DARK KNIGHT-A SwaSan FF-T4-DELETED-AN PG1- Creations-Pgs 98/9 - Page 13

Originally posted by: Saumya2102

Pheww.. Finally I managed to catch up with you!!

Okay so first of all.. introductions!! Hi Shruti myself Saumya. If I am ever asked for introduction, I would state I am a dreamer, a reader and a music lover! Your turn!

Sooo.. I got this Dark Knight FF of yours last week on Saturday when I was roaming in the Swaragini forum and that's how I got to reading this!

The story in the starting resembled quite very much to the show.. the difference being that the families here were royal and Janki was alive.. not to forget, Sanskar was in prision!! Ragini and Laksh ka rishtaa.. Laksh attracted towards Swara.. Swara and Laksh's alliance.. Ragini and Sanskar's plotting and planning against Swara.. Sanskar saving Swara from Ragini at the last moment

And then finally.. the part from where I started to loveee the story.. Sanskar 'kidnapping' Swara!! The main story started from here.. isn't it?? I loved how Sanskar cared for Swara and Swara being the sweetheart she is cared for him as well! This beautiful bond of this was one which I have read with all my heart and would cherish for a long time.

Then.. how can I not mention the first time SwaSan got attacked. Swara.. the girl who wouldn't even have killed a fly killed a man for Sanskar! And then the way she was hell worried for him and the way she cared for him and cured his wounds! The first spark of fire started from here. Love was ignited in their hearts after this incident.

The incident where they were attacked by that cheap man.. Devendra right?? Ohh godd!! The way he was beating Sanskar!! I have come to hate this name now! And then how can I not mention here that how Swara risked her dignity and self respect in order to protect Sanskar. Being a girl.. I completely understand how she would have felt and the disgust feeling she started to have for herself was completely natural. But the thing that caught my attention more was the priorities of Sanskar. He was going to catch that cheapster but just a word from Swara and he was by her side in a jiffy. The way he took her in his arms and the way he held her close to his heart.. it was overwhelming!! The way he healed her. He was by her side each and every time. Their nights spent together and all those beautiful moments spent there!! Sometimes I wish if the CVs would have shown 10% of what your ff is.. the show would have no. 1 trp!

That kiss!! That kisss!! Ohh it was more than beautiful! I wonder if I could find a word in the dictionary to describe that. I so so sooo love them and their chemistry!!

I really didn't want that moment to end.. but those Maheshwri people!! Wrong timers!! Anyway.. I really didn't want them to go back.. because if they would go back.. they would have to separate which I can't even imagine in my dreams! But as this writer had planned it all.. they went to the palaceand they separated! The love and longing they had for each other.. Even though their bodies were far away, but their soul had not left each other's side for even a second! Both of their mind were occupied with thoughts of each other.

And when Swara felt that she wanted to meet him.. she went to the stable.. and isn't that what Sanskar did as well?? They think alike!! Another sign of being soulmates!! But to be honest what happened after that was something I would never really like to forget. I read it some three four times you know! I really loved the way they lost control!! Ohh I wish this happens every time they meet!!

In update 26.. Sanskar's archery skills!! Goshh this man is just so perfect! The way he had eyes only for Swara and nothing else. And Swara's excitement on seeing Sanskar and his skills. I fall for these two in every update a little more!! I really feel dreadful for Swara. Alliance of a man who's soo old then her. That's the last thing any girl would wish to have on earth. Actually if it was even the last thing to get.. no girl would want that. Did Sanskar loose hope? I mean is he letting Swara go?? No way!! He has to do something. But actually I feel it's Swara's chance now. She would have to take a stand for herself and for SwaSan. She has to do something!!! And there goes my peaceful slumber!!

Please please please update asap and can I receive PMs please??

Love

Saumya

Originally posted by: nut-kut-86

umeed karti hoon aap yeh reply padne ke waqt healthy hongi. nahin hai tho pray karungi fast recovery k liye. ab aye update pe. awwe veer .hero horsie k liye hero rider.aur kitna cute hamare prince ko aappni princess ki appreciation hi chahiye thi. aur who hi haal swara ka tha.bechaari ragz jal bhun ke khak ho rahi thi .aur jaise pawan ko appreciate kiya gaya aha laga.kitna acha sanky ki nazar darwaze par aurswara ke liye.phir pawan ka chidana.uttara sanky se jawab maang rahi thi aur saath mein pawan se bhi.aur phir sanky ka swara ko milne ka tarika.wha wha..aur janki ke aate hi sanky ke aadmio ka chilana eshmrt..janki ka shi dekh kar samjhna aur andekha karna. samjhdar.aur ab yeh ranjit chauhan. swar ko gusse se kehne ka maan ho raha hai. aur mana karo sanky ko. ab bhugto.swar ne janki se keh diya ke who snky se pyaar karti hai. aur sanky ne ap se.ab dekhte hai yeh dono kya karti hai.aur blue tunic awwee main tho sanskaar ko imagine hi kar rahi hoon. .aur who dialogue ke sanky ne lucky ko swara se shaadi karne nahin di.uske liye who dukhi nahin hai.taaliyaan, taaliyaan,ab sanky ko baadi gunj se bhi badi ladai ladni hai all the best.. par agar jo yeh ranjit miyaan urvashi ke liye they tho swasan ke bich mein ku tapke. .chalo ohir milte hai

Originally posted by: Geethu_sweetie

Hey Shruti,

How r u??

Dear Geetha 🤗

I am getting steadily better thank you, how are you?

Painful update😭 Itni saari twists ek hi episode mein..😲maar daala tootie aapje humein😕

Awww- sorry!!! I was cruel in 26 no? But challo yeh bhi story ka dastoor hai and also tell me whether you forgive me after 27 😉

Part 1-Woh! what a part..I personally like,nah,love all kinds of battle field arts.. Archery is my favourite art😊 Sanskar and his skills.. He is killing me with all his skills man.. 😳Rana ji honoured all our heroes..👏Swara is no less than a hero..She has that valour in her..😃She made her parents proud but they cannot fully enjoy that pride because of the rumours..😒

Glad you loved part 1!! Archery is one of my favourite things too, along with fencing and sword fighting! I find such excitement in all forms of medieval battle skills! I wanted Swara included in the roll call of honours especially after what came before and what is to come yet 😊. The rumours yes- that is people for you, if they can gossip about Sita who else can be immune?

Part 2-I just want to kill that Saamvant Ranjit..😡 Ek khoon maaf kar do yaar(only in virtual world, I presume😉) He want to marry Swara,who is amaanath of Sanskar..Yo! He has guts man..

Ranjit 😆😆 I tell you, the amount of hate this man got even before he did anything I am surprised he isn't dead already 😆 And I don't think somehow you will need to commit murder, virtual or otherwise 😉

Well, of course the secret meeting of our SwaSan..😳But disturbed by Janaki..Yaar,why is she becoming kabaab me haddi??😕 The news she brought is also no less than a bomb though..😔 Swara finally confessed to Janaki..Now what will she do?? Swara's outburst was spot on..👏

The SwaSan meet was intended to whet the appetite and if it hadn't been Janaki it would have been someone else. At least she is mega discreet and covered up what could have been bad for Swara if her father found out 😊. You will have seen what happened so I won't say more here 😉

Part 3- What can I say yaar..No words..It's painful to see our Prince in pain😭 He diverted his mind towards battle,what about his heart??

Part 3 was the heightened angst yes to bring it full circle before 27

--Editing this post as a reply to previous thread post-- I'm fine..😊 Boss, Durga Prasad is trying his level best to set things right.. So, I have a hope to trust Ranaji..I agree different people,different perspectives.. So in politics we cannot trust anyone that easily.. We should keep an eye even on our close ones..

Sujatha is an impulsive person..She does the things on impulse not at all worrying about the result..I just hope she accept Swara whole-heartedly..--

Very acutely observed about both Durga Prasad and Sujata 👏👏. You will see what Sujata does about Swara as we go on 😃

Eagerly waiting for next update..😃

I hope 27 didn't disappoint you!

Bye and take care..😊

You too Geetha and speak to you again soon! 😃

Thanks,

Geetha.