SwaSan TS: Shattered Hearts (final part 3 updated on pg 1)

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Finally sanskar done it with his own style 😉
Superb ending
I loved this ts alot
Everything was perfect
Swasan 😳 nothing to say because they need no words to show how they are lovely 😳
Thanks for pm which finally i got it from you 😆

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Vini224

@Vini224

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Awesome ending.

Swasan's love and care for each other is amazing.

The best part was Swara's promise to Sanskar.

How I wish we get something like that in the show.

Loved your story a lot.

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Lovely ending to a gripping os wish we saw this magic in the show...

Loved it...

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Dear Jessica,

That was a very beautifully written story and you have managed to perfectly capture Swara and Sanskaar's emotions and actions.

Sanskaar was right in getting angry with Swara but the way he made her understand his anger was so admirable - he tells her that he does love her yet goes to show how he felt when she jumped into situations without thinking what would befall him if she got harmed.

That small conversation between Ragini and Swara where Ragini assumes that Swara is worried about Uttara does bring home the truth - Swara had always put Sanskaar second in her priorities she took him a little too granted. Her resolve to change that situation was good and even better was that she decided to stay true to her promise to Sanskaar rather than try hunting him down when all her calls went unanswered.

And Sanskaar did resolve the dilemma so well - there is just no way the serial would show something similar😭

BTW - in the introduction you mentioned that you were not a writer😕 - please this is outstanding - I would love to read more of your writings.

love,

Nyna

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jess_27

@jess_27

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Amreee
Though being restless swara kept sanskars promise wIth full faith on him was the best part...
Thanks for making sanskar solving the situation unlike the show...they just mess up by rushing n forcibly involving superwomen in every situation..
Over all loved ur whole story...the ending was cute..

im so glad that you liked the story... i always wish to see sanskar's involvement but these ppl only believe in giving all the credit to swaragini, all the time.. so i tried to make this one different...

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jess_27

@jess_27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408
Love it love it love it love it love it love it...

thank you so much... ur love for the story really means a lot...:D

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jess_27

@jess_27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha
Superb ending :)
Loved it :)

thank you so much dear...:D

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jess_27

@jess_27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: SwathyS
I loved this sanskar😊

me too.. i always love seeing sanskar in action...:D

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jess_27

@jess_27

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Sujayricky
Finally sanskar done it with his own style 😉
Superb ending
I loved this ts alot
Everything was perfect
Swasan 😳 nothing to say because they need no words to show how they are lovely 😳
Thanks for pm which finally i got it from you 😆

heyy... when sanskar is in action, he does everything in style...

surely swasan need no words to describe their intensity and charm...

i was late wid the PMs, and sent them finally..:P

thank you so much for reading and appreciating this story.. really means a lot..:D

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jess_27

@jess_27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: Vini224
Awesome ending.
Swasan's love and care for each other is amazing.
The best part was Swara's promise to Sanskar.
How I wish we get something like that in the show.
Loved your story a lot.

thank you so much.. im so glad you liked it...

we can only wish that we get something like this in the show, though it is quite unlikely...