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Dearest Shruti,

I would like to once again say sorry for the late comment and since i know you would understand i will stop with just one for my sake and not fill the pages with my apologies.

Chapter 26

You know when you get so invested in an story , it really make you feel so many emotions when you read chapter like 26 and that was my case, if i hadnt read the next one by now, i wouldnt have been able to express my thought on this chapter with clear mind as most of my words to would be jumbled words our of sheer sadness.

Now that i have read the next one, my mind is even ready to find the awesome moments in chapter 26 and appreciate it. Let start with part 1 shall we, it was a perfect start, Sanskar getting the honour he so deserves , so did Pawan and Swara. And i totally loved how Swara and Sanskar both had eyes on each other only.

You know in DK i really appreciate Janki so much more than Sharmistha. Her acts and the way she handles the situation make me admire her more , first i used to admire AP when she stood up to kaveri and stood beside Sanskar. Now i admire Janki for her thoughtful way of dealing with Swara . And i was truly surprised that the whole family hoped Sanskar would ask for Swara hand . If only Swara let Sanskar ask his father for her hand, but if she did i wouldnt have gotten the awesome proposal in chapter 27 .So i take this angst for now with patience not really but because i already know everything will work out in the end.

You know how much i can find all the scene which provided angst in the when i read it the first time, now provide me with so much awesome and poigant moments. I love part 2. The first time i read it i was like why did Janki enter this moment . But not now, i truly liked Sanskar going as far as the extent to meet Swara. I would have hated the guy who asked for Swara hand ,but since he backed off now. I am going to let it slide as well.

And i am back to admire AP in the last part, I am so glad she understood Sanskar.. And you did end it in a cliffhanger that scared me the most, especially thorowing line like War and how impossible it is for Shekhar to go back on his word. Since everything worked out fine later. I have to say i really liked part 3 too. Since Sanskar got to know about it and we all know how he reacted after hearing it..While chapter 26 did made me sad the first time i read it , when i read it again to give my comment , i really enjoyed reading it. I think my love for Swara and Sanskar made it impossible for me not to be sad about the chapter the first time. You are really an awesome writer Shruti..Will comment on my favourite chapter of DK asap. I want to give it an detailed comment as well since the chapter deserves it so very much.

Love

Nita