SwaSan TS: Learning to trust him again (Final part on pg1 /28 -07- 16) - Page 5

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Cute OS opps TS Nita... Sahilll... kill him...

Originally posted by: sahakinju

Awesome update.
Kashh real me bhi esha ho hota
But thank you tumare vaja se ye read karne to mil hi jayega.
Love your work.

Originally posted by: showrav24

It is beautiful nita dear👏

u handle the situation much better than our stupid cvs

we don't have problem with long update😉 we want more & more long update from writer like u

update soon dear

Originally posted by: Aahana133

Awsm part...
Tnx 4 pm...

Originally posted by: anu012

Fantastic dear
loved it
beautifully written
update soon

plz do pm me

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

This is great going..

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Nita jaan...

This TS was remarkably conceptulized...dialogues were fantabulous...it was like detective solving a puzzling mystery...bravo..Thanks Talia dearest..😳..I am really happy to know you liked it 😊..You praises make me feel super happy 😉..

I loved bussiness man sansku here..not as his character was buthchered in seriel...sansku smart..calculative who plan his moves cleverly..loved how he planned his convo..his plan was risky..but it worth risk when his life us at stake...Yeah you know how much i want Smart Sanskar in the show..So had to bring him in this TS..Yeah it was a big risk 😉

Swara though i dont like her much in memory loss track..she did not listen to anyone..soo many people cant be wrong..but i loved the fsct when she eavesdrop dadi n maa convo..n later sansku n maa convo..it was beautifull..delighted...im soo happy...she listened him..n the outcome was fab..though sahil annoyed so much..but its oky...enjoyed her in turmoil but not my sansku baby...Yeah even i was disappointed with Swara in ML that why i made her listen to people here 😉,and Sahil well i had to keep him to annoy you ..And i am sure he will annoy you more in the next update..😆

Overall brilliant..

Waiting for next part..Thanks Talia dearest🤗..Currently working on it ..Will post it asap

Love..muahhh

Talia

With lots of Love

Nita

Originally posted by: aditi07

wowww... superb story.. what a take on how it could/should have ended👏👏👏

So wished CVs had taken some emotional, realistic and less dramatic way like this than what they did!! Amazingly conceptualized and written.. it so well portrays the depth of love they hv for each other and recaptures the magic of Swasan..

Pls update further soon... loved it and kindly add me to ur PM list 😃

Originally posted by: Anusha62

Nice nita loved it:)

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

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