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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: NitaReid

You say twist in the .1 percent i guessed.. Why cant i solve the mystery 😭... Never Mind i will just continue to be shocked 😲..It not new for me ,given my experience with Vajra😉...

Dear Nita,

The twist is actually not a twist, so do not worry at all - a couple of them did get it so I can give you a hint, no wait read Chapter 2, that will give you an idea. 😈

And I am so happy you are going to write an SS - we really need all the stories we can get. I think I am going to dust out the unfinished TS where Sanskaar moves on and Swara does not even realise what she has lost, so engrossed she is in setting everyone's lives right

But then, I love the Swara we create in our stories, so maybe I will not.😕

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#142

Well, I have finally got around to updating the footnotes and references for Chapter 1, (Page 2 Post 7) such a relief for the FnR obsessed me.😆

Working on Chapter 2, almost done, but will post once I finish collating the FnR, still should be done over the weekend.😊

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#143

My dear readers,

I have updated Chapter 2 on Page 2 Post 3. Do read and let me know your views.

I plan to take a temporary hiatus (which means I shall spend a couple of hours lesser in the forum) as I would be busy with my Christmas crochet project. 😊

But please do let me know your views, your comments are what keep me going.

love,

Nyna

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StarySKY

@StarySKY

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Posted: 8 years ago

#144

Res darling ..

I am yet to read the prologue and the 2 chapters ..

Will be back soon ..

Un-Res

Dear Nynu .. 🤗

I must thank you .. reading this story did alot to me .. it removed all the negative energy I got from my day ..

I totally understand why Garfield said " I Hate Mondays " ..

So let's not talk about my Monday ..🤢🤢

The Prologue ..

" Answers Not Available " .. but I have alot of questions ..

It give us a look on Swara and Sanskar ..

Swara

" The Light and fireworks had only served to enhance the darkness that inhabited her mind .. "

She lost her memories and don't know who is she ..

Her Capabilities are quite scary ..

Sanskar met her 8 months ago .. and there was a tragedy in his family ..

What the connection between Swara and Sanskar ?! The type of realtions they share ?

Chapter 1

Suspense ..

I couldn't understand much .. I felt like I was running a marathon , my mind was panting and searching for information ..

I imagined everyone as shadows as I am not sure who they are .. 😆

There were a mention for 4 girls born in years between 1990-1995 ..

But then they were 3 girls .. at age 10

The one whom her mother left her at the temple and Dida took care of , then that man and the woman took care of .. he send her to be trained, I have a feeling he send her there to be used for his revenge later on .. I think she is Swara .. ( it give me the feeling of " Bourne series " .. well the person who had be trained then lost his memories )

The other 2 girls not sure who they are .. but we can see how different their life is .. the first her father didn't want a girl .. and the second was the princess of her family ..

Sanskar ..

An architect .. his sister and his brother and there is his friend ..

There is alot of person and I am not sure who they are or the connection between them ..

Chapter 2

Introduction for the Maheshwari's , Gadodia's , Roy's and Shah's

All are connected with each other .. and all are affected by Kavita Roy disappearance ..

I think Sharmishta, Shekhar and Kavari the 4th of their group was Janaki and some how are involved in her death ..

I think Swaha is Swara ( beautiful name by the way )

But who is Swaha's Father ?!

Waiting for story to un fold ..

Love

Khushi

Edited by StarySKY - 8 years ago

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: StarySKY
Res darling ..
I am yet to read the prologue and the 2 chapters ..
Will be back soon ..

Dear Khushi,

Take your time - in a way it is better - you would not face the confusion I wrote in😉 (Chapter 1 has dates and places - quite precise but no names 😆) My attempt at creating suspense😕

love,

Nyna

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Anahita_Leve

@Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#146

Sorry Nyna dear!

Got very much late to unres! After office straight went to hang out with my ex- medical school friends... Now only I got time to analyze my another friend's great chapter. I would have done it yesterday, but got a bad headache. I thought your FF deserve an review from coherent mind.

I think I somehow misread your chapter 1 first time, that's why did a stupid comment to mention Lucky as rebel... Mentioning everyone in third person did the trick on my mind I guess... actually I thought Sanky was the one who had some revenge agenda too. On 2nd read I got, Lucky can't be a responsible rebel, he has rather a weaker character...

Swaha is Swara right?"Swaha" meaning something like the ultimate ending, is very appropriate too. I think she will change her name to take revenge. I absolutely loathe Shekhar here.He with his friends ruined and betrayed Janki. If I guess her having baby out of wedlock, she was either cheated or tainted..then been thrown away like tissue paper.

The Maheswari seniors are crooked and indirectly caused bloodbath through Shekhar. Also the DILs are treated like trash.So Karma will bite them eventally.
Sanska will have bear the brunt too, due to his lineage. Black Bob ( Swaha/ Swara I guess) had fooled Adarsh, that's why he is considered incapable to be the heir?

Sanskar's integrity is praiseworthy, pure soul just like his name. Also the determination to his own career and archi farm add to his uniqueness . The name "Realty check" is kind of symbolic with the storyline, 'cause everyone will get reality check once the revenge game starts. It's pity a pure honest person will be drawn in the mud slinging soon.

Swaha's conscience will make her to save Kavita, I think. But I don't entertain the idea, as I'm irritated cos she's engaged to Sanskar. .

Longest review I've ever written! There! Hope you'll not punish me.. 😊

Sincerely,
Dyuti

Edited by iamreader - 8 years ago

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: iamreader
Res

Dyuti - 🤗 waiting for your verdict😳

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#148

Nynu 🤗🤗🤗

Just about to crash now. I will greedily read this chappie tomorrow----and shall un res for both 1 & 2 within next few days. Pakka within the early part of the week.

I hope I can sleep and resist the temptation to read right now. Am half asleep already, want to read when I am fully alert. You lay in too much nuance and 'reading between the lines' subtext of meaning, for me to risk reading in a semi somnolent state. 😊

Lots of Love & Hugs 🤗🤗

---Viji

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StarySKY

@StarySKY

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Posted: 8 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Khushi,

Take your time - in a way it is better - you would not face the confusion I wrote in😉 (Chapter 1 has dates and places - quite precise but no names 😆) My attempt at creating suspense😕

love,
Nyna

Really .. ?! 😆

Then I think I should read it tomorrow ..

As now I am feeling exhausted and a little drowsy ..

And I am sure I will not understand anything ..

I was writing since afternoon till now - with rests for meals and prayers - my mind kept changing between 4 stories and now I am tired ..

Will be back once I read it ..

Bye as now I am hitting the bed ..

Love

Khushi

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kojagorimalik

@kojagorimalik

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#150

loved the chappy...everything was explained in so much details and so beautifully I could actually visualize mihir bhavan and their emotions...cavity has disappeared ( I thnk she is positive but yet loe to call her cavity )...all in all superb ...one small question is swara and swaha different???? I got confused there... 👏 👏 claps for the chapter...
love
moumita

Edited by kojagorimalik - 8 years ago

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