SwaSan TS: Shattered Hearts (final part 3 updated on pg 1)

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jess_27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Asad08
Love it awesome continue soon

Thank you so much.. i will be putting up the final chapter very very soon.. today itself..

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Ginny potter

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: jess_27

im glad you like the sanlak bond.. i somehow find it way more real than swaragini bond.. infact u will not see swara confiding in ragini in any of the chapters.. just small conversations with her.. thats it..

actually i want to focus more on how swasan react, so i guess you'll be disappointed a bit, as i wont be elaborating as to how sanskar trapped rajat.. but i do hope that you like the final part.. im still in the writing process.. but will hopefully upload by tomorrow morning..

yes I too like sanlak bond more than swaragini bond and I m glad that we won't have swaragini here. 😃 well I won't be disappointed at all if it is swasan's plans or reactions. I can't be disappointed with swasan. 😳 infect I will love it more because they are together. 😊

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jess_27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

so i have finally completed the story.. i hope you all like the last part..

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BarkhaSingh123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Last part was as well nice

Rajat was as usual😡

Sanlak-😛

And then ur statement that sansku bus aan of every girls dreams was soo true 😳 after all we all want him ..😳😆

Swasan care for each other was 😛

👏 the concept of the story was nice as well were SR are no superwomen 😕😉

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Ginny potter

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

beautiful end of beautiful story. 😳 and as I said I m not disappointed infect I loved it. in first chapter u had beautifully described sanskar's love for swara and in last one u described swara's love for sanskar... 😳 the epic moment was when swara realized sanskar's pain. sanskar is indeed dream boy of every girl. the whole story is amazing. 👏 plz do write in future. 😊

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jess_27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1
Last part was as well nice
Rajat was as usual😡
Sanlak-😛
And then ur statement that sansku bus aan of every girls dreams was soo true 😳 after all we all want him ..😳😆
Swasan care for each other was 😛

👏 the concept of the story was nice as well were SR are no superwomen 😕😉

thank you so must for reding and liking this story..

sanskar is indeed the dream man... and i cudnt help but show sanlak bonding.. coz i simply love them...

in the show.. all missions are solved by the superwomen swaragini.. but i wanted it to be different here.. so i dint want swara to be involved at all in the mess.. instead just obey sanskar.. and in the process realising intensity of his love for her..

thank you again for your appreciation.. it is really encouraging for a new writer like me..

love

Jessica

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jess_27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Helee
beautiful end of beautiful story. 😳 and as I said I m not disappointed infect I loved it. in first chapter u had beautifully described sanskar's love for swara and in last one u described swara's love for sanskar... 😳 the epic moment was when swara realized sanskar's pain. sanskar is indeed dream boy of every girl. the whole story is amazing. 👏 plz do write in future. 😊

you caught the essence perfectly.. the entire journey of sanskar's love to swara's love... sanskar is perfect in all aspects and indeed he is a dream man for any girl...

swara had to realise how sanskar has changed his life and how now its high time she understands his pains...

thank you so much for your encouraging words... im so glad that you arnt disappointed..

love

Jessica