SwaSan FF:Behind Their Masks(Epilogue (2) on pg 137 [15/03/17]) - Page 96

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Posted: 8 years ago
@Nyna dear - You know how much I cherish your comment right. And I loved reading your comment.. Yeah I still remember how nervous I was when I first decided to write this one.. Do you remember me worrying that I won't be able to finish it given I didn't have the basic draft.. All those seem like something that happened just now.. Yet I almost reached the end.. For now I am planning on two epilogue.. If it more than that I would know by the time I complete epilogue two.. Still working on epilogue one..

Love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey nita...
Im extremely sorry for replying soo late...just i dont want to give ur update a short reply..hence delay..and now a days i dont feel like typing...im all cranky n moody..trying to cheer my self..so replied to my favourites...love u...

Last update was good n final chapter was great...but baby...sorry if i hurt u by saying this...i was expecting a dramatic ending...like swasan getting engaged or tying knot and payal attack or something...try to hurt swara or sanky...coz for me she was an obsessive psychopath...so she being regretful n turning overnew leaf was bit difficult for me to digest...im not saying that i did not enjoy your version..it was as amazing as prologue..which kept us on edge...but i felt something missing...maybe suspense..shock or twist element...soo baby..im not going to leave u that easily...i want a powerpacked swasan romance epilogue .soo just shock me with your romantic side..swasan romance is elixer for me...soo...plzzz nitu pretty plzz..i want to see your romantic side too..n plzz dont say that you are not good in romance.im not buying this excuse...your brilliant writer...i soo want to see the romantic swasan your version...n explore this area too...muahhh will wait..forever...

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Talia
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Posted: 8 years ago
@Talia dear - Aww Talia dear.. I do get you.. Why would I be hurt with your wish.. I get what you want.. To be frank when I wrote the story the climax was just right around what you imagined.. The final showdown was planned in their wedding for sure.. But somehow I established swasan not keen on getting married with payal around hence couldn't break my own set up for the dramatic end.. Yeah payal turn would be bit hard to accept.. But she didn't turn new leaf. she just gave up fighting to protect herself and her obsession with Sanskaar still remains thought she won't act on it.. I suppose..

And I get about you mood.. Some days I get so cranky and nothing interests me.. And I am just thankful you decided to leave your lovely feedback inspite of that.. Love you dear for your support.. Swasan romance.. You know what I would say to that.. Still I will try that all I can assure you.. Because belive me romance and me are miles apart..



Love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nita my dear .. 🤗
Finally I got time to Un-Res ..
Un-Res @128 ..

And I am sorry for the short feedback ..

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Khushi
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nita ..🤗
So its gonna end right 😕 Mystery is one genre I dare not to attempt in near future ..and you have done an incredible job of weaving all the elements into story, holding on mystery ( Its such a tough thing to do)so well... 👏⭐️👏 this would be one of the best mystery tales I ever read on Swasan .

Now coming to last part ...Payal - kavya, the back story ..it was moving and sad. No wonder she is a damaged and resorted to wrong ways ..and finally faces behind the masks are revealed , What an exciting journey it had been ..Though I couldn't be such an active part like I wanted to be .. I am glad to be part of this journey.

Looking forward to Swasan date and proposal

Kudos to a wonderful tale and to you too

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Posted: 8 years ago
@Khushi dearest - Loved reading your comment as always.. Will get back to the reply ASAP.. You know me still behind for few chapters. You do know how much your feedback means right.. So thanks dear for taking your time to let me know..

Lots of love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago
@Lucky dear- Loved reading your feedback.. It sure made me smile a lot.. Dear a single word of praise from you is more than enough to make me jump on cloud nine. I am sorry that I am yet to catch up on fanaa.. I will do so soon.. Well I think you updated untamed as well. Will get to it soon as well.. I was thinking of reading fanaa from the beginning hence the delay.. I want to be free to read it all in one day.. Maybe this weekend I guess.. And sure will get to reply back to your lovely comment in detail once I get around to reply to my pending lovely comment that last from chapter 14

Love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: NitaReid



Res for reply Aheli dearest



Hi Aheli dearest,

Thanks for the lovely comment Aheli dear.. I made it finally.. See how quick I replied you back.. I will say sorry but I know you will understand.. Now coming to the lovely feedback.. I am glad you liked raglak moments.. I really am 😃.. And agree no one can beat swasan in our hearts.. I get sisters bond.. The show could have shown it in an good way or shown constant rivalry between them instead of the forceful bond they used 😡.. Well our show made so much relationship meaningless in their quest for drama.. Pari being the classic example..


Yeah Swara was depressed back them that she took some drastic steps.. And yeah it was foolish of her to risk going to payal house and yes it also pretty late for me to talking about this events since the FF reached it final chapter and all your questions were answered already.. I just hope those answers made you happy not angry at me 😆.. Once again thanks for the lovely comment dear.. I hope I get back to reply to your other lovely comments ASAP


Love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: NitaReid



Res for reply Khushi dearest


Hi Khushi dearest,

I finally made it to reply back.. I feel so bad leaving such beautiful comments with an reply.. But I can't help but postpone it as I don't want to rush up an meaningless reply in my haste.. So yeah I am sorry for delaying it so long..



I always treasure reading your comments they make me smile always.. And if someone should say sorry it is me.. Not you.. See how late I am in replying back.. And reading books well I am like ragini and you too.. I don't want to be disturbed and my sister hates lights as well.. So it was more like how I read 😳 .. I read after she fell asleep.. And I initially planned to write sanskar book as an Glimpse and let you conclude how he asked payal to stop. But I made Sanskaar a great author and I don't think I can do justice to it.. Hence didn't do it..


Miss X was never upto any thing good.. I am glad you liked the swasan moments.. And I know Swara decision in the past must have been shocking but that girl lost everything except her sister and as ragini said she was not even living back then..


And yes you got it right.. I wanted to tell you that when you started guessing but can't well because it would ruin the suspense.. Also all your questions regarding AP and DP are already answered.. I just hope it lived upto your expectations.. Once again thanks for the lovely feedback dear.. Will try to get back to reply the rest of your lovely comments ASAP


Love

Nita


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: NitaReid



Res for reply Talia dearest


Hi Talia dearest,

Look how soon I gotten around to reply pats myself on the back.. Wait no I wasn't early.. So I am so sorry for the delay..


Thanks Talia dear for the lovely comment.. Reading your comments are the main reason I continue to dabble on writing.. When I read your comments I kind of forget how mediocre my writing is because that how much your guys make me happy.. And so yeah I am really glad to know you liked chapter 14.


I get why you think ragini might be obsessed with Sanskaar that would have been an plot twist that kind of twisted the whole story 😆.. But nope sorry to disappoint you with it 😉.. And yeah initially I planned to create an suspense like that but then dropped it as I kept updating..



Well the recording didn't have any specific reason that made Swara decide to confront payal.. It more like hearing yourself reminiscing how much you miss your parents.. The sudden anger that comes when you realize those who killed your parents are still free that was what propelled Swara to be reckless at that moment..


And since we reached the end already.. I am sure you got your answer by now.. I really hope you like it till the end.. And I will try to reply back to your lovely comments for the chapters I have Yet to reply back ASAP.. Thanks once again for the lovely comment Talia dear..


Love

Nita

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