SwaSan FF:Behind Their Masks(Epilogue (2) on pg 137 [15/03/17])

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1001

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Hmmm you are right, Ragini and Laksh did not get much a mention, right? Poor things, such a nice couple. In that case, write out for them only such a way that it does not interfere with Epilogue 2, an addendum maybe. I do not know, let me think

No Nyna dear .. I just got over this FF.. I won't be able to write Epilogue three now.. I said my goodbye.. So it fine. But as you said yeah I felt bad for the other characters.. But I think I concentrated enough on them so it shouldn't be a big deal that I skipped then in Epilogue right.. Well let us both think then😕

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1002

Nita baby...

Epilogue is perfect..no need to change a thing...it was a very genuine story...not a fairytale...even dialogues..situations and reasons of everyone's behaviour to certain situation were apt.which story needed..so i did not felt epilogue dark or anything...kavya also needed her closure...what's better than having last talk with Sanky...I loved how swasan understand each other..n did not rush into getting married...they took time..n sorted their minds.n finally got married...I must say it was in end ,happily ever after for them...loved it...

Thank u baby...muahhh again

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showrav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1003

atlast they are living normal life before u create some ohcoufuvh in their life though it go to the story.
u can show some romance or light moments when they gone for vacation but then impact may different & I knew ur take on romance so this also good infact very good.
another venture come to end congrats dear & my feelings mixed mostly happy 😆 😃 that u complete another.
Take care sweet buddy
Bye
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