SwaSan FF:Behind Their Masks(Epilogue (2) on pg 137 [15/03/17]) - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: 92Sara

Awesome Update.
Asha is Very Understanding and Cute Kid.
Swara(Pari) lost her Memory and staying with Sanskar(Arjun) and even fell in Love with Him.
Waiting to see how Sanskar deals with his emotions now.
The Kiss was a Cherry on Cake.
Thanks for PM



Thanks Sara dearest..Really happy to know you liked the update..Asha is cute indeed😳... Sanskar will go through lot of conflicting emotions as mystery will be revealed left and right.. You should add a kiss whenever you can right 😆..Thanks once again for the lovely comment and Happy Friendship day🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: anu012

Awsome chptr
both love each other & swara confess her feelings to sanskar
eagr to know about mystery of arjun & swara
loved it...
update soon

plz do pm nxt time plzzz



Thanks for the lovely comment Anu dearest and Sorry about No PM till now, i only send it those in my Buddy list..Added you to the list now..So will send you from the upcoming chapters .. 😊


I am happy to know you liked the chapter and i will reveal the mystery as we progress, hope it keeps you entertained till the end..Will update this friday or the weekend.. And once again sorry for the No PM..Will send you for sure from now onwards.. And happy friendship day🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
Dear Nita,
Chapter 1 is nice - so we have Swara/Pari enter into Sanskaar / Arjun's life and gradually become a part of their lives. Swara & Sanskaar appear to be falling for each other, despite his attempts to deny the attraction. Her reasoning of her feelings is good.
And Asha appears to be a very cute and lovable kid, and Dida is certainly the indulgent grandmother.

Waiting for the next update.

love,
Nyna


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Posted: 8 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: NitaReid




Thanks Sara dearest..Really happy to know you liked the update..Asha is cute indeed😳... Sanskar will go through lot of conflicting emotions as mystery will be revealed left and right.. You should add a kiss whenever you can right 😆..Thanks once again for the lovely comment and Happy Friendship day🤗

Happy Friendship Day to U Too Nitu.
Love u.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
@Nyna-- Happy Friendship day to you too Nyna dearest ..🤗..Will revert back to your lovely comment soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: 92Sara


Happy Friendship Day to U Too Nitu.
Love u.


Love you too🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77


Happy Friendship day to all my dear friends 🤗 ...



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Posted: 8 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Hi Nita🤗

prologue is intriguing and first chapter ..Liked it a lot ..pace and progression of story⭐️ ..Arjun is sanskaar na and swara was stabbed by ragini I guess 😆 you left us curious

Looking forward for next update

Love
Lucky



Hi lucky dearest.. I am really happy to know you liked the FF so far.. I was worried the pace might be bit fast but happy to know you are happy with it as well.. Yes Sanskaar is arjun... That you have to keep guessing.. All though everyone is betting on ragini.. Next update on Friday or weekend.. Little busy.. If I finished it early.. I post it soon


Lots of Love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: showrav24

Nice update nita dear👏

like i m on rollercoster
I m confuse about date & year pls clear i think its 7th august 2015 instead of 2016 when she discharge becz than u mention 17th july 2016 where u stated they stay together nearly one year so clear it.
this is really bad u skip one year their life when they became comfortable, friend & fall in love u skip best part of swasan not good we swasan egarly wait every time swasan beginning but u skip that i know they change name but hai tho our swasan.
update is beautiful
now when next week come cuz waiting for ur update to know further
update soon dear
love u
bye



Thanks showrav.. Happy to know you liked the update.. Yep I made a mistake.. Typing 2016 out of habit.. Need to recheck dates before I update from next chapter onwards..

I know skipping one year is a huge time skip.. I try to add certain moments of their past as flashback to compensate for the time skip.. But I wanted to come to the present time, also I wanted them to be familiar with each other.. Hence add to give then enough time to get to know each other as well without knowing the real identity.. Hope I made sense..


Yeah currently bit busy but I try to update by Friday.. Thanks for the lovely comment showrav.. It made me really happy 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80
Nita sweetheart...
Prologue was soo exciting ..intriging...interesting..i was deeply involved..the bond between arjun (sansku)n asha..adharsh...even dida..was fantastic..he is in his shell infront ofother..only his true self is shown to his loved ones...

Swara kidnapped on her wedding day...n that kidnapper stabbed her...i was dead...reread it againas i was thinking i misread something..but it indeed was stab..was shocked n petrified...

Coming to chapter 1 ...it was marvellous...one year journey of pari n arjun..inshort swasan...right from rescuing her...safe guarding.. .waiting..healing..supporting...sheltering..providing..caring n finally loving...he just did everything for her..how could she not fallen for him...i just loved it..asha n dida are fond of her..she has become part of his family n heart..but not willing to give her part in his life...why???? Stupid arjun..overthinker n over protective...

Waiting for next like crazy...do give us fb of that one year together...any pleasant memory of swasan/ arjun pari...

Love
Talia


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