SwaSan OS: Finding Our Way Back Into Love - Page 5

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shruti..(haina?)
this was beautiful...really very beautiful...I really wish we see in future some conversation concerned with Sanskar between swara nd kissan..
how amazingly kissan without feeling angry or anything calmly reasoned her nd guided her towards his love...well that is Sanskar for U...he is patient with none but when it's swara, he is more patient than mother earth...
I loved loved the climax...kuch yaad naa hote hue bi use Sanskar ki baatein yaad hai...
wonderful piece dear...
:)
-akanksha

Originally posted by: ..NightDragon..

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Lanny.. 🤗
Another piece of brilliance from you. With simplest words you write such beautiful shots; once again this one is a heart touching OS with a little treat of humor folded in.
Loved the characterization of Kissan here. You have done brilliant job with it. This is how we want Kissan to be; like a guiding light in the dark maze that Swara's mind and life has become. A true friend that Swara need very much in her life to protect her from herself and that scum. The dialogues you have written are so poignant and heart touching. especially, the one where Kissan made her question why she only remembered Sanskaar. It so perfect. 👏👏👏 And the end... or should I say a new beginning; one thing I love most about your stories that they never end, they always take you to the new beginning.😳😳 Dosti mein... No sorry No thank you ... Yaad hai Swara ko.. 😳 She remembers one the most essential part of their bond.. It made me smile like silly..Like I said its perfect. Biggest hug for writing this sis. You're awesome. And song, again one perfect choice. The lyrics are like just written for SwaSan's current situation. 😉

Will be waiting for more of your work...

With loads of Love,
Nitzy 😳

Originally posted by: Apudeep

Beautiful OS 😊

Originally posted by: raaz19

Beautiful no words can describe how magical this convalescent was be teether two...

Loved the strong and logical sanskaar that you have show...best line of the o's has to be the swans an rule of friendship. ..magical...

Thanks for sharing

Raz

Originally posted by: SizzleDazzle

Beautiful & intense😳...comedy,angst,romance& friendship-all in one...loved it❤️

Originally posted by: dreamy.tiara

My name is Tia 😊.. And you are Shruti..right?

I actually want to see such scenes in the show, where Kissan would bridge the gap between Swara and Sanskar. I also think that she will fall only for Sanskar and not Kissan when the gap vanishes, because she knows Sanskar is her husband and sindoor has a lot of importance for Swara; of course the cosmic connection.

Well, if things progress like the way it did in this OS, then reverse psychology will start working in no time 😆..

Originally posted by: MusicAddict

Lanny🤗
I loved the OS, but abhi hands paining, isliye will comment tomorrow!!
Wait for me!!
BBye!

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Hey Lanny🤗 This was such a bhery bhery bhery beautiful OS!!
Kissan is so amazing?? The entire OS had such SwaSan feels! The way Kissan speaks Sanskaar's feelings, makes her realise where she is going wrong and then the chocolate! I just loved it, I had a wistful smile on my face all the time!!
Dosti main no sorry no thank you!!~ Just loved it in the end!!
Perfect OS!!
Love ya
Sakshi!!

Originally posted by: ssroomani

Lovely Shruti! ❤️ As I have said before, I wish you were on the creative team of SR!

That song suits SwaSan so well, it is made for them! 😊

Lanny...😊