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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2 updated...

My perfect decision...

HII GUYS I am BACK WITH NEW PART OF DOES MY DECISION WAS RIGHT'. THANKS FOR LOVING THIS OS I MYSELF FELT I SHOULD GIVE BETTER ENDING. SO I AM HERE, . SPECIAL THANKS TO ALL THOSE WHO GIVE ME THEIR SUGGESTION . MAY BE THIS PART IS NOT UP TO UR EXCEPTIONS PLZZZ THEN FORGIVE Me Thanks anusha for help...
COMING TO THIS PART...

third person POV...

5 YEARS HAD BEEN PASSED IN THEIR LIFE. One life is destroyed and other life is touching new success. one is regretting about decision taken 5 years ago but other is happy about decision taken 5 year ago. 5 years are not easy for both of them. specially girl like swara. Society only blame only girls for divorce not man...

SWARA POV...

i am again at coffee shop. but this time for some case, this is same place which had change my life. Yet i don't able to know my answer " does my decision was right". truly saying now i don't want to know answer of this question. But i know answer of my other question , what is my best decision. my best decision was divorce. yes divorce from sanskar maheswari is best decision of my life. in starting this not seems to good.due toit i had lost my family. My mom leave me alone in this world, my dadi made me leave my house...

MY JOURNEY AFTER DIVORCE...

i am still standing at court thinking about my unanswered question. I am totally unknown to what future has store for me. I began to walk , i canfeel people gaze they are seeing me with disgust intheir eyes like they gonna to kill me. but it does notmatter until my mom is with me.

somehow i reached home. but in front scenario shake me from inside. somehow i managed to speak WHAT IS THIS ? one 50 year man is seated there. along him a girl probably 22 year old is seatedmom replied me dadi has called them for my SECOND marriage. Without saying anything i wentinside my room. dadi also come behind me began to emotionally blackmail me." shona it's not easy to live without man. we r only doing this for ur betterment. shona u r only 26 yearold. u have many years to live. someday ur mom die. for whom u will live. if u will marry u get reason for ur living. not only this if u have some man in ur life u will get ur respect back. this society will kill u with their taunts. i know he is little old. his wife died some month ago, now he is finding life partner and mother for his daughter." dadi before i reply something i heard some thud sound. i turn my gaze that side i find my mom is lying on ground. her hand in near her chest. i understand she has heart attack. without delaying i called ambulance, my mom call me beside her. hold my hand and made me sit on ground." shona, i have less time. listen me first i never stopu taking ur decision. this time also u have to take ur own decision. forget all thing this society , ur dadi s words. if u want do marriage do for yourself. not for this society, just remember dear when u r facing all problem. no one come from this so called society to console u. none of them stand with u for justice, u alone fight for justice. again u have to fight but difference is that this time i am not with u. u have alone to fight for ur life. this is ur life , live ur life the way u want. not according to this society. may be physically i am not with u but always in ur heart i am with u. whenever u confuse about ur decision just close ur eyes i will give u answer. now tell me ur decision ." shomii don't know what to answer, my mind is not working. i also don't know when my subconscious mind said no. i reliased what i have said, mom is lying lifelessly but she is smiling.i perform last ritual of mom. dadi tried to stop me by saying last ritual should perform by boy but without without listening anything, i complete all ritual.dadi again come to me to know my decision , this time i answered her all in my senses " no". i don't. it raise her anger she made me leave the house at 10 pm. society people started their taunt . someone said her husband leave her because she is not perfect. some said i have affair.. this are affecting me. only giving strength to fight.i continuing to walk remembering recent moment. idon't where should go, but i close my eyes . " Delhi" it's same place which once destroy me now I going there to made me.

3 days later...

i reached Delhi, nothing is changed here. still crime is happening. as usual police is not doing anything. i began to search job . i went some places for interview. by seeing my qualification all impressed. but when they saw i am divorcee they try to impress me. for sometime i don't understand anything what is they trying to do ? i asked them what u want ? some clearly or some by other way replied me " my body".i felt disgust by their answer i immediately went from there without listening further. again i found my self in darkness. i again close my eyes to know answer , this time due to some sound i opened my eyes. i found my self near court. there some ladies are crying. i went to them to ask what happen. there reply give me shock."my daughter is brutally raped by some drunken, she is not getting justice. the lawyer we hired at nick he back cross us by saying we r defaming those mans" some lady
I found my self in that girl place. i remember my condition , how i after so many struggle. i able to get justice. i decided to fight for her. i have law degree. i toldthem i will fight for ur daughter. she told me she does not have money for my fees. i ensure her i will fight this case in free. now i have motive to live. i will fight for women welfare.this is my journey ...i stared to prepare for my first case while fighting i receive many threats. now i don't have anything to lose. opposite party offer me huge amount. but i don't back off , i continue to fight. at last i won. i provide justice to victim.I fight many cases . some i won , some lose... but justice never loose.now i deiced live without any man i join some company as adviser. in this span of time i achieve many thing. i have my own NGO, companies. i have everything that anyone should have to spend life. i am well known lawyer in Delhi. i also don't know when these five years passed. i am going kolkata for some deal and one case.some people come to receive me these are same people who taunt me and disrespect me . now respecting me and praising me for my success. It's really strange.

I reached coffee shop, i came here to meet someone regarding his divorce case...

precap; swara is shock to see someone

sanky pov till 5 years.

One more part is remaining...

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Edited by Aahana133 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey the part was very nice!! I loved how Swara progressed and become a successful independent lady!!
Please update the next part soon!! Can't wait for it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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i would say this story is unique its awesome update quickly
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Posted: 9 years ago
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there is onething now Sanskar is also used and he himself is atfault but it wont matter bcoz he is a man .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Really like swara progress 👏
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yes..
And u
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Some of u may be confuse well I am aahana. My frnd is anniya is writing her story is telly. When she completed her first part and submitted in telly. As u all know in telly some time is taken to publish stories. She desperately wanted to know views.I give my Id to her update here. So she she can come to know about views. All rply are only given by her. As she knows my password . I hope everyone doubt is now clear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's really good dear No doubt, but if u see either there is both mistake or not. We can't force the relations whether it is before marriage or after marriage. No doubt nobody is perfect same with sanskar in your story, a person always learn from mistakes same goes for sanskar. And if there is no love from sanskar side same happened with swara Becoz she directly advised him for divorce If she wanted they go for trail period or take some time for their marriage but not divorce easy step to get rid of things. Everything need paitence. Some we take decision morally ethically by thinking alot but can't withstand on it same goes with sanskar in that. Just the thing is he thought swara as his responsibility but love need patience and time and it's every marriage doesn't need have love it occurs with the passes of time. And the swara gave answer in last after 5 his marriage proposal is same then what a difference in swara and sanskar. But yaa she has the right to deny him but this is also right that sanskar has always given her 'RESPECT'. And it's easy to say dear we can live life alone but in actually it's always difficult. It's only my survey says.
Its just mine opinion nothing more srry if I hurt anybody.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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U know why I liked ur story so much bcoz swara was not like an abla nari okay my husband is cheating on me have a mistress outside it is like kings in past dont they used to have many wives it was far worse so minimum i am the only wife here . I cannt give hi what he wants so he has the right to enjoy i am having problems and bearing his child so what?
he is giving me respect . Most importantly respect comes when u give dignity and dont cheat on her. adding surname doesnt mean respect even giving wify rights wont mean respect if he is cheating on her. u know what does parents say to a daughter it will change after sometime when we will have a baby after sometime he will get old his sexuality will die down he will start living with you. just give some more time. men will learn from mistakes no one is .God even God does mistakes. only for female virginity matters but for boys nothing matters. it is just a fault. forgive him ,give him some time he has kept me a wife though he enjoys in the end i will die as his wife . It is the right of husband he could keep a second home. when even swara has nt done any mistake then also she is at fault.
Lastly, If Swara did the same she started sleeping with another man will Sanskar give her some time and say i will forgive you for everything. Just come back to me .


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Originally posted by: aamias

U know why I liked ur story so much bcoz swara was not like an abla nari okay my husband is cheating on me have a mistress outside it is like kings in past dont they used to have many wives it was far worse so minimum i am the only wife here . I cannt give hi what he wants so he has the right to enjoy i am having problems and bearing his child so what?

he is giving me respect . Most importantly respect comes when u give dignity and dont cheat on her. adding surname doesnt mean respect even giving wify rights wont mean respect if he is cheating on her. u know what does parents say to a daughter it will change after sometime when we will have a baby after sometime he will get old his sexuality will die down he will start living with you. just give some more time. men will learn from mistakes no one is .God even God does mistakes. only for female virginity matters but for boys nothing matters. it is just a fault. forgive him ,give him some time he has kept me a wife though he enjoys in the end i will die as his wife . It is the right of husband he could keep a second home. when even swara has nt done any mistake then also she is at fault.
Lastly, If Swara did the same she started sleeping with another man will Sanskar give her some time and say i will forgive you for everything. Just come back to me .



I can understand only due to this thoughts i made them divorce. No chances for sanskar. Really happy knowing ur thought are same. I don't think so any women able trust that man again. So ...

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