SwaSan OS: Finding Our Way Back Into Love - Page 4

Originally posted by: ...Penknife...

Aaaw. Kissan is so cute

I just love how he tries to make her remember all those little things, how he loves her so much that he is ready to lose himself if that means being close to her.

Such love ayehaye🤪

And swara 😆 she doesn't even understand her need to seek him out. And him handing her those tissues, reminded me of the good old SwaSan days

I love how she seeks his presence. Their cosmic connection is amazing.

Even though she doesn't have any memories of him his is the only face she remembers while at the face of death. Absolutely beautiful how you wrote that part of their conversation. I found it so touching and sweet.

But that last line just killed me. Gash ki usse yaad hota 🥺

Amazing work!!

And thank you so much for sending me a pm.🤗

Love

Nandini

PS: are you planning on continuing this by any chance?

I'd love to see how she is finally convinced of Sanskars innocence and remembered their love.

Originally posted by: Geethu_sweetie

So beautiful..I loved every dialogue of Kissan..😃

Lanny🤗
I loved the OS, but abhi hands paining, isliye will comment tomorrow!!
Wait for me!!
BBye!

Unres--

Hey Lanny🤗 This was such a bhery bhery bhery beautiful OS!!
Kissan is so amazing?? The entire OS had such SwaSan feels! The way Kissan speaks Sanskaar's feelings, makes her realise where she is going wrong and then the chocolate! I just loved it, I had a wistful smile on my face all the time!!
Dosti main no sorry no thank you!!~ Just loved it in the end!!
Perfect OS!!
Love ya
Sakshi!!

Shruti...🤗

Wow!its so beautiful..
Yes yes wnt ths,kissan guide her 2wds sanskar's love..
I love tht whn kissan said its strange tht swara 4gt shekhar ragini bt nt sanskar,ho sakta ha wo akhri dhaga ho jo apko zindagi se jorke rakha ho-ths z so beautiful.
Awsm written.lv it.

Originally posted by: medhasankar

Shruti...🤗

I don't know why I decided to visit the forum today...but I peeped in and I had a message from you waiting.

I have absolutely no idea what the OS was all about..I'm totally out of touch with the current scenario on SR😕.

But needless to say I liked the writing a lot. A bunch of lots rather😳

You have put in a lot of dialogues in regular hindi and managed never to let the feelings cloud the bare bones. Somehow its difficult to do in Hindi than english.

I hope you are happy and well.

Cheers...👍🏼

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Medha.

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

Wow!its so beautiful..
Yes yes wnt ths,kissan guide her 2wds sanskar's love..
I love tht whn kissan said its strange tht swara 4gt shekhar ragini bt nt sanskar,ho sakta ha wo akhri dhaga ho jo apko zindagi se jorke rakha ho-ths z so beautiful.
Awsm written.lv it.

Beautiful no words can describe how magical this convalescent was be teether two...

Beautiful & intense😳...comedy,angst,romance& friendship-all in one...loved it❤️

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

Thanks! What is your name?

His love truly knows no bounds & he will do absolutely anything for her.

Ya the poor thing is calling himself names hoping for reverse psychology to work maybe😆

My name is Tia 😊.. And you are Shruti..right?

I actually want to see such scenes in the show, where Kissan would bridge the gap between Swara and Sanskar. I also think that she will fall only for Sanskar and not Kissan when the gap vanishes, because she knows Sanskar is her husband and sindoor has a lot of importance for Swara; of course the cosmic connection.

Well, if things progress like the way it did in this OS, then reverse psychology will start working in no time 😆..