SwaSan FF:Behind Their Masks(Epilogue (2) on pg 137 [15/03/17]) - Page 100

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Posted: 8 years ago
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part unres - My two cents - do not change the epilogue it fits the story, not a fairy ending but it was never a fairy tale story either. I liked it.

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Posted: 8 years ago
hmm I have to admit it's darker but its beautiful dear
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

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part unres - My two cents - do not change the epilogue it fits the story, not a fairy ending but it was never a fairy tale story either. I liked it.

Nyna


You like it.. That all I need to know dear.. 😃.. I agree this epilogue fits better.. I am not going to change this one.. I asked if I should add epilogue 3 with lighter moments.. But then again I am confused if I made epilogue 3 light then would epilogue 2 lose its impact.. Help me out dear..
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hmm I have to admit it's darker but its beautiful dear


Thanks Ria dearest.. All I planned was for Swara to get back her memory before the wedding and then it turned darker all on its own.. Not my fault 😆.. But I am glad and relieved to know you liked it

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Posted: 8 years ago
every story u weave makes me say the same old thing beautiful how lcould u weave such majestic peices
i need to reread again and if i get time i will tell u it is so good
the epilogue was dark indeed but beautiful
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Thanks dearest.. Really happy to know you liked the end😃

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Originally posted by: aamias

every story u weave makes me say the same old thing beautiful how lcould u weave such majestic peices

i need to reread again and if i get time i will tell u it is so good
the epilogue was dark indeed but beautiful


Thanks Asmita dear.. Really happy to know you liked the update 😃 .. I am so glad you liked the epilogue inspite of it being little dark.. Their story was bit dark.. So epilogue gotten like that 😉.. But I am just glad you liked it..

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You like it.. That all I need to know dear.. 😃.. I agree this epilogue fits better.. I am not going to change this one.. I asked if I should add epilogue 3 with lighter moments.. But then again I am confused if I made epilogue 3 light then would epilogue 2 lose its impact.. Help me out dear..


Adding another epilogue would certainly mean changing epilogue 2 for as you said it would definitely lose its impact.
Make the epilogue 3 into an OS instead, set it another world, not a spin off of this either. However, much I would like this story to go on, the way it has ended with your Epilogue 2 is just perfect. Do not do anything to this story.
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@Nyna :" I know.. That how I felt about epilogue 2 as well.. It just that I felt for all the other characters I didn't do much justice.. But you are right.. Epilogue two should be the last for this one.. I can't believe I have been writing for so long and in one week have managed to complete all three of my FF.. "

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@Nyna :" I know.. That how I felt about epilogue 2 as well.. It just that I felt for all the other characters I didn't do much justice.. But you are right.. Epilogue two should be the last for this one.. I can't believe I have been writing for so long and in one week have managed to complete all three of my FF.. "


Hmmm you are right, Ragini and Laksh did not get much a mention, right? Poor things, such a nice couple. In that case, write out for them only such a way that it does not interfere with Epilogue 2, an addendum maybe. I do not know, let me think

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