SwaSan TS: Shattered Hearts (final part 3 updated on pg 1) - Page 3

Very well written. Can totally imagine the scenario whilst reading the dialogues. I was hoping the cvs show the same thing in the show. A little disappointment and anger from Sanskaar's side would be nice. Had Swara not told Ragini about the kidnap, things would have been different, but she told her rather than sharing it with Sanskaar which again puts a question mark on her trust towards him. I know the cvs won't show anything from Sanskaar's side, rather he would be "proud" to have such a daring wife 😳.

Again, really enjoyed the two parts you posted. :)

Aww Jessica this was also a good update..😊

Awesome.. You have written it beautifully.. 👍🏼

Hello Jessica.. This is Amreen.

Read both parts 2gethr.
Its awsm.
Sanskar's anger & pain yet his love 2wds swara thts beautiful.
Love it.
P.s-can i say,i lv it whn sanskar gv angry glare 2 ragini whn she talk btw thm also said his narazgi to swara as she share it with ragz instead of him.&also thnks instead of swaragini u gv a small sanlak moment.thts better than behena pyar.

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Hey Jessica it was a perfect update 👏
Seriously i loved it
Sanlak scene was nice
And swasan was lovely
Finally sanskar will handle rajat chapter
I hope cv's will also show the same in the show
Update soon


P.s- I known i have told you pm me but i am a pure stalker so sometimes i read stories without pm's also 😆

Originally posted by: Helee

part 2 is also as good as part 1. sanskar in action...I can't wait to see what he will do to rajat. sanlak bond was good too and swasan to swasan hi hai... 😳 update soon.

Originally posted by: sneharay

Lovely Update..

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Superb :)

Read both the parts :)

Awesome :)

Beautifully written :)

Update soon :)

PM me :)

Originally posted by: Fari_15

Very well written. Can totally imagine the scenario whilst reading the dialogues. I was hoping the cvs show the same thing in the show. A little disappointment and anger from Sanskaar's side would be nice. Had Swara not told Ragini about the kidnap, things would have been different, but she told her rather than sharing it with Sanskaar which again puts a question mark on her trust towards him. I know the cvs won't show anything from Sanskaar's side, rather he would be "proud" to have such a daring wife 😳.

Again, really enjoyed the two parts you posted. :)