DOES MY DECISION WAS RIGHT ?(SWASAN OS) part 3 ( page 6) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Aahana133


I am not leaving writing. Writing has become my passion. U can read my work on telly. Or I will try to post here also.


dont leave it too i will try to read it in telly or why dont u open another account
best of luck frommy side
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
I loved this... totally do...
u kept the reality in ur shot...
m glad sanskar is remorseful ...
m glad swara didn't let her feelings overpower her..
loved they aren't 2gether in the end..
good job aninya... do write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
I really liked this OS. Great work. I like how you have portrayed everything so realistically- One won't be rescued by a Prince Charming all the time. You took a strong issue and showed it so simply using just 2 characters. Hope to read more of your work.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Hey Aahana... Sorry dear I don't know your name.. fabulous os must needed for the society.. I was planned to write something like this.. but I loved this more.. i loved the every decision Swara took.. to like her life on her own... Society bit** sorry for speaking such harsh word... I damn care about them.. They value for money... Power... Not for human...

Sanskaar is he a real man. I wonder... his wife making love with someone in front of his eyes... Wow... he is just sitting there and what he is doing enjoying ahh... I'm happy what Swara answered for him...

Take a bow dear...

With love...

Kam...


It's kk somehow credit also goes to aahana,I am glad that u like it. Only swara answer made me write whole part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharif_lafungi

I loved this... totally do...
u kept the reality in ur shot...
m glad sanskar is remorseful ...
m glad swara didn't let her feelings overpower her..
loved they aren't 2gether in the end..
good job aninya... do write more


Thanks...
I will post my story from this I'd...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: ErisedWitch45

I really liked this OS. Great work. I like how you have portrayed everything so realistically- One won't be rescued by a Prince Charming all the time.You took a strong issue and showed it so simply using just 2 characters. Hope to read more of your work.


Thanks...
Glad u like it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: aamias



dont leave it too i will try to read it in telly or why dont u open another account
best of luck frommy side


I don't able to handle so many account, I will post my stories through this I'd...
Anniya...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Speechless this story made me.. just loved it...omg ... I just can't express how much i liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1

Speechless this story made me.. just loved it...omg ... I just can't express how much i liked it


😊
Thank u...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey dear...
How can i miss this..??when i read this story it was OS..now it converted into TS...ahh im stupid..

But dear amazingly written..i would say karma.bites.what sansku did to swara.same happened with him..but swara suffered more in life...u end it nicely...well i wanted swasan reunion but i know this is different story ..it is not possible...but still loved it...want to ask.one thing sanku fallen for her again.but swara ??? Im confused did she felt something for him??? After returning??? She moved on..but did she still love him???

Overall awesome

Talia

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