SwaSan FF:Behind Their Masks(Epilogue (2) on pg 137 [15/03/17]) - Page 99

Created

Last reply

Replies

1k

Views

75.2k

Users

49

Likes

2.2k

Frequent Posters

BlurredLines thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: showrav24

Hello Nita dear
How are you buddy?!
Update as usual beautiful & nice At Last curtain fall from all mysterious objects.
sanskar first mat payal as a kavya than after gap as a payel right dear let me know.
& why sanskar behave strange last one week I want to know the reason hope swara not overlook it for the happiness of date hehehe take class him very well.
Now waiting for epilogue & their date.
hope & pray u manage time from ur busy life for urself & ourselves also.
Bye
Take care dear
love you buddy.


Hi showrav

I am good.. Thanks for the lovely feedback. I am glad you liked it.. Sanskaar strange behavior you already know the answer too. So no need to explain.. Epilogue and date over.. It time for marriage in epilogue 2 which I hope to update soon..

Take care showrav..

Love

Nita
BlurredLines thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Me too - RES RES RES

Dear Nita

Okay, I now unres - I know I have not commented for the last two or three chapters (I think the last chapter that I gave a comment was for Chapter 15) but then I decided I should not delay this any longer.

I loved this whole fic, it seems like yesterday that you sent us a pm as to whether you should post it or not and today, you have completed it. It has been a marvellous journey of mystery, intrigue, love and loss and above all hope and second chances (I am a great believer in second chances😳)

I love the detailed lengthy updates and the admire your patience and perseverance in writing this out. And who cares about that rule, thank you for sharing this story with us.

Eagerly waiting for the epilogue or two (there will be one, right).

Loads of love,
Nyna


Hi Nyna dearest..


Well you are a very important part of this tale.. You are my biggest support dear.. And so please never feel bad about few missed comments..


And yeah it all seems like yesterday. Since it was mystery genre I was never sure about myself writing this one.. So I am glad I was able to complete atleast I was able to complete the mystery aspect of the tale even if epilogue two is yet to make an appearance


Yeah there will two epilogue. And the progress on them is not remarkable.. Will try to update soon dear.. Nyna dear always know that you are a very important part of this tale and I love you for it..

Love

Nita
BlurredLines thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: StarySKY

It is my luck that the day I sign in IF is today ..

And I am back to stalk your thread .. 😃

Res for the final chapter .. 😭

Un-Res

Dear Nita .. 🤗

Sorry for the delay .. I had a very eventful month and sign in IF had been difficult means Un-Res is impossible ..

We have reached the final chapter .. I will not jump up and down .. I rather feel some how sad ( goodbyes is on the top of the list of the things I hate the most ) .. BTM is a journey I don't want it to end , but everything should end sooner or later .. but I am happy that we got a happy ending ..

Chapter 18 [ The Final Chapter ]
I Loved every bit of it , and I literally don't have words to describe how amazing this chapter is .. 👏

Everyone was worried about Sanskar for his disappearance ..
He was making a deal with the devil just to save his loved ones from another devil , her father ..
I knew Payal is capable of taking down her own father .. someone with her intelligence can do that with ease , and she did ..
Kavya had a painful past , I felt sad for the little girl , she saw how cruel the world can be at a very young age ..
Payal is smart girl I admire her for that , but she choose the wrong path .. and no matter how painful her past was , it doesn't justify what she did .. and at the end she got what she desarve ..

Sanskar I loved what he did for the little girl back in the hospital .. he indeed have a beautiful heart .. but it not his fault what she turned to it was her choice and he shouldn't feel guilty ..

Finally their life is back on the right track ..
The family are together in one house ..
Ragini and Laksh are up for a trip together ..
Uttara is working with her guilt and trying to get her life back ..
Swara is able to sleep peacefully ..
Asha the little Angel .. by the way why she still call Swara "Pari anty" shouldn't she start calling her "Mom" or something like that ?!
I knew Sanskar is going to propose to Swara ..😳 ( well for me it is so obvious 😆 ) ..
Both of them desarve happiness , everyone one does ..
Their second chance to live their life , ( as I believe that as long as we still breathing it is a chance for us to live again , no matter what happened in our past ) ..

I am waiting for the 2-3 Epilogues .. 😃

Love
Khushi


Hi Khushi dearest,


Words can never do justice to how much your support means to me dearest.. So yeah I owe you an huge thanks for being part of this journey.. Maybe because you like it so much I haven't able to come up with epilogue two till now.. So yeah it is not over yet..


And you are excitement over this tale is infectious. And I always wanted you to be happy with the update.. And you always guess correctly too.. Miss you dear.. I started another tale.. I wish to see you there as well..

Love

Nita
BlurredLines thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

My place for ch-17 Nita dearest. 😊
Unresed. 😃
Okk so Sanskar and Krish made a plan to catch Payal red handed but their plan failed coz Payal already knew that Sanskar will plan something to make her confess her crimes! And she got to know about it by Uttara's behavior towards her! Poor Uttara was so upset with Payal that she lashed out at her and accused her of killing Sakshi, DP and trying to hurt Swara, without having the knowledge that her frustrated behavior towards Payal made her more cautious by making Sanskar-Krish's plan fail. Sanskar was feeling very helpless coz his plan to catch Payal red handed failed and he blamed not actually blamed but lashed out at Uttara by making her more guilty coz she was feeling already guilty of her behavior. 😔 But Sanskar's reaction was justified too. 😊 And Uttara herself knows that how important it is to catch her so called innocent best friend, who is a cold blooded murderer behind her mask! 😡 I really love the way Swara and Sanskar understands an supports each other through thick and thin. 😃 So SwaSan were teasing each other about sleeping together in Sanskar's room that day, but their teasing soon turned into reality and they became one. ☺️ ☺️ Next day both thought that the either one was regretting about their previous night, but got relieved when their thinking got proved wrong. 😉 OMG!! Payal mixed poison in everyone's tea to threaten and scare Sanskar to accept her in his life! 😡 But thank god everyone is safe now. 😊 Okk so who was the limping guy whom the nurse left with Swara in the hospital as Swara told that she knows him and the guy was also demanding to see her?? Sanskar?? No maybe Krish?? Coz he got fractures right?? 😕 OMG! Then where is Sanskar?? 😕 😭 And what did Payal make Sanskar do?? 😕 Hope that Sanskar doesn't take any decision hastily. 😕 Update soon. 😳 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.


Hi Aheli dearest..


I keep saying it over and over again.. But it never enough.. Thanks dearest for the lovely feedback.. Words don't convey how much your comments meant to me.. Also I can't count the no of times I have read those lovely comments as well..


Since all your questions were already answered. I need not answer them now.. But just letting you know I loved loved loved reading your comment..

Love

Nita
BlurredLines thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

Since 1 month, I'm at some village for office works; network is so slow! Ugghh, except IF & sometimes Wattpad, can't log in to anything!

Can't even post a comment or reply!
Btw had a quick read of this update! SwaSan moments were beautiful, like always!
Payal! Can I strangle her, please? She is getting on my nerves! Killing people like changing dresses!
She demands to love Sanskaar but hurting him so much!
Hope Sanskaar don't lose his nerves or sanity & do something hasty!
Missing Lil Asha & family moments of SwaSan with Asha!
Hope after Payal getting her rightful punishment, will get stress free SwaSan moments & family moments!
And Nita dear, sorry for not commenting for every update! Bt be sure, I loved every updates of yours!
And I'm waiting for the next chapter of SwaSan TS as well...
Loads of love & hugs <3
~ Nupur


Hi Nupur dearest,


Thanks dearest for the lovely feedback.. And Nupur dear.. You can comment whenever you want.. Please never feel pressured about it... You dear re one of my biggest support to me.. So thanks Dear for being my constant support

Lots of love

Nita
BlurredLines thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: iamreader

Dearest Nita,

I'm so happy that you updated. The forum is so dead. I miss you all badly. Especially you, Nyna, Lucky, Saku, VijI. .. Nimmi too. At least you're in WP now.

About the update, you made up for previous Less Swasan filled update in this one. 😳 Swara healed Sanskar breaking all her inhibitions. As a girl that needs a lot of courage, faith and love. This Payal 😡 I hope Sanskar won't take any hasty decision or comply with her demand to save his Swara and family

Update the next part soon.I'm curious.

Love,
Dyuti


Hi dyuti dearest


I am not very much active on wattpad either now.. I was very active back then but not now. Sadly.. I miss all of them too dear..


I am glad you liked the update dear.. I am trying to catch up with my previous comments.. I really hope to able to do so.. Because I appreciate each and every comment.. Thanks dear for the lovely comment

Love

Nita
BlurredLines thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: showrav24

unres
Hello Nita dear buddy lots of hugs
Update is fantastic & superv like before climax romance blackmailing helplessness of hero super picturization dear A+++.
Uttara foolish move or I say emotionally drain move back fire all sanskar hard work or plan.
& now this payel I want extreme punishments for her don't let go her easily.
&hoping sanskar not take drastic action now in angry hope he act smart.
loved swasan romance atlast they become one I know u are totally uncomfortable in romance hehehe.
thanks for the update dear hope u get ur laptop soon.
Take care
Bye
love u buddy.


Hi showrav..


Thanks showrav.. You do know how much all your comments mean to me.. So I don't want to sound like an broken record. Yet I got to say thanks alteast


Still not comfortable in romance.. Yeah I got it repaired my laptop.. Yet I hardly use it anymore to write stories.. I gotten used to write in my phone that I don't use laptop nowadays...

Love

Nita
BlurredLines thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: StarySKY

Nita .. 🤗

Hey there .. I am having a problems with my WiFi .. again .. 🤢
I am using my mother Internet for now .. but I think I will be off for some days more ..

Wow .. typing from mobile 😲 , that is a very tiring thing .. I know that feeling ..
Hope your laptop get fixed soon ..
Actually I don't mind .. we are getting 3 updates not 2 .. 😃😆

Loved the chapter .. it was amazing as always Nita .. 👏

Family are the one we need the most .. loved the family scene ..
Asha the little lovely girl .. Sujata, Ram , Adrash, Swara and Sanskar ..

Then when Sanskar told them the truth of Payal .. the re-open of old pain .. but they must feel a bit of relieved that the killer is known ..

Uttara .. I don't know how she felt when they told her ..
Her reaction to Payal " kill me " ..
I love what Laksh did to protect his sister ..
Payal I was expecting her to do something like this , it so typical her to kill herself a coward action ( I am some kind talking like I know her in person or I am the one create her ..😆 )
Wait a second Krish is died ?! Please no I like this guy ..

Waiting for next .. I want Payal to live and see everyone reaction when they got to know that the Innocent Payal is a truly evil person ..

Sorry for the weird comment I am typing very fast from my mother phone ..

Love
Khushi


Hi Khushi dear,

Your comments will never be weird.. Trust me on that.. I loved loved reading your comments.. I m replying from Mobile too.. I gotten used to it somehow.. Yet it hard to edit nd all..


Also I no longer write using my laptop.. Using mobile is easy nowadays.. You already know about the story so don't need to say anything.. Except thanks for the lovely comment.. My dear friend


Love
Nita
BlurredLines thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Once again I lost track of the comments guys.. So to all those lovely friends.. I apologize.. Just know I read your comments more times than I can count.. But I have delayed replying them back to give proper reply and now I lost track of the comments.. So sorry guys.. Can I just say thank you here.. For the lovely feedback.. Each comment meant a lot to me and I feel terrible at not being able to keep track of it.. So I apologize..

Love

Nita
BlurredLines thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago


THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
The Author of this post have chosen to restrict the content of this Post to members only.


Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".