SwaSan TS: Learning to trust him again (Final part on pg1 /28 -07- 16) - Page 6

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

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Superb update
I wish same think happen in the show so it will be superb na 😉 ..Thanks Sujoy. Really happy to know you liked it enough to wish it happens in the show as well.Sorry for the late reply😊

Swara and her confusion 😕 but dadi talks made me laugh 🤣
"What with this divorce topic again, i have only two granddaughter and how many more marriage do i need to see in my old age.. Remember last time when she came back home separated from him.. She didnt eat ,drink nor sleep..She was acting like someone who lost the will to live and that will happen if the divorce happens again and her memory comes back"
@bold Dadi future planning if swara takes divorce whenever she gain her memory back then she will again marry him. So dadi in this have to see another marriage Superb planning dadi 🤣..Dadi wont mind another ragini marriage😉.. But looks like she was right on money..See we are getting another almost marriage for Swara😆..But Dadi knows her grand daughter..Ofcoure she will marry him once again when her memory returns😆..

Shomi and sanskar scene was awesome and the way sanskar supporting swara till now was lovely 😳 and again jahil irritating 😡 but when sanskar signed the divorce paper i was like 😭 why he is doing this 😭 but now i understood that was master planning by sanskar 👏 ..Really happy to know you liked that part 😃..And yes Sanskar is risking it for Swara trust and sorry Sahil annoyed me the show..So i had to make him annoy you in the TS as well😆

And swasan scene was mind blowing finally swara started trusting sanskar ..I want Swara to start trusting him before her memory comes back 😉, and so yeah she started trusting him 😊..

Beautifully written 👏
Loved it
Update soon
Thanks for pm...Thanks once again Sujoy for your lovely comment.. Updated the second Chapter..Saw your first res as well 😃.. So cant wait to know your take on it..As i think it might not be upto the mark ..

Originally posted by: sarra0

Loved the second update...as much as i loved the jungle scene and the hut and the little conversation v had in the show was spot on but u know extensively my views on wat was lacking...more communication...more words..more explanation and the whole track was such a bad showing for not only swara brain and character but also the family bond with not only shomi and swara but also sanskaar and goddodia who treated sahil as one of their own and sanskaar as a stranger...

Where they failed u more than made up for...showin a swara while still doubtful actually willing to listen 2reason, actually wanting answers, actually askin questions and consider information...a shomi who was concerned about her son and actually treated and recognised his importance...shomi who is also a concerned mother for swara and on swara initiating some conversation shomi told her 2 listen and go with an open mind...

Loved sanky besting sahil...for now 😆😆😆...but still never the less a win is a win...having multiple lawyers read the divorce papers not allowing sahil in havin logical arguments and proof such as police report ...rememberin all 3marriages and makin me remember thou i only like 2 remember 2 😆😆 ...aw the video diary continuing...that is so sweet an addition...swara sanskaar define love, the depths they can go to 4each other barely been seen so it was great to c her acknowledge that there may b something 2wat they r all saying that without him she wud b walkin dead 😉

Sanky leap of faith and devotion signing the divorce papers to get her to trust him...Y do i think sahil cud try somethin with the signed divorce papers?? But u r not the cvs...u r better 😉

one of my fave sentences wen sanky tells swara shes been to jail more time than he has..i so wanted that wen they had the stupid dialogue in the show...someone 2open her eyes to some facts inc the arrest records after all v know how steller the sr police r in their jobs and i got some here 🥳

Also no rags means me jumpin with joy 😈

Looking 4ward to reading the next part...

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

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