SwaSan TS: Learning to trust him again (Final part on pg1 /28 -07- 16)

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Anamika sharma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Fantastic dear
loved it
beautifully written
update soon

plz do pm me

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: mita2233
Very nice prologue...
Waiting for next part...😊

Thanks dearest.. Really happy to know you liked the prologue.. Posted chapter one.. Read it when you get time and chapter two might take some time as I am bit busy but will try to post it ASAP. Mm

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Nita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: blindassassin
Nita
A true writer can never quit even for a while, that's what you proved. I thought you will be in exile for a while but you are back with a bang. Don't restrict it to a OS Nita, you are very good at developing plots to long fiction.
About the prologue,you left us on a suspense, a real cliff hanger. Please update it soon. Our Sanskar never quits till he wins!!!!
Love, veena.

Hi Veena dearest, 🤗

True writer 😳.. Nah I thought of myself as one time writer.. But all the lovely comments from wonderful friends like you made me dare to write one more time 😊.. Well you are getting your wish.. This will be minimum three shots.. It was supposed to be OS.. But nope as you said I kind of can't seem to keep it short.. 😆 .. But currently busy schedule.. Posted the first part.. Will post the second chapter ASAP.. Thanks for your lovely comment that motivated me a lot in this new attempt..

With lots of love

Nita

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Nita jaan...

This TS was remarkably conceptulized...dialogues were fantabulous...it was like detective solving a puzzling mystery...bravo

I loved bussiness man sansku here..not as his character was buthchered in seriel...sansku smart..calculative who plan his moves cleverly..loved how he planned his convo..his plan was risky..but it worth risk when his life us at stake...

Swara though i dont like her much in memory loss track..she did not listen to anyone..soo many people cant be wrong..but i loved the fsct when she eavesdrop dadi n maa convo..n later sansku n maa convo..it was beautifull..delighted...im soo happy...she listened him..n the outcome was fab..though sahil annoyed so much..but its oky...enjoyed her in turmoil but not my sansku baby...

Overall brilliant..

Waiting for next part..

Love..muahhh

Talia

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Kaveetha
Wow nita akka... Very interesting prologue.
As usual sahil is irritating. 😡
Oh no sanskaar is ready to give the divorce.😲 But what is sanskaar's condition?
Exited to read further. 😛
Update soon.
I'll read after the exams..

Thanks kaveetha dearest.. Really happy to know you found it interesting 😳.. I know you have exams. Starting from today right.. All the best dear.. It might take some time for me to update all the parts.. So you can read it all together once you exams is over..

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Nita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: sneharay
Superb Update.. 👏

Thanks Sneha dearest ..Really happy to know you liked it😃

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Nita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: mita2233
Thanks for the amazing update...👍🏼
Waiting for the next...😊

Thanks dearest 🤗, Really happy to know you liked the update😊..Currently lot busy with work..So it might take some time before the next update..Will try to post asap ..

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Nita

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aditi07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

wowww... superb story.. what a take on how it could/should have ended👏👏👏

So wished CVs had taken some emotional, realistic and less dramatic way like this than what they did!! Amazingly conceptualized and written.. it so well portrays the depth of love they hv for each other and recaptures the magic of Swasan..

Pls update further soon... loved it and kindly add me to ur PM list 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: -CRJ-
Amazing update. Update soon please 😃

Thanks .. Really happy to know you liked the update😊.. Currently bit busy so delay on the next update.. Will try to update ASAP.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408
Its jst WOW nita.
Amaizing.the bond btw shomi & sanskar,family's suport,a open convo of swasan evrythng we wntd in serial u wrote it perfectly.
Love it.updt soon

Thanks dearest.. Really happy to know you liked it.. 😃.. I am addict from open convo and it was the unique aspect of swasan clearing MU by just talking made me fall in love them more.. So wanted to solve it by that means.. Still busy at work this week.. Tired.. So writing the next update is taking longer than I thought.. Sorry about that.. Will try to update ASAP

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Nita

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