SwaSan TS: Shattered Hearts (final part 3 updated on pg 1) - Page 7

Originally posted by: raaz19

Lovely ending to a gripping os wish we saw this magic in the show...

Loved it...

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Amazing update..loved it...

Talia

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Jessica,

That was a very beautifully written story and you have managed to perfectly capture Swara and Sanskaar's emotions and actions.

Sanskaar was right in getting angry with Swara but the way he made her understand his anger was so admirable - he tells her that he does love her yet goes to show how he felt when she jumped into situations without thinking what would befall him if she got harmed.

That small conversation between Ragini and Swara where Ragini assumes that Swara is worried about Uttara does bring home the truth - Swara had always put Sanskaar second in her priorities she took him a little too granted. Her resolve to change that situation was good and even better was that she decided to stay true to her promise to Sanskaar rather than try hunting him down when all her calls went unanswered.

And Sanskaar did resolve the dilemma so well - there is just no way the serial would show something similar😭

BTW - in the introduction you mentioned that you were not a writer😕 - please this is outstanding - I would love to read more of your writings.

love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hi dear Jessica.😊
Read all the 3 parts together. Loved it so much. Sanskar's anger towards Swara for hiding the truth was justified. But loved the way he made her understand the reason of his anger. Then after Rajat-Swara's convo when Ragini asked Swara that whether she was tensed for Uttara, then only Swara realized that she always thought about the priorities her maa-baba, sister, her family and Sanskar's family. But she always took Sanskar as her second priority and sometimes takes him as granted. This was a sad truth. Then her promise to change the situation was good. So she decided to say true to her promise to Sanskar and decided to stay at home in spite of her phone call to Sanskar remained unanswered. She finally realized that how much tensed Sanskar gets when she gets hurt, when she saw him hurt.
Just loved the concept of this TS so much. I don't know that why the CV's r bringing Swara's ML track instead of showing us something beautiful like the concept of this TS.
With love.
Aheli.

Originally posted by: jess_27

seriously nyna, thank you so much for the appreciation..it really means a lot.. being a non-writer i was in a dilemma whether to write or not, but ur praises really encourage me to write more..

love

Jessica

Originally posted by: jess_27

hiii Aheli... thank you so much for reading and liking the story...

this was exactly want i wanted to convey... how swara always put sanskar 2nd in her priority list, then her realisation, and finally repenting for her mistake by making the promise to him...

i also think, its OK to sometime not make Swara the ultimate savior... afterall she is also human..!

i too wish the CVs postpone the ML track for a bit, and let their bond develop stronger before the separation... but we can only hope for that...

love

Jessica