Swasan -FF - Fanaa ~ Destroyed In love ~ Epilogue- Pg 85 ( 5th august)

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#861

Originally posted by: Aahana133
Read 17&18 part one go it's amazing I daily keep checking if for your this ff, it's just my fav. Sometimes when I feel I used to read old chap and everytime same emotions...

Hi Aahana

Thanks a lot ..Its good to hear from you and know you wait for fanaa .. and would re read it .. Cant ask for more as writer😊

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#862

Lucky dear...

I have no words...I just cried and cried and cried and cried...first due reading about an immense pain sanky felt and in second half due to sheer happiness seeing swasan together..you were brilliant , with or without words..It touched so deep..swasan feeling u penned made my heartwrenched with pain...i connected to other level with them...if anyone at my house would have witnessed me crying after reading a story...they would have laughed...but I know how involved I was in them...Waiting for more now...

it was brilliant update dear...

Love u..

Talia

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Nishap499

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Posted: 8 years ago

#863

"Haq hai tumhara mujhpe", "issey jyada kar sakta hu...par kam nhi"!! Oh my goodness!! Can I please have him?! This man in every episode set a damn high standard of loving his girl. Sanskar is truly every girl's dream man! And Lucky I must say you write dialogues better than Sharad Tripathi. I have always admired your dialogues. They really make me feel very very good. And this episode as usual no words to say. Mindblowing lucky! Waiting for the next chapter eagerly.

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#864

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Lucky dear...
I have no words...I just cried and cried and cried and cried...first due reading about an immense pain sanky felt and in second half due to sheer happiness seeing swasan together..you were brilliant , with or without words..It touched so deep..swasan feeling u penned made my heartwrenched with pain...i connected to other level with them...if anyone at my house would have witnessed me crying after reading a story...they would have laughed...but I know how involved I was in them...Waiting for more now...
it was brilliant update dear...
Love u..
Talia

Talia🤗🤗

Thanks a lot sweety ..I didn't mean to make you cry 😕.This update was very much emotional for me to pen down to 😭😭... l happy to know that you connected with Swasan at an other level...😳

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Lucky

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#865

Originally posted by: Nishap499
"Haq hai tumhara mujhpe", "issey jyada kar sakta hu...par kam nhi"!! Oh my goodness!! Can I please have him?! This man in every episode set a damn high standard of loving his girl. Sanskar is truly every girl's dream man! And Lucky I must say you write dialogues better than Sharad Tripathi. I have always admired your dialogues. They really make me feel very very good. And this episode as usual no words to say. Mindblowing lucky! Waiting for the next chapter eagerly.

Hi Nisha🤗

We all want Sanskaar ..😆He truly is dream man .. wish someone like him would exist.in real world. and dialogues .. better than sharad .. omg .. thats one of best compliments I have received😳 Sharad may not be happy😆😆

Dialogues .. Yeah I receive quite a few good words for them ..good to hear from you too . You have always been very instrumental with your comments in wattpad for my stories🤗.Its so good to see you here too ...

Next update - I might need sometime but will try to as quick as I can😊 Thanks again

Loads of love

Lucky

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Rumadiv

@Rumadiv

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Posted: 8 years ago

#866

Dear Lucky,

Update of "Fanaa" after a long gap. But the wait is worth. Finally waiting for the actual reason of swara avoiding sanskar. Its sad that Swara is suffering from stomach cancer.

Finally Swara searching for Sanskar and finding in him such state and regretting her decision. Sanskar on seeing Swara relief washes over his face finding his love of life in front of him. At last Swara confessing her love to Sanskar was the best part.

Then next day Swara confessing about her disease and Sanskar going totally blank and not knowing what to do was well described and explained. Swara thinking Sanskar will not come back and Sanskar trying to accept the fact and deciding wat to be done makes us feel emotional.

Then their date which was cute and enjoying themselves and not caring about anything at the present. Swara trying to make this date as memorable before leaving and Sanskar ready to hurt himself by going into the depth of knowing the truth shows how much both love each other.

Now am further waiting how the story will proceed. Whether they will marry??? Wat Sanskar will do with Swara for the remaining days??Will Durgaprasad Maheshwari will accept their relationship ??so many questions and waiting for the answer. Hope you will update soon asap.

With love,

Divya :-)

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#867

Kriti & Divya

Thanks guys ..😛

@ Divya

You will have all your answers in next two updates😊.. and I will try to be faster with updates .I am already working on next chapter. Hopefully in 2 or 3 days I will be posting😊 and happy you could connect to the emotions of protagonists😊

Thanks again

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Lucky

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#868

Hello ALL🤗🤗

Chapter 19 updated ..Pm's on its way . Do read when time permits and let me know your thoughts😛

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Lucky

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AnnieS_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#869

It's just simply amazing you can't believe just for reading 19th part I have to create new account as I lost access of old account ...
Coming to this part it's simply superb all emotions and words were perfect...

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showrav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#870

just loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved it just awesome.
Lucky you are brilliant u know right simplicity and it best.
I can't tell right now how I m feeling u make me overwhelm by your update u know dil main kuch kuch ho ra ha hai.
swasan every single thing became special na like ss pendant almost every stories used this as symbol of their love.
Hospital scenes I can see sanskar emotions & sadness when he saw all patients. After that swasan convo.
& the Tashan between son father duo I just love it typical business man & his son arguments.
I just loved how sanskar said app to sabse bada qualification bhul gaye to dp.
you know you are best in dialogues writing just touch heart.
Loved ap here how sweet she is like how she support sanskar & give back dp.
I knew swara will not let him stay hotel & they shift swara dreams house.
Their emotional talking her manana style to sanskar every bit of swasan scenes I loved it & u know swasan just nailed it chahe woh emotions ho ya romance I feel like every thing is happening infront of my eyes. & swara ke haq jatane wala nature like she said adat dallijiye ab like typical wife wali baat & after that realisation of reality oh kiyu destiny so cruel. now u make me miss them more.
Thanks you buddy for this.
talking about swasan I can continue on an on it will not end so thanks for the update dear.
start feeling sad this beautiful journey will end soon.
Take care buddy
Bye
loads of love love

p.s last update comment on wattpad hope you saw that's why it missing here.

Edited by showrav24 - 8 years ago

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