Swasan -FF - Fanaa ~ Destroyed In love ~ Epilogue- Pg 85 ( 5th august) - Page 88

Lucky dear,

I have become so emotional after reading this story lucky dii this might be one book which makes me emotional and so vulnerable ...
For the whole book I do feel bad for swara and sanskar but the worst I feel for Annapurna ...because being a fierce and protective mother she is helplessly seeing her son breaking piece by piece and she could do nothing to keep him protected and safe

Originally posted by: AnnieS_

It's just simply amazing you can't believe just for reading 19th part I have to create new account as I lost access of old account ...
Coming to this part it's simply superb all emotions and words were perfect...

Originally posted by: showrav24

just loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved it just awesome.
Lucky you are brilliant u know right simplicity and it best.
I can't tell right now how I m feeling u make me overwhelm by your update u know dil main kuch kuch ho ra ha hai.
swasan every single thing became special na like ss pendant almost every stories used this as symbol of their love.
Hospital scenes I can see sanskar emotions & sadness when he saw all patients. After that swasan convo.
& the Tashan between son father duo I just love it typical business man & his son arguments.
I just loved how sanskar said app to sabse bada qualification bhul gaye to dp.
you know you are best in dialogues writing just touch heart.
Loved ap here how sweet she is like how she support sanskar & give back dp.
I knew swara will not let him stay hotel & they shift swara dreams house.
Their emotional talking her manana style to sanskar every bit of swasan scenes I loved it & u know swasan just nailed it chahe woh emotions ho ya romance I feel like every thing is happening infront of my eyes. & swara ke haq jatane wala nature like she said adat dallijiye ab like typical wife wali baat & after that realisation of reality oh kiyu destiny so cruel. now u make me miss them more.
Thanks you buddy for this.
talking about swasan I can continue on an on it will not end so thanks for the update dear.
start feeling sad this beautiful journey will end soon.
Take care buddy
Bye
loads of love love

p.s last update comment on wattpad hope you saw that's why it missing here.

"Yar tum ladkiyan bahut emotional hoti ho..."!! This brought back so many memories😳. Their kiss was a bliss! Lucky plz tell me Swara is not going to die. Plz, Plz!! Sanskar will break down totally and me as well. Seriously Lucky Sad Ending haunts me like a nightmare and this is my one of the most favourite story! I would not be able to handle this. Nevermind the story is yours and I m sure you gonna give it the best ending! Hope to read the next chapter soon.

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Lucky,

Nynu🤗

That was such a beautiful heartwarming update, despite the sadness looming large, it had a feel good factor.

I wanted swasan to have some few good light hearted moments after confession,and impending doom to be evidently underlying too . Guess It worked.😛😛

I admire Annapurna, I had a feeling that she would not allow Sanskaar to choose and being a mother, who knows her son very well, she let him go to the one he loves, being aware of the transience of their love story. She rightly guessed that their few moments of togetherness would help him facing a life without him (though what their future holds is known only to you at this point😊 ). Durga Prasad- if it were a game of chess (well, he does treat life to be one) he was checkmated by Annapurna in the very first move, quickest game ever.

Ap in show was such a biased one .. 😡Here I wanted her to be in gang of Swasan and she always knew which side she was gonna take but didn't expect DP will bring up such kind of situation ..So when it came down to her son another in her took charge overpowering wife ..and DP definitely needed someone to cross him and like you rightly put ' checkmate'

Swara and Sanskaar - I love them here (I love them most of the times and in almost all avatars, except for a few rare ones, where their characterisation leaves me disgusted, guess you understand which ones I refer to). Anyway, coming back, here I like their bravery and acceptance of fate and life, their willingness to accept each other, warts and all, yet being practical about it. As Swara said, she had always loved Sanskaar, the Maheshwari tag made no difference to her, in fact it was the tag in the first place which had caused her such heart break.

Swara and Sanskaar .. Though Swara clearly made peace with fact , Sanskaar still is trying to ..though he accepted the truth.you rightly said about 'Maheswari tag'. That was cause for first rift between them . Though Sanskaar was sure it wouldn't bother swara ..yet the words of his dad left him restless. I wanted them to be strong and fight together, yet not to have any wrong notions.

Reading Fanaa, gives me hope, that one should not stop dreaming, however heartbroken some dreams make you, however unfair life seems, sometimes the most impossible dreams come true in the most unimaginable way making our lives beautiful and worthwhile.

These lines of yours made my day😛 . I have learnt few lessons too via Fanaa. How the stories we write make us more wiser and gives a chance for introspection as well ..that's one good part of writing.😛😛, infact best part I guess .. Becoming better and wiser via stories

And for that I have to thank you, for being you, for writing and sharing with us and for giving us Fanaa. and Fida (I like it the most and you know why😳)

Rules are being broke here .😲.😊 Suuny boy will not be happy .Fanaa and fida are fav of my lot too .. and I always feel my best narration was Fidaa😊, the flow .. that's one story of mine .. I always go back and read😉 and wonder wow ..I wrote this😆😆😆 and Yes I know why its your fav😉😳

love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: Nishap499

"Yar tum ladkiyan bahut emotional hoti ho..."!! This brought back so many memories😳. Their kiss was a bliss! Lucky plz tell me Swara is not going to die. Plz, Plz!! Sanskar will break down totally and me as well. Seriously Lucky Sad Ending haunts me like a nightmare and this is my one of the most favourite story! I would not be able to handle this. Nevermind the story is yours and I m sure you gonna give it the best ending! Hope to read the next chapter soon.

Originally posted by: Kaveetha

Lucky dear,

This soo emotional & heart touching.last few chapters brought tears in to my eyes. 😭 early in the morning i was crying like anything while & after reading this. I don't know what to say. I'm sharing my feelings after composing a lot.

How rudely destiny had played with their life. This is not fair. They don't deserve this. And swara.. She is full of life. She doesn't deserve this. What will happen to sanskaar after her death. I can't imagine about his state. She is his everything. Can't you plz save swara. 😕 I can't see them like this. 🥺

Lucky dear, sorry for the short comment. I thought to res this but again felt it's better to share my ideas rather than without unressing it. Cause don't know when will i get time to comehere again. So pardon me for the mistakes. Will surely try to catch up 'untamed' as soon as possible.

Want to say one thing dear, You have a great ability of writing emotional scenes to touch the depth of readers hearts. And i love it a lot. Wish you get all the love & success in future.

With love,

Kavi

I badly miss swasan, fabulous swasan writers and you all swasanians. 😭 Love you all. ❤️

Originally posted by: kojagorimalik

I have become so emotional after reading this story lucky dii this might be one book which makes me emotional and so vulnerable ...
For the whole book I do feel bad for swara and sanskar but the worst I feel for Annapurna ...because being a fierce and protective mother she is helplessly seeing her son breaking piece by piece and she could do nothing to keep him protected and safe