DOES MY DECISION WAS RIGHT ?(SWASAN OS) part 3 ( page 6) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Awesome update
Really like swara progress 👏
Update soon


Thanks yr...
Next part on Monday or may be Tuesday...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aamias

when will u update


This is anniya story. She is unwell today. So may tonight or tomorrow she will update here. Even u can read it on telly update. She has completed there. U can search by this name...you are not pure
Aahana
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I loved how u showed her progress nd difficulties...
I would really like to know how u hv planned the ending... I don't want to drop suggestions on how it can be or anything.. u hv taken a wonderful plot nd showed a lovely progress... I believe ending would be beautiful too...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aahana133


This is anniya story. She is unwell today. So may tonight or tomorrow she will update here. Even u can read it on telly update. She has completed there. U can search by this name...you are not pure
Aahana


can u give me the link?...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharif_lafungi


can u give me the link?...


Updating after 9 pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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First sry guys being late. Yes it's my I mean anniya story... Little bit I am disappointed by comments. I decided not to post here. Whoever want I will give them link. But I change my decision and it's my first and last story here...
Thanks to them who have comment...
at cofee shop...
present...
SWARA POV..
this coffee shop play great importance my life. i am still lost in myself until some giggling sound seek my attention. i turned in that direction from which sound is coming. by seeing that i really become shock. it again shake me i mummer ed " ADITI ".
aditi is sitting in someone lap, but this time that someone is not sanskar. he is one of bushiness rival of sanskar. i thought to not poke my nose in this matter. i still thinking about aditi character. someone tap my shoulder from behind. he asked me " does r u miss mitra who has come from delhi regarding some divorce case." from his voice i quickly come to know who is that man. still praying myself my assumption should wrong. it's not like that i am fearing from facing my past. but i hate him. if he again come infront of me, i may loose my control. somehow i managed myself i turn my gaze in his direction. my assumption is totally correct. he is sanskar maheswari. destiny is again going to play game with me but this time i am strong. i am ready face all things. i could easily see same shock in his face. i offer him seat.
i replied him yes i miss mitra who has come from delhi to ur divorce case. he is still in shock like he had got 100 volt current. i shake him to seek his attention. i again replied him same.
Hii swara, how r u. it feel good to know u became successful." sanskar managed to ask her
before he completed his sentence swara cut him in middle...

"i am not here to answer ur question. nor receiving ur greeting. ur pa ask me to come here . first i denied him, but he somehow managed to convice me . most important i am here for some business deal. if i felt u r correct then only i will take ur case. now tell me reason of divorce. one more thing i totally keep personal life and professional life apart." swara

" okay sorry, i want divorce because my wife has cheated on me " sanskar managed to tell him with pain in his eyes.

" i want to know all things how ur marriage life going on, how u come to know she is cheating. every small details i want. if u r not comfortable with me. then u can hire other lawyer because without knowing everything i don't take any case in my hand so choice is ur. one more thing if i felt u r really victim then only i will take ur case otherwise clearly no. " swara said him with professional attitude.

again both are silent. this time also swara break it.
" i think u r not in comfort. then sry i can't help u." swara
she began go from there, sanskar shouted her name ..
" swara... i am ready. "
swara comeback seated in front of him .

sanky [start conversation with some hesitation ]; after divorce from my first wife . i was in guilt. so for someday i don't went office to clam my self. after one week i able to comeout from guilt. i decided to join office again that time i am so lonely. aditi used to cheer me. she always use to managed my mood. we both continue our relation ffor nearly one year. one day i decided to propose her. i proposed her for marriage she also said yes . that time i felt myself most luckiest man...
his voice become choked...
swara give him water and ask him continue
after one month we both marry each other. that night we both are so happy, we celebrate our first night. days are passing like this. after one year just 10 days before our anniversary, i found someone from my company is selling details to my rival " rajat gupta ". i began to search culprit. i also discussed these things to my wife. she advice me to leave this thing on her. she will find culprit. i nodded with her. after 10 days our marriage anniversary come. i decided to surprise her. i reach home early . I don't know i am going to receive my life biggest shock.i entered in my house with using some spare keys. i heard some sound from my room . i thought there must be some thief . i began to panic thinking about aditi. with some courage i managed to enter in room. after seeing that scenario i shattered.
now tears are started flowing from his eyes. swara understand what must he had seen. still she ask him continue.
i saw aditi is in intimate position with my business rival rajat. i don't spoke anything. after some time both come to sense and notice me. instead of feeling guilty my wife told me baby wait we both have to enjoy some more time. after that we both will also enjoy.
Her answer give me another shock. without saying anything i rush to hall. i seated there lifelessly. nearly after one hour rajat canme out. i rushes to him, i hold his collar but for my another my slapped me. ask me leave rajat , rajat went from there i decided to confront her. i asked her what is that ? she replied me that is " love ". i asked her give me divorce she denied me.
after that i began to search for lawyer but no one want to take my case due to first divorce. i also don't had any proof to prove adit's crime. one lawyer took my case , in court she prove me characterless she also told judge still she want to give me one chance. judge agree with her. judge give me order to stay in marriage. daily infront of me my wife use to make love with rajat. i don't able to do anything. i began to search other lawyers, when i share my problem with atul, my paa. he suggest me ur name. i ask him to contact u. in starting u also denied to come kolkata for my case. somehow atul managed to convince you.
now tell me u will take my case or not. if ur answer is no i don't have any gut feeling u r free to take ur decision.
"i want sometime to study case. after checking from my resources i will give my answer to atul . as i already told u if i felt u r right i will fight for u." swara

Both went in different direction...
sanky is walking on road. he began to think his last five year...
sanky pov...
in these five year i had lost my everything. first swara due to my mistake, when i found aditi in intimate position that day i reliase swara pain. i want to ask her forgiveness. i went her home. her dadi replied she is dead for them. after inquiring i found that swara had said no to second marriage.so her dadi made her leave house. now no one knows where is she ?. my company is also in loss, i don't able to manage it. it seem to destiny is playing same game. that day swara had come to surprise me on our anniversary , she received her biggest shock. on same day i also receive biggest shock . i lost everything soon i am going to loose my company someone is coming from delhi to takeover on it.
pov end...

three days later...
atul inform sanskar swara want to meet him at coffee shop.
sanky pov..
coffee shop is always turning point in my and swara life. this is same coffee shop at which i agree to marry her, same coffee shop where she ask me divorce, same coffee shop where i again meet her after five long years. that day i completely in shock to see her. she turn more beautiful. after seeing her all guilt came in my mind how i cheated on her. for sometime i am completely loss in her thoughts. when she touch me i felt current passing through my body. that i never i felt. this is not first time she is touching but this time i felt some sensation in my body. i reached at coffee shop, again i mesmerized to see her. i began fall for her. she notice me i am somewhere lost. she shouted my name, i come in my senses. i take sit in front of her. her answer give me shock. i thought she will deny me for my case. but she say yes i will...
pov end.
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swara pov...
after listening his story i don't feel any pain. only pity for him, destiny has played same game with him. that once destiny had played with me. i said him i need time for thinking about his case. after searching alot i found aditi trap him with rajat. after knowing truth i become confuse , what should i do ? i closed my eyes to know answer, my heart rply me yes u should. justice is most important. i call atul to fix my meeting with him.
now i here...
after telling him my decision, we decided to appeal in court.we receive hearing date after two weeks.
pov end...
after two weeks...
sanskar pov...
today is first hearing. in these two weeks i completely fall for her . i decided to propose her after getting divorce. we entered in court, opposition lawyer accuse my character that i had cheated my both wives. somehow swara proof my innocence . finally i got divorce. now i am free, i can propose swara, i will ask forgiveness. i know my crime is big but her heart is also big. she will surely accept me. first i have to go office for deal.
i reaches office i find a lady is in my cabin. i become happy seeing her. she is my swara , my love. but... atul also come inside my cabin... another shock is waiting for me. he told me swara for collaboration.n. With heavy heart i sign deal. without anything saying she went from there. i decided to ask for coffee date as treat. first she denied after many insistence she finally agreed.

swara pov...
i am now in sanskar cabin, the same cabin which once shattered me. this time i am here for deal. after signing deal . sanskar asked me for coffee. after his so many insistence i noodled yes.

at coffee shop..
sanky pov..
i decided to propose her this place. this place is very imp in our life. she came here at 7 pm. after co fee i settle on knee she seem to confuse i simply ask for forgiveness. she reply me i forgive u long back. i become happy, later i propose her. she made stand on my feet. ask same question which she had ask long back. " does i able to give her wife rights " . this time i without delay i said yes but,,,,, her rply make me shock.She come close to me and whisper...

swara; sanskar whenever u will come close to me i will always remember. u are not pure. i will not able to give u husband rights. sry...

i am still in shock. she is going far away from me. i didn't have courage to stop her. somehow i managed my self i go behind her , i plead her plz comeback but nothing work. she simply go away...

swara pov..
he proposed me for marriage but my decision is final. now i am again going to start a new journey without sanskar or any other man... with same unanswered question" DOES MY DECISION WAS RIGHT "

end...
coffee shop had played very imp. role in my ts and Delhi also. both is turning point in their.only due to ur support i able to write it. i also don't know how i able to write this much.this os become a ts due to u...so thanks...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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i would say I loved ur story ur thinking is very different from girls u r brilliant writer and the most important thing is ur thought process I know u made them apart but this is it should be. u r such a wonderful writer. write again and give this wonderful pieces of work.
This line is what I would say u really made me feel proud I am quite pleased I read ur story
"swara; sanskar whenever u will come close to me i will always remember. u are not pure. i will not able to give u husband rights. sry..".

I am happy I read ur story
bye take care
write again bcoz somebody didnt comment or didnt liked or said u something u shouldnt change ur focus
u r a writer with a different thought process ppl will criticise u for open mindedness that doesnt mean u will leave ur hobby

Love u Asmita
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aamias

i would say I loved ur story ur thinking is very different from girls u r brilliant writer and the most important thing is ur thought process I know u made them apart but this is it should be. u r such a wonderful writer. write again and give this wonderful pieces of work.

This line is what I would say u really made me feel proud I am quite pleased I read ur story
"swara; sanskar whenever u will come close to me i will always remember. u are not pure. i will not able to give u husband rights. sry..".

I am happy I read ur story
bye take care
write again bcoz somebody didnt comment or didnt liked or said u something u shouldnt change ur focus
u r a writer with a different thought process ppl will criticise u for open mindedness that doesnt mean u will leave ur hobby

Love u Asmita


I am not leaving writing. Writing has become my passion. U can read my work on telly. Or I will try to post here also.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Aahana... Sorry dear I don't know your name.. fabulous os must needed for the society.. I was planned to write something like this.. but I loved this more.. i loved the every decision Swara took.. to like her life on her own... Society bit** sorry for speaking such harsh word... I damn care about them.. They value for money... Power... Not for human...
Sanskaar is he a real man. I wonder... his wife making love with someone in front of his eyes... Wow... he is just sitting there and what he is doing enjoying ahh... I'm happy what Swara answered for him...

Take a bow dear...

With love...

Kam...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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the like button is not working
thousand likes from my side

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