finally the reason for Payal's deeds is out in the last chappie! It was so twisty and intriguing chapter! Payal's father was the actual reason for Paya's behavior! 😲 And Payal was Kavya, the girl whom Sanskar met in his childhood and promised to be her friend but couldn't recognize her in their next meet (although it was not his fault!) Finally Payal's father confessed his crime and the very next day Payal confessed her crimes too! And finally Payal was given life imprisonment! 😃 Sanskar felt guilty that he couldn't be a good friend neither to Mansie nor to Payal/Kavya! But loved the way Swara handled him and the entire situation. 😳 And happiness returned to their life after a long time after the final verdict. 😃 Aww! Swara felt that Sanky was avoiding her! 😆 Poor Swara! 😳 But he asked for their first date in return which surprised Swara. 😉 And Swara accepted to go on their first date. 😃 And now epilogue 1. 😳 The 'date' thing is good but it was not our SwaSan's style here by keeping surprises which makes distant from each other. 😆 So their perfect date, set up by the great Lucky, was messed up in an awkward and li'l funny way! 😆 So to make up the ruined date, Sanky took Swara to 'their' home. 😃 SanLak phone convo was nice. 😆 And finally Sanky proposed Swara and loved Swara's unique was of accepting it. 😉 I loved the SwaSan moment. 😳 But TBH the highlight of this epilogue was Sanskar and baby Asha's convo. 😉 Aww! Asha and her questions r so cute. 😳 And when she asked for a li'l sister, Sanskar was caught off guard! 😆 I loved their convo so much. ❤️ I'm sorry I can't give u much detailed comments about both the chapters (even if I want to). I know u won't like me apologizing, but still I owe u this apology for bearing with me (and u have to bear a li'l more too coz I'll again be going MIA until my exam gets over.) 😳 😆 And thanku for the pms of this story but yet to read the other stories u had pm'ed me. 😔 So don't stop pm'ing me. 😉
With love,
Aheli.

Look who here.. I guys.. Epilogue seems to be delayed longer than I intended.. I apologize for that.. I can't seem to will myself to write the final chapter yet.. Also I have yet to reply back to most of the lovely comment.. Sorry guys I will try to reply back soon..

Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice Update.. 😊

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hi Nita darling, 😊
U know that I went MIA for many days bcoz of my exam (its still going on), but managed to take out some time to read the stories today! 😳
Coming back to the chapters, finally the reason for Payal's deeds is out in the last chappie! It was so twisty and intriguing chapter! Payal's father was the actual reason for Paya's behavior! 😲 And Payal was Kavya, the girl whom Sanskar met in his childhood and promised to be her friend but couldn't recognize her in their next meet (although it was not his fault!) Finally Payal's father confessed his crime and the very next day Payal confessed her crimes too! And finally Payal was given life imprisonment! 😃 Sanskar felt guilty that he couldn't be a good friend neither to Mansie nor to Payal/Kavya! But loved the way Swara handled him and the entire situation. 😳 And happiness returned to their life after a long time after the final verdict. 😃 Aww! Swara felt that Sanky was avoiding her! 😆 Poor Swara! 😳 But he asked for their first date in return which surprised Swara. 😉 And Swara accepted to go on their first date. 😃 And now epilogue 1. 😳 The 'date' thing is good but it was not our SwaSan's style here by keeping surprises which makes distant from each other. 😆 So their perfect date, set up by the great Lucky, was messed up in an awkward and li'l funny way! 😆 So to make up the ruined date, Sanky took Swara to 'their' home. 😃 SanLak phone convo was nice. 😆 And finally Sanky proposed Swara and loved Swara's unique was of accepting it. 😉 I loved the SwaSan moment. 😳 But TBH the highlight of this epilogue was Sanskar and baby Asha's convo. 😉 Aww! Asha and her questions r so cute. 😳 And when she asked for a li'l sister, Sanskar was caught off guard! 😆 I loved their convo so much. ❤️ I'm sorry I can't give u much detailed comments about both the chapters (even if I want to). I know u won't like me apologizing, but still I owe u this apology for bearing with me (and u have to bear a li'l more too coz I'll again be going MIA until my exam gets over.) 😳 😆 And thanku for the pms of this story but yet to read the other stories u had pm'ed me. 😔 So don't stop pm'ing me. 😉
With love,
Aheli.

Originally posted by: showrav24

Hello Nita dear
How r u dost.
sorry for late comment little bit busy was this days work plus at a time two cousins marriage functions so little hustle bustle run one time here tho other time there.

Update is A-one dear as u promised full of swasan & cute little Asha.
loved swasan heart to heart talking sharing everything with each other & understanding comforting each other their promises all.
also loved father daughter convo also now waiting to see like sanskar how swara answer asha demand for sister.
just asking is asha grown up is asha' s part is her pov let me know.
Bye
Waiting for next part of epilogue
Take care

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Res for epi ..baby

Unres...FINALLY...

Nita my doll...😉

I was just thinking ..how time flies...it appears just tommorrow we were reading the prologue ...n now we are at epilogue 1...how fast time is running...excitement is still the same...feeling bad one more story is wrapping up..but plzzz story ending will not give u the key to vanish from forum...i wont tolerate that...u know what i want new story now...from nita's magic box..will wait...oky...no excuse...😳

Epilogue1 was amazing...swasan confession was quite unusual..which i loved...something unique...not orthodox thing like boy propsing girl in lavish dinner date...very differnt..he took her to dinner but that was not quite successful...becoz swasan of BTM..we know...they are simple...shy ..unique creature...always thinking deeply ..also about others feeling n emotions...atleast swaara is like this...sanky is little slow in making decisions regarding relationships...i think...very slow..i guess both swasan past have badly shaken them..had left quite change in their personality...sanky afraid of relations..n swara lost soo much that want to live every moments without wasting...but all goid now..n both are moving on...😃

Asha approval was nessassary for swasan...n she gave it finally...after some questions..hehehe...i liked how everyone agreed..proposal indeed was cutest...they are cracks...sweet nokh jhok in marriage proposal ..enjoyed...😆

Nita ...darling..im waiting for swasan romance part now...dont forget that..oky...hehehe😆im not going to leave u that easily...want chunu sa romance...😉

Curious for epi 2 now...muahhh love...😳

Kissy n hugs🤗

Talia

Originally posted by: Rumadiv

Dear Nita,

Sorry for the late comment.Finally you are back with the epilogue which i was waiting for. Now you had cleared my confusion regarding the behavior of sanskar. His reason of avoiding swara was right but though it had created distance between them. Tat reason is acceptable as he was planning swara a surprise . But his planning not happening according to his idea but happening according to "them" was great. Being wat they are and not being like others was nice.

Their old times of watching movie in their own home and sanskar making up to swara was adorable and watching the same movie already seen and again seeing with loved one is best thing in world. Enjoyed that part. Swara encouraging sanskar to be themselves was nice. Sanskar getting scared about the ans from swara is reasonable from his shoes as he had already got rejected from swara as she din know the alliance was from sanskar family. Then he had his loved one's life was in danger and tat made him to get scared more as he din want his happiness to end.

Swara getting hurt that he was not sure about her answer and the way she rejected him and explaining the reason was just beautifull and this makes everyone realise how their relationship is strong. Then sanskar understanding her reasons and explaining his reasons and making her understand was cute and adorable. Finally sanskar maheswari proposing swara Gadodia was really beautifull and making a beginning with a beautiful kiss is just awesone.

And father daughter duo was really pretty. Asha accepting swara as mother and sanskar explaining her in a child manner was cute. And lastly Asha asking for baby sister was unexpected. Just imagining the reaction of sanskar at that time. Funny it would be. Asha accepting swara wholeheartedly and going to start new life is interesting.

Guessing next epilogue will be a family moment between swara sanskar and asha. Waiting for the moment were asha will call her pari aunty as her ma and wat will be her reaction. Waiting for next update.!!! And wat is there for us in stores.

With love,
Divya

Originally posted by: StarySKY

OMG 😲

Nita I just signed in IF after very long time and the first thing I see is your BTM ..

I think I am just lucky .. 😆

Res for now .. ( I have a long list of PM to go through 😕)

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Nita ..🤗

So its gonna end right 😕 Mystery is one genre I dare not to attempt in near future ..and you have done an incredible job of weaving all the elements into story, holding on mystery ( Its such a tough thing to do)so well... 👏⭐️👏 this would be one of the best mystery tales I ever read on Swasan .

Now coming to last part ...Payal - kavya, the back story ..it was moving and sad. No wonder she is a damaged and resorted to wrong ways ..and finally faces behind the masks are revealed , What an exciting journey it had been ..Though I couldn't be such an active part like I wanted to be .. I am glad to be part of this journey.

Looking forward to Swasan date and proposal

Kudos to a wonderful tale and to you too

Love

Lucky

Originally posted by: iamreader

Nita dearest,
I can't believe BTM has almost come to an end. The journey was glorious, full of twist and turns and unique from other ones.I felt bad for Kavya/Payal after reading this chapter. And about Sanskar's guilt trip for not being good friend... surprisingly I noticed most of us do that. Don't or can't keep in touch with our friends. We live in present and leave behind the past.How will I miss this version of Swasan! hope very soon you'll come out with another project and show us Swasan in an alternate universe.

I'll really miss waiting for the updates of BTM.

Love,
Dyuti ❤️[