DOES MY DECISION WAS RIGHT ?(SWASAN OS) part 3 ( page 6) - Page 2

Originally posted by: ishanita

i agreed with talia and suji completely...it is the realistic case...it is the harsh reality that sometyms saying lie or hiding things seems better than revelaing truth...
...but as it concerns swasan for which i keep my rational mind away ...i really want part two for this ...plz ...cannt bear them like this

nice attempt
do write more
ishita

Originally posted by: Anusha62

Aahana i loved it very much.. realistic concept wht ever wrong may b atlast girls r victim of this stupid society.. really i feel pity for the womens who got raped wid out any fault nd suffering to the hell nd baring taunts.. as u said in fanics r in movies they show aftr getng rape too men accept women bt it doesn't happns in real, very rarely as u mention it.. bt dear atleast show swara as a successful women aftr divorce do countinue ya.. write one more part!!!!

Originally posted by: Kaveetha

Dear,

Great os...👏

Ofcourse this is the reality of this society.

I liked that swara didn't hide her past. And here sanskaar is wrong. It was his decision to marry her. That chudail pa has to know that he is a married man.😡 If they love each other, then they should tell it to her without hiding it. If they did that so, i'm sure swara would have given the divorce ealier. Arrgh.. Forget it dear.

Like ishita said, even i want another part from this.

Overall it was a great os.

Do write more.

Originally posted by: sharif_lafungi

I really liked how u kept the touch of reality in this fiction... many find it hard to do so... this deserves great respects...
we always try to avoid harsh realities nd make our own world where all is fine nd dandy when it reality it's most of the time quite opposite...
good job ahaana... really loved it

Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice Os.. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Aahana133

Tnx ...I will try to write next part for showing her successful life without any man.

Originally posted by: ishanita

is that???
sounds great and realistic
but can u add a part where swara is more successful than sanky without any support and then that sanky has to suffer same betrayal he gave and then will be guilt ruiden but swara will never forgive or accept ' him-