DOES MY DECISION WAS RIGHT ?(SWASAN OS) part 3 ( page 6)

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Hii guys this is first os on IF.if u like it then give ur views.May be after reading it guys don't like sanskar character. Sry 4 that...
Swara mitra - Marriage fixed sanskar .Have a dark past.
Shomi mitra - mother of swara. A widow.
Sanskar maheswari - owner of karma industries. Marriage fixed with swara mitra.

"Mom I want to tell him truth. I can't start my life with this guilt. "swara
"But beta no one able to accept it. He will not understand it.May be he think wrong about u. just think once do u really want this. "Shomi
"Yes mom whatever will his decision I will accept it.If he want to break this marriage then I also I don't have any problem." Swara

"Okay swara do whatever u want just remember one thing in every situation of ur life I am with u."shomi

Swara leave from there, shomi is still tense.
Third person POV..
after remembering that incident shomi eyes filled with tears. She knows may be after knowing truth he may break alliance .But swara is also right at her place. All relation should start with honesty. She decided to not stop her daughter. If she want this. Then it's also okay for her. Her happiness most important thing.

Scene shift to swara room...
She is continuously trying to call someone. After so many attempts the other person finally pick the phone.
"Hello where r u from half an hour I am trying ur phone." Swara

"Arre darling relax. I was in meeting. Phone was switch off.I don't know my would be wife so much miss me she can't able to live without one second without talking to me." Sanskar

"stop Pulling my leg I want to tell u some important matter."Swara
"Kk wify tell me"sanskar

"Not on phone I want to meet u"swara
"meet me in half an hour at coffee shop." sanskar


"I am reaching u too come fast." Swara

" kk " sanskar

At coffee shop...
Sanskar enter in cofee shop. He is in pink blazer. He is looking stunning. (I like him in that blazer)
Swara is already waiting for him. She is in blue suit She is looking so pretty.
Both are mesmerized by looking at each other. There is short eyelock between them.

Sanskar sit near her...
"Now tell me what do u want to share ." sanskar
"Actually I want to tell u about my past" swara
"I don't care about ur past whatever ur past I will accept u with your all faults and goodness. Ur future is with me. And believe me it will not effect our life." Sanskar
"Listen me first after it u can take your decision. I want start this relationship only after that telling my past." Swara
"okay as ur wish." Sanskar
"Five year ago when I was in Delhi.I am returning home with my bua.We book a cab.The driver took us at a isolated place. He told us this is shortcut . And he call someone tell them reach xyz place. He stop cab. Forcefully he pull me outside the cab my bus tried to free me but nick of time some more person come they hold her.She started to shout but due to night no one can hear us. They r**e me and throw me on road.Next day when I open my eyes.I find myself in municipal hospital. My mom and bua are near me.They r crying by seeing my conditions. Somehow I console them.After some day I fill complain against them.Instead of filling fir they started to question on my character. What I am doing at late night, what I had wear that and many more question.Which again broke me. That point I want to die . But mom and bua support me. After so many interrogation they write my complain. Nearly after one month rapist are catches by police. Finally I got justice. After that I come Kolkata. It take 5 years to come out from that tragedy." Swara
Both have tears in their eyes.For sometime none of them speak anything. Both are silent.Finally swara broke silence.
"Tell me ur decision.Even after knowing that will u able to accept me." Swara
"Yes I will,if u wanted u can easily hided this from me.May be I never able to come know about but u choose to tell me truth.I like ur honesty . my respect for u increase more. U are very brave swara. I don't love ur body I love ur soul.This is my final decision." Sanskar
After 1 month...
They finally married.Today is their first night.
Both are very nervous.After completing all rituals.Sanskar come in room.Swara is already waiting for him.
He sit on bed.She is in viel.She is hell nervous.Her heartbeat is raising. He lift her viel.He lean toward her to kiss her lips. She closes her eyes to giving him permission. ...
But something stop him going close to her.He back off.
"Swara u must be tried change ur clothes and sleep." Sanskar
Swara changes into normal wear.After changing both sleep on same bad.
Sanskar never come close to her. Sometimes she try to come close but he back off by giving some excuse.This continue for 6-7 months.Now Sanskar started to ignore her.He even come house late and go office early.
Swara finally decided to talk him. What is disturbing him.
She waited for him till 1 am.He finally come at 7:00 clock.
"Sanskar I want to talk to u" swara
"Yes swara speak do u need anything." Sanskar
"Is everything right between us " swara
"Yes swara due to busy schedule I don't able to give u time" Sanskar
"are u sure na only this is reason" swara
"yes swara it's nothing like that wat u r thinking" sanky
"Now plz prepare breakfast I have to go office" Sanskar
"but you only come now" swara
" swara I tell u na I am busy nowadays" Sanskar
Swara go toward kitchen to prepare breakfast.Whereas Sanskar take relief breath.
Now one year is completed of their marriage.
Swara decided to give him surprise.She become ready to go his office after that she decided to take him on date.
She don't her happiness is going to end .
Finally she reached his office. By seeing scene,she stumble .Her feet become week.Not able to stand.Somehow she managed to speak.
"Sanskar"swara
He become shocked by seeing her.
"Do u wanna clarify what u both are doing." Swara
"it's nothing like that swara something went inside her eyes I am only helping her" Sanskar
"Oh,she is sitting on ur lap.Her hand is on ur chest . ur buttons are also open. U r telling me u r helping her." Swara
"Don't create scene here we will talk at home." Sanskar
"I am creating scene. Right now I want to talk u.Come with me" swara
Both come outside the office. Go at cofee shop,...
"Now u can explain me what is going on.What is relation between u two." Swara
"And don't dare to fool me.I want truth" swara
"Her name is aditi . she is my pa and my love." Sanskar
"If u love her then why u marry me.U could tell me before." Swara(in almost crying voice)
"Does this is reason u don't come close to me." Swara
"No swara I started to love her after our marriage.She too loves me.Whenever I tried to come close 2 u I remember ur past that I am not first one to touch u. It always stop me." Sanskar
"Then why u marry me I don't force u." swara
" that time I thought it will not effect me but I am wrong.I tried accept u. But I don't able to do it. Sorry" Sanskar
"Now what u want do u want divorce.I will give u . I don't want burden on u." Swara
"U r not any burden.U can live with me" Sanskar
"From which right" swara
" U r my wife."Sanskar
"wife has some right do u able to give me those right" swara
Sanskar is silent.He don't know what to speak.

" I get ur answer I want divorce after divorce u can continue ur romance" swara

Without listening anything she go from there.
After one week she send him divorce paper.
They r finally divorced.
Outside court room.she is in deep thinking.she is remembering her conversation with her mom.How she told her not to reveal anything.No one able accept it.How she opposed her . her conversation with Sanskar. How he accepted her. And last his intimate position.
Only one thought come into her mind.
Does my decision was right'
End...
I have read many stories that after knowing truth boy accepted girl. But really everyone does so.Does actually it's girl fault.she is victim of rape.Does she doesn't have right to live happy.Our society need change mind and mens need to understand if u r accepting ur partner . u have to accept her with all with past. U r not doing any favour on her.She is also accepting u.She is not at fault.
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Sujayricky thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Truly a superb os 👏
And a realistic one also 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey dear...
Amazing update...it was a reality...liked that sansku did not hide more n clearly told what he felt...n swara took good decision..may be she would find someone who doesnot think her as rape victim...n accept that whatever happened was not her fault...overaall nuce

Talia
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Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Truly a superb os 👏
And a realistic one also 👏


Thank u sooo much for ur precious comment.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: krishuuu

Hey dear...

Amazing update...it was a reality...liked that sansku did not hide more n clearly told what he felt...n swara took good decision..may be she would find someone who doesnot think her as rape victim...n accept that whatever happened was not her fault...overaall nuce

Talia

Tnx 4 comment and I am glad u like it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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i agreed with talia and suji completely...it is the realistic case...it is the harsh reality that sometyms saying lie or hiding things seems better than revelaing truth...
...but as it concerns swasan for which i keep my rational mind away ...i really want part two for this ...plz ...cannt bear them like this

nice attempt
do write more
ishita
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dear,
Great os... 👏
Ofcourse this is the reality of this society.
I liked that swara didn't hide her past. And here sanskaar is wrong. It was his decision to marry her. That chudail pa has to know that he is a married man.😡 If they love each other, then they should tell it to her without hiding it. If they did that so, i'm sure swara would have given the divorce ealier. Arrgh.. Forget it dear.
Like ishita said, even i want another part from this.
Overall it was a great os.
Do write more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I really liked how u kept the touch of reality in this fiction... many find it hard to do so... this deserves great respects...
we always try to avoid harsh realities nd make our own world where all is fine nd dandy when it reality it's most of the time quite opposite...
good job ahaana... really loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aahana i loved it very much.. realistic concept wht ever wrong may b atlast girls r victim of this stupid society.. really i feel pity for the womens who got raped wid out any fault nd suffering to the hell nd baring taunts.. as u said in fanics r in movies they show aftr getng rape too men accept women bt it doesn't happns in real, very rarely as u mention it.. bt dear atleast show swara as a successful women aftr divorce do countinue ya.. write one more part!!!!
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Originally posted by: sharif_lafungi

I really liked how u kept the touch of reality in this fiction... many find it hard to do so... this deserves great respects...
we always try to avoid harsh realities nd make our own world where all is fine nd dandy when it reality it's most of the time quite opposite...
good job ahaana... really loved it

Tnx 4 ur comment...

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