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@__nidhi__

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Posted: 8 years ago

#151

Res.

I'll take aome time to unres it!

But will surely do:)

Sorry.

Unres.

Should I say was confused when I read the first chapter?😕😆

But they way you wrote all the instances is amazing.

I am in love the way you wrote out your stories.

Second chapter cleared my confusion thoda thoda😆 (I am a confused soul so it doesn't matter😕😳). swara here is strong which I always wanted to see or show but that didn't happen. The dynamics between SwaSan is something I very much liked. an amazing concept, an amazing writer I am pretty sure the story will reach some heights.

I'll say sorry in advance because I will not be able to comment on every other chapter to my work and studies. but I'll make sure I will take out some time and comment and my like button isn't working😭

Update soon.

Thanks for the pm.

Love,

Nidhi.

Edited by __nidhi__ - 8 years ago

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showrav

@showrav24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#152

Hello nyna dear sorry for my late reply
like prologue
like swara know fighting skill
swara not remember anything or everything is mysterious for her but sanskar touches r familiar interesting.
waiting for story unfolds.

just now read ch 1 & it's totally confusing & mysterious
see u update ch 2 hope u clear some mystery in this.
I know I feel bore when I m unable to connect or solve the dots that's happen in chapter 1 I know this is the start of the story if u reavele secrets then how story will progress. eagerly waiting for swasan story start.
the girl that women left out that payer house & the girl call a women dida & who learned self defence is swara.
I mention few birth dates in ch 1 which & where I blender the equation between those girls.
Will reply soon my take on ch 2 dear.
Take care
Bye.

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum
Nynu 🤗🤗🤗

Just about to crash now. I will greedily read this chappie tomorrow----and shall un res for both 1 & 2 within next few days. Pakka within the early part of the week.

I hope I can sleep and resist the temptation to read right now. Am half asleep already, want to read when I am fully alert. You lay in too much nuance and 'reading between the lines' subtext of meaning, for me to risk reading in a semi somnolent state. 😊

Lots of Love & Hugs 🤗🤗

---Viji

Dear Viji, Good Morning,🤗🤗

Actually not reading in a sleepy mode is good idea - I am not sure of the nuances but it appears to be a little confusing, even though the structure is quite a linear narrative. Chapter 1 only has dates and places, Chapter 2 does a complete character introduction, so you would have to link both 😉

Take your time, I will wait.

Have a great monday and a great week too.

love,

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 8 years ago

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: StarySKY

Really .. ?! 😆
Then I think I should read it tomorrow ..
As now I am feeling exhausted and a little drowsy ..
And I am sure I will not understand anything ..
I was writing since afternoon till now - with rests for meals and prayers - my mind kept changing between 4 stories and now I am tired ..

Will be back once I read it ..
Bye as now I am hitting the bed ..

Love
Khushi

Yes, read it when you think you can take the confusion regarding people with no names. And you mentioned four stories - will we have them all?

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: kojagorimalik
loved the chappy...everything was explained in so much details and so beautifully I could actually visualize mihir bhavan and their emotions...cavity has disappeared ( I thnk she is positive but yet loe to call her cavity )...all in all superb ...one small question is swara and swaha different???? I got confused there... 👏 👏 claps for the chapter...
love
moumita

Dear Moumita,

Such a relief reading that you could visualise the houses - I was a little afraid that I gave too much of details but then houses / homes are a reflection of the persons so I left them in.

Kavita has disappeared and that is worrying all the four families - (and I agree that it is difficult for most readers to think of her as anyone else but Cavity - the CVs did a great job of butchering that character, as they did with everyone else) and she is a very positive person here.

Swaha and Swara - well maybe I should not answer, but then that is not the suspense, yes one and the same person - how the transformation takes place, intentional or accidental, next two chapters will reveal.

And I am thrilled to know that you loved the Chapter 😳😳😳

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: __nidhi__
Res.
I'll take aome time to unres it!
But will surely do:)
Sorry.

Dear Nidhi,

Take your time, and no apologies for that.

Best,

Nyna

PS any plans to update your FFs soon?

Edited by Nynaeve - 8 years ago

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: showrav24
Hello nyna dear sorry for my late reply
like prologue
like swara know fighting skill
swara not remember anything or everything is mysterious for her but sanskar touches r familiar interesting.
waiting for story unfolds.

just now read ch 1 & it's totally confusing & mysterious
see u update ch 2 hope u clear some mystery in this.
I know I feel bore when I m unable to connect or solve the dots that's happen in chapter 1 I know this is the start of the story if u reavele secrets then how story will progress. eagerly waiting for swasan story start.
the girl that women left out that payer house & the girl call a women dida & who learned self defence is swara.
I mention few birth dates in ch 1 which & where I blender the equation between those girls.
Will reply soon my take on ch 2 dear.
Take care
Bye.

Dear Showrav,

Swara is a fighter indeed, here she is one both physically and mentally. She is suffering from amnesia and once the chapters unfold, you would get hints as to what caused it and why she is not comfortable with being touched (Chapter 1 gives hints to this, as you rightly guessed the abandoned girl is Swara and not having a normal loving childhood does create an intimacy disorder where the children grow into adults who fear physical intimacy.)And her being comfortable with Sanskaar - could be the soul connect?

Chapter 1 - well my attempt at suspense and mystery seems to have caused confusion, but hopefully once you read Chapter 2 you would be able to link the dots😊 most of the characters in Chapter 1 will get their names and identities in chapter 2 except for a couple who will not be named (if I can get away with it, might not even be guessed till the end😆😆).

Chapter 4 partly and Chapter 5 onwards will only be SwaSan and their conflicts, I will relegate the revenge and investigations to the background.

Looking forward to your take on Chapter 2. Take care.

love,

Nyna

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@__nidhi__

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Nidhi,

Take your time, and no apologies for that.

Best,
Nyna

PS any plans to update your FFs soon?

Unreserved.

I am planning to update in the next two days some editing is left and i can complain about how lazy I am to open the laptop😆 but assuring the chapter of both the FFs will be updated in the next two days.

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blindassassin

@blindassassin

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#159

Nyna

Happy that I din vote for the universal verdict of Ragini being the princess.Lovely unfolding of the events of chapter 1. But a doubt..Do Sanskar genuinely miss Kavitha or is it just a humanitarian gesture for a friend or aquaintance? I hope it is the latter...I hated the portrayal of the character in the serial and still can't let it go.

And a name change...Some intention behind swara being swaha? Everything about this is intriguing and gripping. And Annapurna is another character I love to hate. A mother who can't think beyond her sons. And surprisingly her husband never feel it that way for sanskar.

I am sure this will get more interesting a s secrets unfold. Waiting for regular updates.

Love you and your stories

Veena.

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Sneha Ray

@sneharay

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#160

Nice update...
Ragini is not princess,kavita is.
The guy whose drinks are spiked is adarsh not Sanskaar.
Interesting
Waiting for Swasan first meet and remain mystery to unfold
Update soon and thanks for pm
😊

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