SwaSan OS: Finding Our Way Back Into Love - Page 2

Unreserving

Lanny.. 🤗
Another piece of brilliance from you. With simplest words you write such beautiful shots; once again this one is a heart touching OS with a little treat of humor folded in.
Loved the characterization of Kissan here. You have done brilliant job with it. This is how we want Kissan to be; like a guiding light in the dark maze that Swara's mind and life has become. A true friend that Swara need very much in her life to protect her from herself and that scum. The dialogues you have written are so poignant and heart touching. especially, the one where Kissan made her question why she only remembered Sanskaar. It so perfect. 👏👏👏 And the end... or should I say a new beginning; one thing I love most about your stories that they never end, they always take you to the new beginning.😳😳 Dosti mein... No sorry No thank you ... Yaad hai Swara ko.. 😳 She remembers one the most essential part of their bond.. It made me smile like silly..Like I said its perfect. Biggest hug for writing this sis. You're awesome. And song, again one perfect choice. The lyrics are like just written for SwaSan's current situation. 😉

Will be waiting for more of your work...

With loads of Love,
Nitzy 😳

Here you I basically can't understand hindi when it combined and framed a sentence of more than one line.. Sometime I need to ask for translation for every little thing in english. Yet when I saw you posted OS in hindi.. I had to try and read it.. I only understood half of it due to my awesome language barrier but still I totally loved it.. I am not someone who wants and waits for kissan entry.. I just want it all to be Sanskaar Maheshwari but if kissan acted like the way you described him in your OS.. I am all up for it.. Thanks dear.. For writing such an awesome OS that make my hope rise up again about this track.

Awesome os...

Aaaw. Kissan is so cute

Originally posted by: sam.

This is awesome Lanny 🤗hope the CVS for a change use their brain and give us a track along these lines, kissan should be like her conscience nudging her along to the right direction!

Originally posted by: dreamy.tiara

Brilliant 😊 😊... Humor, emotions and little bit of romance in all right combinations. I loved how Kissan recreated Sanskar by his little actions - like tissue, chocolate and the 'dosti mein..' line - but all in a new avatar. It was hilarious when he called himself a ghochu and bhondu 😆 I literally ROFLed at 'kya yahi hai apke Sanskar?' [ROFL] My mind was saying, absolutely Swara, that is your Sanskar..behind the hideous rockstar cover :).. Loved how he was convincing her. I am speechless how much he loves her ❤️
Do write more 😊

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

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Lanny *hugs* (typing from phone so not best with emos!)

This was such a great way to start my day. As with all of of your writing, this is a perfect blend of balanced and yet effective humour but also full of some very real and poignant feelings. Kudos for that as its so easy as a writer to overdone one or the other but you never do.

I so enjoyed reading this! I've already told you so sorry for repeating but here goes! I found this Kissan so very endearing and exactly how I would want him to be on the show. He's still Sanskaar underneath that terrible wig and the hilariously garish get up. He understands Swara and as she's not screaming khooni at him irrationally he can achieve wonders. In the show too I so so want to see Kissan play that bridging gap in making Swara clear that awful confusion in her head which is causing her to make the terrible mistakes she is and will continue to by keeping Sanskaar at bay. I know you penned the very effective dialogues in Hindi but they had that rustic feel just right and I could so hear Kissan saying them. Overall the whole interaction made me smile but also brought out the sadness of their situation and also showed yet again how amazing a man Sanskaar is, regadless of what guise he dons. There were so many lovely feels here, and it was pitched perfectly as it was still about SwaSan and Sanskaar despite being about Kissan, which I hope makes sense!

Oh small point but I loved that flare of anger about Sahil that Kissan had! So want to see Sanskaar/ Kissan really resolute and making sure Mr third wheel psycho is put firmly in his box- grrr!

Those lyrics are perfect as I told you already and in the present situation a perfect fit for the conundrum that is SwaSan's tangled relationship- lovely! The whole thing was as sweet as that chocolate meaningfully shared at the end and the whole subtle reminder to their "no sorry no thank you" rule.

Lots of love,

Shru X

Originally posted by: flora212

This is sho sho sho beautiful! i was getting swasan feels throughout 😆

Originally posted by: Helee

aww so sweet... how I wish that our CVS will show something like this...! tissues , chocolates and friendship rule...yaad hai usee...just perfect.😳 loved it.!