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Posted: 9 years ago
yayyy...Sanskar finally proposed..

Hello Shruti dear,

I don't have any words to describe my feelings right now..🤗 All I could say is please accept a big wala bear hug from my side..😊

No words and no analysis for chap 27 dear..I don't know where to start, and I'm afraid if I start I'll somehow miss some emotions..😔 So sorry for that..

Bye and take care..😊 Stay blessed and be happy.

Thanks,
Geetha.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chap 27
Awww Shru love u love u love u girl n lots n lots of hugs. I m like speechless dont know what to say. Where to start just dont know okay let me relax a liitle breath in breath out ...
First - I m so stunned how boldly Sanskar asked for Swara's hand. I was not prepared for this n it feels so good to read it.
second - Ragini's behaviour is so disgusting n no shame in her
Third - Saamvant backed out himself that was relieving
Four Uttara n Pawan making fun of swasan. I loved it very much


The most imp part if this update - Swasan confession n their intimacy Oh my dear Shru you made us dead once again. I was reading n smiling n laughing while looking at my phone Thank God I did nt read it in office otherwise people would have think I have gone mad. I love u n ur writing n definitely will wait for your book n u promise me you will soon write it...
Lots of love n blessings n keep writing n entertaining us but besides that do most imp thing please take care of yourself
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sree8410

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Shruti 🤗

Sree 🤗

Sorry for the delayed unresing. Been a bit busy, but since we have already discussed this through the PM I'll copy paste it here.

No sorry needed hon- I was grateful for the PM and am equally so for the detailed comment here. You have been such a pillar of support for DK and always give so much time to it- mmmwah!

I won't say that I'm sad with the turn of events in this chapter as with DK nothing goes the easy way. You always choose the way filled with stones and thrones for them for reasons unknown to me. But I must say maybe that's what is keeping me hooked on to this one.

I don't like easy- easy means pedestrian to me in writing and if something is worth writing about and reading, it can't have been an "easy" achievement for the character being represented I feel in this context 😃

So coming to the beginning the scene of Sanskar on Veer lighting the torch was just spectacular. The only thing he wanted at that moment was to see his princess and as usual she was proud of his achievement.

The torch was last lit by DP is this a hint to who will rule next or is it that he inherited more of his Bade Baba Sa's qualities?

Glad you liked the torch ceremony. As for what it really indicates, all I'll say is that I very deliberately gave that hint there as it might have a bearing on things to come later but as ever perhaps in a slightly less than obvious way 😉.

DP's public apology was worth it. Sanskar deserved this one more. Pawan has been raised to a new rank thats nice. Now he is also a mini Saamvant.👏 Uttara must be over the stars and clouds hearing this. Swara was also acknowledged here as a true Rajput princess who saved their beloved Hero and herself from that 🤬. Sujatha had to be ashamed of her actions here. Because of her the small chance her son had to finally win his love is lost (But as we know Sanskar will not accept defeat, he will either make her open the windows or break the door. No way she can escape from him now that he knows that she also feels something for him - not love but something is better than nothing right)

DP is determined to make amends as he should. 😆 I am sure Uttara was pleased. Sujata isn't so far thinking- she is rather short sighted. Absolutely right about Sanskaar- I kept telling everyone to trust in my Sanskaar if no one else. As you say, he would use the window, door, whatever he has to to get to his Princess 😳

Janki again proved to be a true diplomat and queen. I would support her decision to get Swara married to anyone other than Sanskar as Sujatha has clearly said that she will not accept this relation. No mother would want to push her child into fire knowing what awaits there.

I am glad you see Janaki as you do- she is a diplomat and a queen for sure. As I often say, in different ways she has steel like Annapurna has.

Can someone please inform the Gadodias that he has offered and was rejected by their own special child as she didn't want him to put things right.😡 He shouldn't have asked her first. He should have asked her father directly. Foolish girl is spoiling everything the guy is working hard for.

To be honest, there is little point telling these people anything in this moment. Swara- as she has herself convinced for the wrong decision she cannot be of any help.

Ranjit - add me to the haters list. I hate him even if he is an angel. How dare he want to marry Sanskar's Swara? 😡 Lets bring Kavya and get him married to her instead.

😆 Ranjit bechara. Serious hate came his way. No no, Kavya nahi 😆. He can go back to Urvashi!

Uttara trying hard to escape from her mother, who is busy exibitting her to the prospective groom's parents. Poor thing. And Sanskar doesn't understand she is not just signalling him but also they guy who is standing next to him - Her Pawan😳 . No wonder he wants to run away if she keeps staring questions are bound to be asked and for a guy who has sworn to not fall in love it would be

😆😆 Exactly- it's like- she isn't sending you signals Sanskaar 😆. Poor Pawan!

🤗🤗 this is for the window. Loved it and you for giving me one that too now. I loved his concern and even more understood that she wanted to be in his arms and gently took her in as if trying to look around. Loved it

Awww- knew the window thing would make you super happy! 😃 Couldn't dedicate to you either as it would be a spoiler then 😊

Finally madam has confessed to at least Janki maa that she is in love with him and she can't be with anyone else other than him. Good for her. But I don't want her to decide to sacrifice her love for clearing her family reputation or burden. Please.

I think 27 answers this one 😉

Sanskar has also informed AP regarding his intentions to marry her. Though now its escalated to a big problem as her father had already given his word to that "Ranjit" guy. I hate him. I'm sure this time my prince will put up a big fight to win his love.

Awaiting 27 and I'm sure this will bring more surprises. The question is where they will be good surprises or bad. Waiting and watching is my option so I'm going to do that. I'm extremely happy with 26.

I think I already know by the interim reaction to 27 that you think the surprises there good 😉. This answers the PS below as well I think 😃. And thank you for being happy even with 26 and recognising its role in the overall story 😃

Love

Sree


P.S. Correct me if I'm wrong but I feel this time in 27 I might get a positive response from Swara which will help Sanskar to fight for her.


Dearest Sree

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With lots of love,
Shru xoxo

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi tootiefrootie11...this is Amreen ...
I really liked both the chapters ( 26&27)...swra and sanskara confession was very brilliantly written...I loved it..
I am sorry to read these two chapters before than the previous ones as I just joined the forum and didn't knew about it...but will surely read your amazing story...
And haan u r really a very good writer...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: krishuuu

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Shuru jaan...😃😭

Talia dearest 🤗

Oh nooo- sad faces? But challo I know 27 changed all that 😉

After giving us sooo much happiness with chapter 25...i must say im heart broken after reading 26...part1 of it was sooo elating😛..mood lifter n after that smile was wiped off from my face...nooo..😭😭my sansku why happiness never reaches him completely...but any ways it was masterfully conceptualized...⭐️👏

This is the journey- the heartbreaking bits make the ecstasy that much more intense no? 😊 But thank you for still appreciating the conceptualisation 😃

Whole part 1 ..torching of mahespur light n honouring ceremony of sansku..pawan n swara was mind blowing...👏.n that feeling of proudness in swasan eyes n that killer smile by sansku was enough for me to survive the remaining parts...😉

Ahhh I knew you would like those bits and the SwaSan interaction even if only small moments 😃

Best part was pawan becoming minor samvaant...he owns a land too.. i think he should settle down in life now..with ???we all know...uttara would be dancing after these annoucements by Dp...👏😊

😆 Uttara would love your suggestion but Pawan for now would run in the other direction 😆

Swara's bravery was aknowledged ..felt soo good n these stupid people are thinking still about that shame...fools..well some were extremely happy n few of them jealous..hah serve them right...👏alteast she got her honor back...😃

That's our society for you- a woman is so much more harshly judged and there is this very innate chauvinistic thinking which is actually worse employed by women against other women often enough

N the whole gadodia conversation was driving me crazy...🤢why cant they just discuss these matters with Dp...one matter was going to be solved by sending armies n retreving their lands back..but about swasan marriage...???why u all didnot even try...ahhh im angry...😡

They are all letting their egos, well mainly Shekhar, run things and since the Ragini mess it made it worse but I hope the convolution made sense given 27?

Loved sansku desperation just to see swara..but to his utter disappointment she was not well..so not attended the lunch feast..but sansku u felt fishy seeing gadodia's talking with saamvant ranjit...follow ur gut instinct..😕 do something...😕

Sansku sneeking in swara room was soo cute😳...they hardly talked n were interupted by janki...😭whywomen cant u come after some time...😡 but she didnot came alone..she brought the worst news for swasan...but happy that swara retaliated n confessed she love sansku...hoping she maintain that till end.n do not become mahaan plzzz...😡 cried soo much to see her in pain...

Sanskaar was indeed desperate to see his Princess and make sure for himself she was ok which of course she isn't . Neither of them is as they cannot be in their present situation . As for the interruption I felt that it had to happen at that point but I hope you see how I made it come good after 😉

Part 3 was good..sansku 😊wearing turban which swara selected..but his happiness was short lived ..he got to here worst news of swara's wedding getting fixed with ranjit..😡..isomehow remember villain ranjit by reading this name...well atleast he didnot hide his feeling from annapoorna...plzzz help swasan ..anyone...ram uncle..queen g...plzz koi to inki madat karo...

😆 Oh poor Ranjit- seriously the man got serious amounts of hate on this thread 😲😆. Villain Ranjit really made me crack up- you are awesome! I really like my leads to sweat it and do things for themselves too instead of giving them easy options so you have seen what I did 😉


Shuru tum kch karo...😃😳 kch magic karo...😭

Jaldi update karo plzzz...😕

Waiting..

Hope the wait was worth it and abh tussi batado ke whether I did magic or not!!! 😉

Lots of love😳
Talia


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Shru xoxo

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: piccola1

What a powerfully expressed #26, Shru! This was superb!⭐️ Hope you've recovered well and truly! Congrats on the new thread ! Please go on and create a 5th and more, if you possibly can, coz am loving DK, and so look forward to reading it again.

Am zapped at the sheer rawness of the emotions you evoke here..the tremendous pride and joy, followed by the sharp frustration of a meeting left incomplete and then the agony at the end...I hurt for both Swara and Sanskaar.😭

My dearest sweet Pic 🤗
I so love you! I had to start with that as your comments always stun me with their depth of understanding and the way you express your take so lucidly! Also before I forget- this response is so late its rude but I needed to make a reasoned response and you know my overall state at the moment right? Sorry!!!
And awww- honestly the love for DK by you all makes me feel very humbled and grateful! I was so relieved that you took 26 the way you did as of course it was an angsty chapter and those tend to get difficult reactions which is totally understandable 😃

So life's getting more complicated and situations more convoluted for our golden couple.This one is gonna take a good amount of unravelling! And time is short, the challenges increasing and a seemingly unresolvable problem is at hand. 😕

I don't like "easy" as you know and so yes things HAD to get tricky and convoluted and messy before I set to unravel 😉 To me nothing is unresolvable. We may not like the resolution but there has to be some way. Hopefully my way wasn't too bad 😊

Coming to what's ferreting away at my edgy nerves...Janaki Ma has been, so far, portrayed as a mother who has loved Swara far more than her own child. So why am I increasingly suspicious of her and scared of her power? Is she truly on Swara's side? Or is she seeking ways and means of her own revenge against Sharmishtha..through ruining her child? ❓I may be completely at a tangent here...but today, the speed with which she has maneuvered Swara's alliance with an old (YES!) and already married (ok Widowed) guy, makes me apprehensive of her real intent..Also she seemed to be deliberately creating fear in the minds of Swara and her parents, even after Swara had been so definitely glorified by the Rana. So is Janaki all what she seems? Or is she at heart, what Ragini has been - vindictive, jealous and malevolent behind a facade of so much goodness?😲😒

Ohhh this was so interesting. You suspect Janaki of being grey/ negative? Well we know that in DK literally (except for SwaSan) the answer to the "who dunnit" question's answer could lie anywhere so hmmm who knows? You have to judge whether I am throwing another one of my various red herrings I like to throw out here or whether you are right. One perspective is that Janaki is as you say. The other is that she has been shown from the start I think of being truly political queen- I always said that in different ways she has a steel core like Annapurna. Rajput queens who can take some very difficult decisions if needed and stand firm. Did you see the old film Meera by Gulzar? Hema Malini one? Krishna's mother in that, Meera's aunty? She knew her daughter would have to die for honour and she let it happen and never flinched but she wasn't "negative" (as an aside the whole thing was fallacious as Krishna was not apparently a daughter of that house, she was a daughter in law- the film relied on artistic licence like I often do with historical fact in DK 😊). It is that sort of characterisation that personally fascinates me. But on the other hand, Janaki could be the opposite. However perhaps 27 might swap perceptive again- I so enjoy that about DK, to see if different chapters bring out different facets 😉😃

My heart goes out to Swara. 😭She is now truly a damsel in distress - needing her valiant prince, her own Knight in Shining Armour to get her out of her misery. And come he did! But what a anti-climax to have to rush out through the window. And without exchanging a hug, or even a word!

Ahhh I am cruel 😈. When everyone expects a full fledged romantic interlude I don't like it so I deprived them and you all too 😃

So our valiant Knight on his valiant steed has to go to Baadiganj (I like that name😆😆) and far away from his Princess Despite all the love and kudos he has got from his uncle (wanna hug DP for doing that, and for recognizing Pawan, and oh..a bigger hug for honouring Swara!) , he is now so deeply worried. He couldnt make things right at all, at least for now. He has tried and failed to get AP's support and now has to wade through the misery of the alliance declaration that can drag his kingdom into further conflict. Plus he has not been able to speak to his Princess either..Things are dark indeed,😲

I had chosen the names to fit with the era and setting but wanted to keep link to the show for obvious reasons too- thanks for liking it!! Totally right- things have turned dark indeed after those little moments of lightness and reward! DK has its share of darkness not just in the title but in its plot line too after all

But he wouldnt be our DK if he didnt break through this darkness and come out victorious. And she wouldnt be the Princess we love, if she didnt brave her way through her own miserable challenges. So am waiting for more drama to unfold, more emotions to hit the roof, more conspiracies, more murky dealings (oh yes..we still dont know the insider..), more back stabbing (our original one ..Ragini, is still hovering and jealous and dangerous), more confusion and MUs and a lot more ardent angst among our duo and a lot of suspense on who exactly has been behind it all! The list is endless...Aadarsh (cause he was always sidelined), or Lakshya (he may be foolish, but still dangerous), Kaveri (manipulating someone powerful?), someone amongst the Saawants, AP, DP?😆😆😆 You've given us a thriller here! Loving it all - the thrills, the romance and the superb etching of the characters. Holding my breath for the next!

I am so in awe of the approach you took here 😳😳 How you really bought into the various elements and it made my heart so glad you are really invested in all the angles- the romance, the bravery and feats and overcoming of odds and the suspense angles with all their attendant confusions and solutions that I am trying very hard to balance! Thank you so much again Pic!! I am so so happy you managed to make so much of 26!!!

🤗Love ya!

Love ya too hon 🤗

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Tonnes of love,
Shru xoxo

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Red.orchid

Shruti congrats for new thread


Thanks a lot Sadhana 😃
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Dear Nalini 🤗

Yesternight when I stumbled over this new thread on the main forum I thought that you were back in good health. But it's quite sad that it's not so and you are yet in the process of recovering, I hope and pray that you get there soon. I suggest again that you take enough rest and care before you start on the next part, but all the same I doubt if you would do that. You are really stubborn sometimes. Or all the times when it comes to Swasan. Yet I would appeal to you again. Please take care of yourself.

Thanks ever so much Nalini, the viral has departed but as I tore muscles out in my rib, it will take time to heal. Despite the pain it doesn't stop "normal" functioning but forces me to be slower than I like and often the pain is an annoyance. I have tried to take it easy but I am the obsessive sort and with DK that is at its highest level ever I am afraid. As for stubbornness - guilty as charged I am afraid exactly like you said 😆 but I will try to be careful. Mmmwah for the concern 🤗

Coming to this yet another twist in the tale, I should accept that besides all the guessing I could do, this was so totally unexpected to me. I was thoroughly appalled by the turn of events. I got quite emotional reading through the last part that I couldn't even bring tears to my eyes. An altogether different kind of pain that was.

I know you suffered with Chapter 26, as did some others but what to do, I have an idea of how I really want this tale told- and unfortunately it includes its share of real ups and downs and great joys and deep disappointments and little pleasures too 😕. I am sorry to have caused pain!

Some where I have read that the opposite of love is not hate but its the sense of feeling nothing. A hallowness so deep that deprives you of the sense of time, space and self. I don't know what you wanted to project from sanskar's perspective but what I have felt when he readied himself for the upcoming battle instead of taking steps to break the unwanted and unscrupulous alliance was an utter helplessness with such emptiness. He knew he would get caught into a whirlwind that would this turn him to dust if he stood with in the walls of the palace for one more minute, and what would a poor soul as his could do when he doesn't see that she is actually in love with him and even professing it to her step mother somewhere . He would go into self preservation as anyone would do. And I don't hold him responsible for this little misunderstanding and neither swara. Because I know they will get through this. Especially when Sanskar comes to know that swara is against it. Nothing would stop him from helping her out of it.

I couldn't agree more that the real antonym to love is not hate but actually it is indifference. But here, you need never fear. There will never be any lack of feeling of any form or sort between these two. No matter how much either may try or pretend, they will always feel the highest and most intense levels of any particular emotion for each other. I think when you thought he was readying himself for battle, I meant the actual war to come but actually I was referring to his battle for her, it was simply an analogy for what he was going to do.

But really, I'm much intrigued by the role janaki is yet to play. I see her disturbed and pained. There are two shades in her unlike sharmishta. I think janaki relates more to dadi in the original saga. So I wouldn't be much surprised if she chooses to manipulate sharmishta and swara. But I also hope not.

Sharmishta is a wife by love. She loves and cares for people here. She is less influenced by the politics of the state . And janaki has a responsibility on both the fronts. So she plays things wisely even if not manipulatively. And what also caught my attention is that sharmishta as an all in all powerful character hasn't yet been unveiled totally here. I guess that is yet to happen if janaki is to choose to go ahead with this alliance. I don't fear anything drastic to happen between swara and Sanskar as I know that no matter what the nature by some colossal accident will always make sure that they are brought together. All I'm so interested in how the other characters play into this accident.

You are very right in that Janaki is the clear queen here- all her life she has been a stateswoman even more so than a wife or perhaps because she was an "unwanted" wife and of real noble blood from a stern house she played politician so effectively it is now inbred in her. I also replied elsewhere that I tried to show Janaki the queen, able to take harsh decisions if needed, from the start. She did this with her own daughter when Lakshya cast her aside originally. I will maintain that in a different way, she has the same core as someone like Annapurna- resolute and strong. As to whether she will be like Dadi is in the show I am not sure. She has way more class. But also you will have to tell me how you see Janaki after 27 😃.

Oh and did you mention that pawan is going to be hit? By Sanskar? May be once. But I think that would be for stationing himself separately rather than making advances towards his sister. I think Sanskar would be really happy to have him as family and would vouch fir uttara's happiness than condemn him by standards of birth. I would love to read a whole part on that alliance. I would happily ship 'Para'. But they have to do one thing for me in return. Their duty towards their friends. And I believe that they wouldn't let me down their.

Oh no dear, please don't worry! The reference to Pawan being hit is a joke with some readers that as he keeps teasing Sanskaar so much and the Prince is well rather overcome, this friend is in for a (friendly) beating if he's not careful. 😆 As for Sanskaar's reaction to Pawan as a BIL I think there would be some real grappling with various issues here but I am not sure this will all be explored in DK as I feel that is almost a separate tale I fear I cannot include in the already detailed and convoluted world of DK. I shall definitely need a break after DK but let us see if and what I make of that story 😉

Swara is much too selfless here isn't she, though she denied the alliance and proclaimed her love to janaki. She has somehow gone into self denial and pity and wants live alone for her whole life. She so needs him to come up alive again. Only he can touch her heart and sooth her back to sanity. She is in such a turmoil. I just hope Sanskar would somehow get a clue as to the depth of her feelings. I just couldn't make myself up to watch her suffering like that.

Swara is very selfless yes, but she is also (I hope) not stupidly so in that she cannot help her wonderful and sweet nature- it makes her who she is- a genuine good and pure soul but her feelings for Sanskaar too are rather overwhelming. She would rather be single all her life if she thought it would help Sanskaar . I hope 27 is the answer to the rest of the implied questions and wishes there? And also that you suffering like Swara's will have had relief? 😉

An over all emotional chapter shruthi. I didn't know what to say initially. So I just sat back and imagined all the good things they had done in their lone times. I wish that this turmoil would come to an end as quickly as it can.

It was very much an angsty emotional chapter yes- a staple I felt of such a story as long as it isn't overdone or dragged and I hope I didn't fall into that trap! I am sorry to have caused turmoil but hope the end of that turmoil was made even more special due to this in itself?

But all in all, don't stress yourself over this. I promise that I won't burden you for the next one anytime soon. Take a week off if you can. From writing, though it's a stress buster, I'm sure you can find something more relaxing.

Awww- I don't like to make you all wait and hence after a 2.15 am finish last night the next instalment was delivered 😃. Thanks so much for all the care mmmsmmwah

Please do take care

Lots of love

N

Lots of love from me too,

Shru xoxo


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Originally posted by: muktai

HI SHRUTI...😊

FIRST OF ALL CONGRATULATIONS FOR FOURTH THREAD. TODAY I COMPLETED READING THIS STORY UPTO 26TH PART. SORRY FOR TAKING SO LONG.🥳

Dear Mukta 🤗 🤗

Thank you so much and even more so for the lovely words you have so kindly said in your comment! I am so pleased you are on board the DK ship to sail the waters which can be stormy and calm in varying degrees! And please don't apologise, I am just touched you took the time! I have a list of pending work to read, including yours, I will get to it all once I finish DK as it literally sucks up my every spare minute!
I SERIOUSLY DON'T HAVE ANY WORDS TO EXPLAIN HOW MUCH THIS JOURNEY OF 26 PARTS OF DK HAS BEEN AMAZING, THRILLING AND EXTREMLY BEAUTIFUL. THE WAY YOU CREATED THIS WORLD OF DK WITH YOUR EXTREMLY TALENTED WRITING AND CREATIVATY IS MARVELLOUS.
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BEING HISTORY LOVER I AM FOND OF STORIES WHICH ARE PLOTTED IN THE ERA OF KINGS, QUEENS,PRINCE AND PRINCESS AND HOW CAN WE FORGET VILLANS. THIS STORY WILL ALWAYS BE REALLY, REALLY SPECIAL IN THAT ASPECT WHERE YOU HAVE GIVEN EXACTLY WHAT I WANTED FROM SO LONG.
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SORRY FOR NOT REPLYING EARLIER AS LIFE HAS BEEN COMPLICATED OFFLATELY AND PERIOD FROM WHEN YOU HAVE STATED THIS HAS BEEN REALLY VERY TOUGH.
SO I APOLOGISE FOR THAT.

Your words and appreciation honestly make me feel slightly speechless and 😳. I don't quite know that I deserve such high praise but am touched and humbled by it nevertheless. My real reward is when someone so loves the story and your reaction to it, is such a wonderful feeling for me, I cannot describe it! I am particularly fascinated with period dramas and history too so am so glad the setting interests you:). I feel so much romance and mystery there that I felt such need to write something set in that era, even if it wasn't entirely a historically accurate account. As I said above, please don't apologise. I sincerely hope things ease up with whatever difficulties have plagued you- I will send virtual prayers your way and lots of positive energy.
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THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH FOR WRITING THIS STORY AND I'M SO VERY GLAD THAT YOU HAVE COPYRIGHTED IT AS INSPITE OF CONTINUOUS WARNNGS FROM WRITER SOME PEOPLE SHAMELESSLY GO FOR COPYING. I'LL SUGGEST YOU TO USE IT FOR REST OF YOUR WORK.
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I JUST WANT TO SAY SHRUTI YOU ARE ONE OF THE AMAZING AND TALENTED WRITER I HAVE EVER CAME ACROSS, WHOSE WORK, WRITING STYLES, CONCEPTULAISATIONS AND THE PASSION FOR WRITING IS SOMETHING THAT CAN'T BE EXPLAINED IN WORDS..SO I CAN ONLY DO THIS FOR YOU
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HAVE A NICE DAY AND PRAYERS FOR YOUR SPEEDY RECOVERY
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As mentioned above, this is such a nice thing to say, I am truly grateful and am beyond thrilled you love DK so much 😳😳😳. Please do keep reading and I hope I don't disappoint you going forward.l I look forward to your on-going views on what is left of the story and thank you again from the bottom of my heart. You made me feel very happy and valued! Loads of love and wishes always xoxo


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Shru🤗🤗

Congrats on new thread👏👏👏

Hello Lucky dearest 🤗

Thank you so much and for the comments below too!

This is sad yaar ..I mean this chapter left me with mixed emotions I am utterly feeling bad for our prince and princess.😭😭 so much in love and wronged by situations and what's wrong with this gadodias they are acting as if like they want to get rid of swara esp janaki ..why is she hell bent upon getting swara hitched to that old fellow😡😡😡 but you know what you brought out pain and misery a girls parents have to go through when faced with this kind of situations though swara did nothing other than being wronged by others how they have bow down before situations

I know, I know- this was a harrowing chapter in many ways, both to write and for you guys to read. But what to do, as a writer I feel I have to try to stay true to the way I see this big tale in my head and heart. I felt that despite the high drama what was happening was feasible in the situation I have sketched for them all. And yes of course lots of angst but . Exactly- women were always in a precarious position and marriage was always seen as the only "solution" so age or even other suitability in a political and compromising match wouldn't be a choice a girl would have. Actually still happens doesn't it? Parents yes, whether we like it or not and whether we agree or not with their decisions, have tough choices to make in those cases.

But so much happened in this chapter ..Let me start of with sanskaars awesome act in the beginning .⭐️.totally loved it👏 and how his eyes were looking out for his swara😳.and he thinks she doesnt love him😕 only if he knows and DP acknowledging efforts of sanskaar pawan and swara ..after all budda has got some sense left😆😆 but ruined..after that gadodia discussion 😡😡

Really glad you liked the torch ceremony sequence 😃. 😆 DP is indeed trying hard but yes the Gadodias spectacularly ruined things!

Sanskaar finally talked to AP only to know about the proposal of samvant ..I just hope nobody gives him wrong ideas about swara willing to go fo the match and I hope swara herself doesnt give in to that demand put forth by her parents😡under any situation..I so so hope ..I am getting weird ideas like this will go till mandap and then hero makes an entry😆😆 blame my filmi dimaag

Ah ha! You should know me better by now 😉 I hate predicable and have tried here to keep throwing curve balls so hope you liked the one thrown in 27 😉. I had been laughing when I read how you thought this was going to go the way you were worrying about 😃

👏👏 looking forward for the next one..brilliantly done like always😊⭐️

Thanks so much Lucky! So glad you appreciated it despite the angst 😳😃

Still recovering ??God I wish whatever caught you just leaves you off ...Get well soon😊

Amen to that

Lucky
😛



Replied in blue above dearest Lucky.

Lots of love,

Shru xoxo

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